I give it three stars, too many ugly women, really ugly. I know sometimes they need sex more than the rest, but too MANY ugly women. The grammar and spelling needs improvement, and cut down the God and Jesus calling it sounds like a poorly scripted free ten minute film, where the actors and actresses cannot say more than a grunt or repeat the same words over and over. I don't like songs that keep repeating the same words either, some acceptations for a good riff and a useful chorus. It has great potential for a plot and story line, one doesn't like the rapiness or the traps so much but ok, its a micro-cosmim and the world is not always rosy. So, clean up the ugly women, granny sex, I think our dev is too kinky but we don't shame them more of the young coming of age, and corruption is fine as long as they are willing? I still encourage the dev, and the mod was very helpful but still somewhat confusing on their "acronyms" three or four letter uncommon words the reader had to guess what the end result of the action might be, but maybe that is good too? When operant conditioning a subject, you record your observations and make adjustments to predict future behaviors.