The first part was just awfull, the renders very poor and the writing i don't even want to think about it, but at least there was the possibility of some hot kinks even if it did never lead to anything really interesting.
But that second part is just a little tease here and there and a lot of annoying talking without even anything interesting to read. I don't mind reading a good story even if there is no fuck, but well it has to be good at least.
In fact this game is just like if every sexy scene is handeled as completely independant, there is no progress, it's just do you want to get corrupted in that scene or not and then the game forget about it.
If there was some really hot scene it could be an ok fap game but for the moment it's just boring.
So don't try to make some story based VN if you don't master the writing, just make a set of fuck scenes with the minimum talking.