I got maybe ten slides in and gave up in horror over the writing. The sea is "Odessyean?" A nurse who bitches about people in a hospital being in a hurry? Having a so-called protagonist that can see into the past to a time before their birth and influence their father's decisions in the past?
Just... no. The dev needs to read some stories to get an idea of how they work, and then use only words that they actually know the meaning of. Turn all of the preamble stuff into a flashback as her father tells the protagonist about the night of her birth, and leave out all the silly stuff about not rushing around in hospitals where, you know, people rush aropund because lives depend on doing so. Feel free to start the story in the middle; that's what good authors do.