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VN Ren'Py Abandoned Black Diamond [v0.7f] [Deus Actum]

4.40 star(s) 14 Votes

MikeShox

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Well i hope we get a sandbox, a real chalange to decide whta path she will go. To be a good girl or total whore. I hope dev will bring us some diference. I understand this is an adult game but also it will be nice to get alternative. Decent way is mutch harder way that be a bad girl and do some things to get money... Just think about opportunities..
 
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Joe Steel

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I got maybe ten slides in and gave up in horror over the writing. The sea is "Odessyean?" A nurse who bitches about people in a hospital being in a hurry? Having a so-called protagonist that can see into the past to a time before their birth and influence their father's decisions in the past?

Just... no. The dev needs to read some stories to get an idea of how they work, and then use only words that they actually know the meaning of. Turn all of the preamble stuff into a flashback as her father tells the protagonist about the night of her birth, and leave out all the silly stuff about not rushing around in hospitals where, you know, people rush aropund because lives depend on doing so. Feel free to start the story in the middle; that's what good authors do.
 

JustAUser89

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I got maybe ten slides in and gave up in horror over the writing. The sea is "Odessyean?" A nurse who bitches about people in a hospital being in a hurry? Having a so-called protagonist that can see into the past to a time before their birth and influence their father's decisions in the past?

Just... no. The dev needs to read some stories to get an idea of how they work, and then use only words that they actually know the meaning of. Turn all of the preamble stuff into a flashback as her father tells the protagonist about the night of her birth, and leave out all the silly stuff about not rushing around in hospitals where, you know, people rush aropund because lives depend on doing so. Feel free to start the story in the middle; that's what good authors do.
when it says odyssean he probably compares it to the seas in Odyssey the work from homer and not Odysseus the man
my guess is the nurse is old and old people always bitch about anything
when was it mentioned she could see in the past? you the player can see in the past and infuence a decision will probably have meaning in the future
 

dolfe67

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unfortunately, most of the times when the protagonist is a woman, it is noticeable a greater investment in the slut route because they want to follow a rule or custom that in games where the protagonist is a man involves harem / romance and when it is a woman it involves cheating / ntr / slut. I agree with you that it's getting boring to see endings like this, but it seems that it's a custom in these porn games to put the female protagonist as a slut in the same way it's fashionable to put black or Latino men characters as son of a bitch who want to steal someone else's wife.
TBF there is not a big audience for a game with a fem protag romancing males, as vast majority of players are men and want her to be fucked dirty. If they want romance they can play a male protag game.
 

Saint Blackmoor

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Male protagonist for 10 minutes then you swap to a female for the rest of the game?

Nice case of false advertisement just to get players there.
(Dev thinking) I'll introduce a male protagonist for the first ten minutes then switch to a female protagonist, yeah that'll get players here, (what a smart plan to get players)

Could that be the only reason or maybe it could have been that the DEV underestimated the low intelligence
some members have.
Has every book, movie, comic, or VN, started the same way?
(Oh, hey there, I'm the Protagonist, let me take you by the nose and baby feed you the story so you don't get upset.)

There is no false advertising going on here, it's just a story plot that sadly flies over the heads of most of the members here.
 
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moose_puck

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Was it cheese or was it a little slam to boost your self-esteem? which is probably pretty low I'm thinking.
Actually, the name of the game was what stood out for me, since that is a very old and popular dairy brand up here in Canada.

The rest was a complete lack of patience for - yet again - another dev trying to sell a non-existent product, while blowing sunshine up our asses to try and get us to open our wallets. The dev notes are a complete "wish list" without any substance to back it up.

Almost as vapid as the fluff job of a 5-star review you just gave this thing.
 

Saint Blackmoor

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Almost as vapid as the fluff job of a 5-star review you just gave this thing.
The fluff job was in response to a total trash review by our favorite hyper-mad and comically badly--worded-comments member 88Michele88 who completely misunderstood the premise of the game and then went on a triad thrashing the game with a completely bullshit review, I admit I went heavy on the fluff and after playing this update I'll have to amend it.
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Ifartedtoolong

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Not sure why you came into a game thread that is tagged female protagonist then if your not interested in them.
 

Pogo123

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mc looks tasteful and curvy which is very very welcome.

tags are missing (or content? hopefully not)

can we have sexual encounters with the guys in the preview pics? this would be interesting!
 

gilgamesh9

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For me the problem with most female protag being slutty isnt much of an issue but i like to choose who i want to have her hook up with not just everybody and their dad.
 
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J.R.

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Found this "by accident" and actually liked it so far. It's early in the game, but the story so far is interesting.
There's already a new version out on Patreon, too. Not sure it makes it here (game generally only available for higher tiers, but not much patrons to leak it...), we will see.
 

88Michele88

Bloodborn Vampire
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Hey there
I made a mod for the Black Diamond v0.1.0
Screenshot - My Modded Game Black Diamond Modded.png


For everyone who like myself like to playe female protagonit without any other abousive characters with male choise when overview sayng that it about Female portagonist. Be happy to know with this mod you can play female portagonist game wacthing male perespective as kinetic novel or playing it as your liking and heart content.


Put the scripts file into game folder.
 
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