VN Ren'Py Abandoned Bitch Squad [v0.4.7] [IcarusLabs]

[FatGiant]

No i did not call him incompetent. I said based on alot of comments people are expecting author level quality writing when for most developers this is their first attempts at such so are continuing to improve update by update so cut them slack.
Your mention of Blackmailing, Rape, whatever else you wanna single out covers 50% of the games on this site so lets not single out one developer for it because your unhappy with the writing or direction. If those tags are not to your liking why are you even in this thread your just getting personal about the developer and spreading hate.

What I am expecting is a VN. What we get is a KN. With a dumb and despicable MC.

You say there is improvement in the story? Only to be worse and worse and worse.

Don't worry about why I am here. Oh, I don't hate the Dev, I hate the MC, if for you they are the same, I am completely capable of separating both.

This Dev may not be capable to write the story we were waiting for. He created a LOT of frustration and instead of addressing it or changing the way he was taking the story, he does even worse. And people that were already pissed with this MC, had to watch it being even dumber, evil and be even more frustrated. All the while with a vague promise of it all being a character development that would justify everything... One year later, the CD is that the MC is still dumb as a truck of bricks, but now he is a rapist, a blackmailer and has LOST all moral ground to even complain about the girls, because he has become worse than them. All this without player input. In some cases against player input.

So, stop throwing sand in my eyes pretending that by calling the mistakes of this "Great and quality game" I am spreading hate, I am expressing the frustration this dev created. Is it even possible or interesting to save this? I don't know. I am not sure if it is. But certainly it isn't by increasing the frustration and keeping the MC we have to play has, the dumbest rock of the quarry.

Peace

 

[bradozlo]

Are the MC and his companions the actual "bitch squad"? No offense, but they seem like the bad guys bitch as the story progresses.

Are the developers just trying to prolong the story? Unfortunately, the longer I play it, the less I want to play it.

Are the developers trying to build the supposed "bad guys" up so they will fall harder? From what I've read, every move MC makes blows up, and it doubles the "enemies" power.

Is the MC supposed to be the "good guy" turned bad? because when I select the reasonable option, he turns around a couple of frames later and does something counterproductive to it.

The story started with quite an interesting premise but slowly devolved into something where hitting your head on a wall repeatedly seems to make more progress than the MC.

Over all, the game has become increasingly frustrating with a story that aimlessly drags on forever.

 

[|XenoN|]

Are the MC and his companions the actual "bitch squad"? No offense, but they seem like the bad guys bitch as the story progresses.

Are the developers just trying to prolong the story? Unfortunately, the longer I play it, the less I want to play it.

Are the developers trying to build the supposed "bad guys" up so they will fall harder? From what I've read, every move MC makes blows up, and it doubles the "enemies" power.

Is the MC supposed to be the "good guy" turned bad? because when I select the reasonable option, he turns around a couple of frames later and does something counterproductive to it.

The story started with quite an interesting premise but slowly devolved into something where hitting your head on a wall repeatedly seems to make more progress than the MC.

Over all, the game has become increasingly frustrating with a story that aimlessly drags on forever.

It was always frustrating from the moment MC decided to take revenge on them...MC is fucked from the head...His looks tells you he can't do shit...then he decides to forgive the bitches for some pussy? He was always a pussy now he's still a pussy with a oversized clit.I never looked back this shit since 0.3.

 

[|XenoN|]

If you are writing a Revenge story make the MC capable of doing shit..If you writing a redemption story let the bitches make it up to MC..
This MC is on my #2 Worst MC ever list..The MC from Triple Ex is #1...still this MC can catch up.

 

[OleJackRipper]

WHY THE FUCK IS THIS SOOOO DAMNED KINETIC??????

THE GAME AND THE MC IS PISSING ME OFF!
You get options here and there but no choices for actions that really matter to the player.

MC folds. too damned easily. And from what I hear, his solution will be to rape the bitches.
I'm cool with him blackmailing them if that is the plan based on what I've read. I'm even cool with physical violence even if that is the weapon of the weak bullying the weaker. It's still better than sticking my/the mc's dick inside someone who absolutely disgusts me and deserves to be left alone or to prove their redemption before the mc treats them like normal.

But no! The pussy just gives up. then later blackmailes and rapes. . . . and I'm too fucking bored to do something better! SHIT

 

[Daddy-S]

Totally constructive review: .

Forced, contrived bs with a bunch of unlikable characters and the mc is top of the list.

 

[OleJackRipper]

As a patreon i can say we are happy with how the game is developing, hence the payments we make to him every month. Youve got to remember the story is only half way there and not every person who decides to make a VN can write authour level stories, characters and plot development which is what most of you seem to expect. They have a story they want to tell and they do their best, getting better and improving along the way. So its about time all you guys especially the freeloaders give the devs a break.

I dont know what game you guys are playing but my character isnt a simp he's dominated and broke Emma. Started a master/slave relationship with Charlotte. Fixed a broken relationship with his step sister and started a relationship with her and she was the one who came asking for forgivness and has helped to discover truths. In all those situations my MC was the one in control not the girls.

