Having a link to your patreon hidden in the "internet" on a laptop isn't great. Having a patreon icon that does it is fine, but not something that looks like a game mechanic.
What is the point of the pistol and bullets if you can't shoot Simon Li?
The first part made sense, but when getting free roam around the club area, the MC could ask people of names he has never heard before it seems.
If you do something disliked, you can still talk to them again, like cumming in the Russian girl.
When you equip an item, having to close the item box and then click something and then maybe having it unequip and repeating is slightly annoying. Example would be equipping the photo in the lesbian apartment, click on one lady and then go to click on another.
I would probably recommend having a key that when you press it to show all things that can be interacted with for a second. Also the MC to say he is done with a room.
Could be nice to have a controls diary where it tells you keys to quick open things or equip, flash the screen, etc.
People will probably ask for a gallery at some point.
I liked the game, slightly janky sex animations and I think MC's face when he saw the lesbians kissing was funny. Hoping those creampies lead to something down the line.