RPGM Beyond the Edge [v1.7.7.4] [Re-boner Ocelot]

[Re-boner Ocelot]

One small bug I've encountered is that some times when the text appears in multiple parts in the same text box, as in the slow typing thing after a comma the text will work fine until the comma but will than automatically skip super fast to the next text box line. So you can't read it.

A good place to see the bug is the 1st conversation with the guard girl in the 1st camp. Pick "introduce your self carefully" and see the text.

You are the second person already who talks about that.
I was just trying to make the effect as if the girl wasn't letting you finish talking and interrupting you, but people don't seem to get it.

 

[QQP_Purple]

You are the second person already who talks about that.
I was just trying to make the effect as if the girl wasn't letting you finish talking and interrupting you, but people don't seem to get it.

Effect or no, right now it just looks like the game is glitching. All it does is leave me frustrated and feeling like I missed dialogue...

 

[Re-boner Ocelot]

Effect or no, right now it just looks like the game is glitching. All it does is leave me frustrated and feeling like I missed dialogue...

I'll try to make it more clear, it's no big deal. Thanks for the reply.

 

[QQP_Purple]

I'll try to make it more clear, it's no big deal. Thanks for the reply.

Than my work here is done. Mine was to report. What you choose to do or not do about it is your call.

Speaking of reporting I loaded up an old save, W'd through the childrens book of magic and got UncaughtTypeError: Cannot read property 'width' of null.

 

[sensei02]

Can I ask what your vision for the game is? Will the MC get to fuck any girls, or will it be mostly NTR?

 

[Re-boner Ocelot]

Can I ask what your vision for the game is? Will the MC get to fuck any girls, or will it be mostly NTR?

Like I already said, In my plans there are a bunch of "one night" events for the mc in the near future and a strong relationship with some of the main girls in the long future.

And I don't quite get what you are calling NTR. Basically, none of the girls on your path are in a relationship with you, so it already can't be considered as NTR. And considering the fact that the MC is rather good than bad and like all normal beings you won't rape any girl that you just defeat in a fight.

For now MC's passiveness may cause confusion, I agree, but in other hand I think that everyone just get too used to MC's that stupidly fucks everything that moves. When you watch porn or read hentai you basically watch other people fucking. So they NTR'd according to such logic, don't they?

Just in case, there is no motivation to insult in this response at all, I was just stating my point of view.

 

[Re-boner Ocelot]

If your game crashed at the moment after the dialogue with Lia and Patricia, please check your filepath to the game folder. If the folder names contains any spaces, that may be the cause of the problem. I'm still trying to figure it out, but if you have time, please check it.

 

[Dvnasty]

good renders, too few good rpg maker game thats isnt female mc and lose and get rape game.

 

[Kalel7]

Urk. I tried playing this. I liked the art. I liked the atmosphere. I liked the interface. I think you have the potential for a great game here! But... it's clear that it's written by a non-native English speaker, and trying to puzzle my way through the dialogue is at best awkward, but often painful.

I realize the focus is probably on expanding content, but I strongly suggest you get a native speaker to edit the writing, preferably soon because the longer you put it off, the more daunting the initial work will be.

 

[QQP_Purple]

Also how do i enter the bandit camp? The path is blocked off.

 

[sensei02]

Like I already said, In my plans there are a bunch of "one night" events for the mc in the near future and a strong relationship with some of the main girls in the long future.

And I don't quite get what you are calling NTR. Basically, none of the girls on your path are in a relationship with you, so it already can't be considered as NTR. And considering the fact that the MC is rather good than bad and like all normal beings you won't rape any girl that you just defeat in a fight.

For now MC's passiveness may cause confusion, I agree, but in other hand I think that everyone just get too used to MC's that stupidly fucks everything that moves. When you watch porn or read hentai you basically watch other people fucking. So they NTR'd according to such logic, don't they?

Just in case, there is no motivation to insult in this response at all, I was just stating my point of view.

Gotcha, thanks for the reply, just wanted to know what to expect

 

[Re-boner Ocelot]

Also how do i enter the bandit camp? The path is blocked off.

If some path is blocked than this content is not available yet.

Urk. I tried playing this. I liked the art. I liked the atmosphere. I liked the interface. I think you have the potential for a great game here! But... it's clear that it's written by a non-native English speaker, and trying to puzzle my way through the dialogue is at best awkward, but often painful.

I realize the focus is probably on expanding content, but I strongly suggest you get a native speaker to edit the writing, preferably soon because the longer you put it off, the more daunting the initial work will be.

I was just starting to think I was good at writing... In fact, I translate most of the text using a translator, correcting some things with my own knowledge, but I just want to know how really bad it is, since no one before talked about that aspect. Do you mean that it's the translation that is the problem, or is the writing itself also suffering?

 

[Kalel7]

I was just starting to think I was good at writing... In fact, I translate most of the text using a translator, correcting some things with my own knowledge, but I just want to know how really bad it is, since no one before talked about that aspect. Do you mean that it's the translation that is the problem, or is the writing itself also suffering?

The writing seems fine, at least from what I've seen so far. The translation is the problem, which is why I suggested finding a native speaker to edit what's been written.

It's purely a grammar (and occasionally spelling) issue, not a problem with the story!

 

[Re-boner Ocelot]

The writing seems fine, at least from what I've seen so far. The translation is the problem, which is why I suggested finding a native speaker to edit what's been written.

It's purely a grammar (and occasionally spelling) issue, not a problem with the story!