It sounds like most of the players crying is because they cant destroy the girls outright or you wanna have complete domination over them. If your playing that route your partt of a team doing that and it needs to be played smart not rushed. If you dont like how its being handled just move on. Its a good, quality game thats offers alot more then people are complaining about.

Step sister asks for forgiveness?
Maybe we use a different dictionary.
In what I played, she asked to reconcile. And was open to considering proof that her "sisters" were actually evil. But no, she was not sorry for anything. Anything that needed apologizing beyond just reconciling was due to the mc being too much of a bitch to move on from the past or so her gist was.

 

[bob69696]

Has anyone yet figured out why MC and co were targeted at the start. basically everything in story is an attempt to powergrab. the highschool stuff doesn't match up though? not yet? unless the MC was somehow standing in the way of something. even his step sister didn't seem to need it to push her to join them. if anything you'd think humilating her brother in such a way that if not for the legal system being corrupt the squad would be sued into oblivion, would hurt her desire to join them.

 

[burner las]

There is an error while playing strip pool when it s MC s turn

 

[TypicalTrashBag]

Now that's a lot of alpaca males bitching over something they don't like. You wouldn't spit on me if I do o: right?

Asking the MC to be not a bitch who rapes because "revenge" and people around him to be atleast smart = alpaca males?? lol

 

[risky0]

Sarah is perhaps one of the most innocent girls in the game. Mc completely destroyed her mind.
In doing so, it has fucked up the lives of many people who had nothing to do with it, like Rebecca and her friends.
He raped Emma in a horrible way and blackmailed the Blonde and turned her into a sex slave.
And then there's the Kate blowjob scene.

The most disgusting person in this game is Mc himself.
So there's only one logical explanation for what's happening, the developer is forcing people to play the forgiving route.

When I played the first version of this game, I didn't expect that the MC's way of getting justice or revenge would be so low and dishonorable, it's really disappointing.

 

[Alextsai]

The MC's way of getting justice and revenge being so low and dishonorable is actually GREAT, it's what some of us really like and look for in a game

 

[FatGiant]

The MC's way of getting justice and revenge being so low and dishonorable is actually GREAT, it's what some of us really like and look for in a game

Yeah, I've heard of people like that. I see them described in the DSM - V. I hope you one day find your way to them in IRL.

Peace

 

[Derpyshanks]

Sarah is perhaps one of the most innocent girls in the game. Mc completely destroyed her mind.
In doing so, it has fucked up the lives of many people who had nothing to do with it, like Rebecca and her friends.
He raped Emma in a horrible way and blackmailed the Blonde and turned her into a sex slave.
And then there's the Kate blowjob scene.

The most disgusting person in this game is Mc himself.
So there's only one logical explanation for what's happening, the developer is forcing people to play the forgiving route.

When I played the first version of this game, I didn't expect that the MC's way of getting justice or revenge would be so low and dishonorable, it's really disappointing.

Sarah mental breakdown was underwhelming. I thought I was gonna get something bigger with her since it was building up each chapter but instead she's like "I'm so broken MC, Fuck me so I can forget."???

And to be fair, this is a porn game at it's core so blackmailing five hot girls into sexual favors was inevitable. I didn't see however MC raping Emma. That was just dumb all over.

Kate blowjob scene is the closest MC ever got to actual payback to the B-Squad since from a story standpoint Kate had the option to have just said no and leave. But Kate's pride got in the way thus leading to personal humiliation shared between her and MC. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

MC isn't the most disgusting person in the game...yet. Kate's father, Miranda, and Kate still haven't shown their full hands yet and it's pretty clear all three of those characters can, did and will go far beyond MC could ever dream of to get their way. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

And last but not least, I personally don't feel forced to play the forgiveness route for the happy-go-lucky ending. My playthrough is full on scorched earth but always avoid sex scenes with B-Squad and Ashley and whoever else will join them.

IDC if my MC becomes a quadriplegic in a nursing home for the rest of his life if he destroys all of B-Squad in the process for I no longer see him as a character. I only see him as a loaded gun and Bitch squad as the targets.

 

[alanbadvin]

Regarding the latest update, there are supposed to be two NSFW scenes. I know that there is a scene involving Linda/Ashley and Linda. But are there any other NSFW scenes with other characters that I am missing in the latest update?

 

[|XenoN|]

Bro played the same game we played right?

 

[Aristos]

It seems a new online version with new content is out.

 

[robrize2169]

new content you say..guess we might see it here before summer?

 

[holaje12]

Honestly, this needs to hace ntr content, and if you are being honest you would agree yourself. Mc is a loser it is only natural that he gets cucked not only metaphorically but literally as well.

 

[leo5298]

Honestly, this needs to hace ntr content, and if you are being honest you would agree yourself. Mc is a loser it is only natural that he gets cucked not only metaphorically but literally as well.

I was really hoping for some kind of femdom content for this game, even just from the bitch squad as a way of fucking with the MC. A few dozen kick to the nuts from the bitch squad would have put the MC in his place pretty quick.