VN Ren'Py Abandoned Blue Action [v0.1] [Lonely Wolf]

[Call of Booty]

Now,that's correct text!

 

[matissewan11]

The MC seems to be too young looking, otherwise the renders are great. hoping the story and writing are on par with the attention to renders. Best of luck Dev!

 

[Kadajko]

I don't understand what is going through the Devs head when the player is offered a choice of whether to lift his friends mothers dress or not, BUT then straight after that, the player just rubs his dick on her ass - no choice. Like what the actual fuck?

 

[bruce555]

I like MILFs and these are ok ! But when I saw this MC ... interest in this game dropped to zero.

 

[methusalix55]

Hello
Evaluating the first/early version of a VN is not that easy.

the models/renders/animations look promising.

Unfortunately, the poor/sometimes wrong English translation is very noticeable, although English is not my first language and in some text passages the language will probably change to Spanish. developers who want to gain international recognition should consistently develop in english, as translations and special characters typical of the language (spanish, french) can often be a source of error.

It remains to be seen how the story will develop in future updates.
good luck

 

[Crowangel]

Downloading and will review once done.. Thanks for sharing

 

[dartman51]

Females are all hot, but the translation is really poor, especially the chunk in the middle that just isn't translated from Spanish at all.

Also, the characters act like psychopaths to make the plot advance (MC hotdogs the friend's mom's ass and cums on her back during a lotion application, she notices and simply doesn't care, MC then wanders into the friend's dad's office for porn, despite literally having cum ten seconds ago, looks at his friend's dad's computer, begins reading his emails and finds out about major cash transfers that are the core of the mystery of the plot, I guess).

Finally, not sure how to say this, but...male MC looks young. Like, a lot younger than 19. All the females look age appropriate, to be clear.

I don't get it either. They make MC's that are supposed to be 19 or 20, look like they're 14 or 15. That, and a lot of times they barely come up to the women's boobs. It detracts from the story.(In my opinion.) That's when I have to PASS.

 

[WildBillKatt]

Glad that it's not named almost exactly the same as 50 other games.

 

[FeropsisFenarue]

Not every 18y protagonist has to look like they are a muscle bound 30y dude with a giant cock. He looks adult enough.

 

[Jamsalad]

Hm, will impregnation be an option for the incest characters in the future?

Does peasants quest have actual incest impregnation?

 

[Duriel]

Not every 18y protagonist has to look like they are a muscle bound 30y dude with a giant cock. He looks adult enough.

Yeah, young adults can be slim, short, minute and there are plenty, its just that you don't see (or notice) as many outside as opposed to broad, fit, tall ones. But yeah its matter of taste, just like people would prefer a short petite girl over a chunkier taller one.

 

[Gosamr]

Yeah, young adults can be slim, short, minute and there are plenty, its just that you don't see (or notice) as many outside as opposed to broad, fit, tall ones. But yeah its matter of taste, just like people would prefer a short petite girl over a chunkier taller one.

A lot of them have short, small, often even tiny, dicks too...

 

[Duriel]

A lot of them have short, small, often even tiny, dicks too...

surely, although a lot of em can also be quite hung compared to their size and proportions

 

[AdamJohn36]

Does peasants quest have actual incest impregnation?

Yes, daughters and his sister.

 

[Heml0ck]

The 3D artist understands natural lighting, so that's a refreshing change.

 

[zobzobi000]

damn good beginning the two milfs looks so good too

 

[YepperCause]

Not every 18y protagonist has to look like they are a muscle bound 30y dude with a giant cock. He looks adult enough.

He absolutely doesn't look like an adult. I think there are forum rules against me stating how old I think he looks, but he doesn't look a thing like any guy I ever knew who was 19...or, frankly, even any guy I went to high school with.

 

[boraxkarloff]

The mc's attitude is a real put-off. The character is totally unlikeable.

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[Gosamr]

surely, although a lot of em can also be quite hung compared to their size and proportions

I'm sure you must be right too. Men and women, old and young, tall and short, fat and thin, hairy and shaved, big dicks and small dicks, big boobs and small boobs...Ahhh, what a wonderful world!!
(man, I need a cup of strong, black coffee...make that two.)