Okay, now I get it. I just looked up for NSFW proofreading services and the pricing is not bad actually, but considering the amount of money I am making from this game, I would spend all the money that I earn on proofreading completely, so it's very tricky topic so far.

So we'll see. Perhaps I will get to that in some future. I know that problems with the text usually make people very angry, but I did not think that they are expressed in my game. Thanks for the feedback.

 

[Harem Trooper]

When you watch porn or read hentai you basically watch other people fucking. So they NTR'd according to such logic, don't they?

Wait what ? By that logic if you watch porn you into voyeurism
I dont know how you enjoy your hentai or porn, but most of normal people when they Play a MC in a porn game, or when they read hentai, or when they watch porn...most if not all the time they think they are the MC (or the actor) in such a setting.
I mean if you play a RPG game, you litterly play as what you want to be so yeah.

There is no "LI and other NPC who you can and will bang in the story will ALSO bang others in the story"-tag.
And people use the Tag which is the nearest to it, which is the NTR tag.
I agree that since they are not in a relationship its not automaticly NTR, but people dont want to see other fuck if its not the MC, even less if its a LI.
Which people try to have the option at least to avoid.

 

[Re-boner Ocelot]

Wait what ? By that logic if you watch porn you into voyeurism
I dont know how you enjoy your hentai or porn, but most of normal people when they Play a MC in a porn game, or when they read hentai, or when they watch porn...most if not all the time they think they are the MC (or the actor) in such a setting.
I mean if you play a RPG game, you litterly play as what you want to be so yeah.

There is no "LI and other NPC who you can and will bang in the story will ALSO bang others in the story"-tag.
And people use the Tag which is the nearest to it, which is the NTR tag.
I agree that since they are not in a relationship its not automaticly NTR, but people dont want to see other fuck if its not the MC, even less if its a LI.
Which people try to have the option at least to avoid.

Not sure what do you mean by LI.

But I think most "normal people", as you said, when contacting with anything jercable concentrate on the woman rather than imagining themselves as the MC. I don't imagining myself as some guy from porn, I concentrate on the girl that feeling pleasure from sex, on her bouncing body. I don't imagining myself as ugly bastard from hentai who hypnotized innocent girl, I am concentrating on the innocent girl who got into such a terrible hopeless situation, all her feelings and struggling. We subconsciously don't care about men in porn, we often see them simply as tools. As a big dick tool that won't fit in the girl's pussy. As a dirty homeless man-tool who blackmails a shy girl from a wealthy family.

That is all my personal opinion, but after all I will repeat what I said before. We all are just too used to the Uberfucker MC characters.

 

[Harem Trooper]

Not sure what do you mean by LI.

But I think most "normal people", as you said, when contacting with anything jercable concentrate on the woman rather than imagining themselves as the MC. I don't imagining myself as some guy from porn, I concentrate on the girl that feeling pleasure from sex, on her bouncing body. I don't imagining myself as ugly bastard from hentai who hypnotized innocent girl, I am concentrating on the innocent girl who got into such a terrible hopeless situation, all her feelings and struggling. We subconsciously don't care about men in porn, we often see them simply as tools. As a big dick tool that won't fit in the girl's pussy. As a dirty homeless man-tool who blackmails a shy girl from a wealthy family.

That is all my personal opinion, but after all I will repeat what I said before. We all are just too used to the Uberfucker MC characters.

LI = Love Interest, aka Main Character you gonna romance and bang.

Well, the majority does. I dont mean that you are the Ugly Bastard or some Gyaru-ah in some hentai. But some one who is banging the chick in that setting. The MC is just a vesel for the player.
Sure, there are people who are comepletty see it in your way, which is pretty neet since you can consume almost everything.
But for many, even for harem players, its a big no to see other LI banging.
And I dont know where or what games you played where the MC is a Uberfucker MC, but most of the games recently I see is a MC who is a beta/cuck with a voyeurism fetish and lacks a spine.

 

[QQP_Purple]

NTR is not the right word here but voyeurism. This game caters to the kinds of people that like to watch others have sex. The whole plot is basically the premise that the MC has the magical power to make others want sex and than you as the player get to use that power to make them and watch.

 

[Re-boner Ocelot]

LI = Love Interest, aka Main Character you gonna romance and bang.

Well, the majority does. I dont mean that you are the Ugly Bastard or some Gyaru-ah in some hentai. But some one who is banging the chick in that setting. The MC is just a vesel for the player.
Sure, there are people who are comepletty see it in your way, which is pretty neet since you can consume almost everything.
But for many, even for harem players, its a big no to see other LI banging.
And I dont know where or what games you played where the MC is a Uberfucker MC, but most of the games recently I see is a MC who is a beta/cuck with a voyeurism fetish and lacks a spine.

Then there is only one thing I have to clarify. In the case of this game Lia is a love interest and it's pretty clear. There's not a lot of content with Anna, but there are hints about her too. And in fact the only one who has fucked Lia so far is the tentacles, although I purposely made the scene harmless without any penetration, meaning she wasn't fucked at all. So as I can say these love interest weren't touched and everything is okay.

But here's what I'm wondering: you fight girls, breaking their mental defenses and then expect a reward for the protagonist, right? So you see all the girls you meet as potential LI and the fact that they are fucking not the one who defeat them and cracked their mind makes you feel bad? I'm just trying to understand what others think.

 

[QQP_Purple]

But here's what I'm wondering: you fight girls, breaking their mental defenses and then expect a reward for the protagonist, right? So you see all the girls you meet as potential LI and the fact that they are fucking not the one who defeat them and cracked their mind makes you feel bad? I'm just trying to understand what others think.

Think Pokemon.