CassieBare

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I certainly like the idea behind this. Reminds me of some of the more experimental Twine porn games I've played. At this point I don't think it's especially important to know what all the choices do stats-wise, as this is mostly an interesting and well-written but glorified character creator. Presumably modders can do that (see College Daze's mods for example) if/when more content comes.

Content-wise, yeah, the tags should reflect what exists now. Which I'm glad to say there actually is some of. I was pleasantly surprised by the very first scene, for example. Nonetheless, this is very firmly part 1 of a character creation/introduction section, and I wouldn't say we really know what the full game will be like. I hope the dev understands that a likely slow reception on Subscribestar at this point does not necessarily reflect a lack of interest by viewers (I'm plenty interested!) but rather the fact that by the way this game is structured, players don't have a lot to go on as far as how it will develop, i.e. if this is a good way to spend their money or not.

Particularly, I want to see how well the dev follows through with their stated planned content in the next update. What that looks like should tell me a lot about whether this game is something I want to support or not.
Thanks for the great feedback, gunderson.

What you see is essentially a month's work. I have also been working on structuring out 0.2, writing portions of it, and storyboarding 0.3 and beyond. When this dropped it's because I felt that 0.1 was in a 'pretty' enough place and the coding seemed to be bug-less enough to release it.

In actuality, I'm deep into writing and coding 0.2 and aim to release it as soon as possible with a planned deadline of end of May.
 

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Okay, I gave it a try and found some bugs.
This:
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Another bug I found is the skin color selection. I'll assume the only factor here are the mom's skin color in the first few pages. But it almost seem random. For example, I tried several runs and here what i got (alabaster: end up once with olive and twice with dark skin), (fair: once with fair, and once with white), (only did once for ebony and it seemed correct, so dunno). Probably need all of the skin tone options looked at, imo.
 

CassieBare

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Okay, I gave it a try and found some bugs.
This:
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Another bug I found is the skin color selection. I'll assume the only factor here are the mom's skin color in the first few pages. But it almost seem random. For example, I tried several runs and here what i got (alabaster: end up once with olive and twice with dark skin), (fair: once with fair, and once with white), (only did once for ebony and it seemed correct, so dunno). Probably need all of the skin tone options looked at, imo.
Thanks! I caught the above on my last play through and I'm building a bug-fix version to drop.

As far as skin colors, the reason it's the way it is: the skin tone of the Dad is unknown and undecided, so it could mean Claire ends up darker than her mother etc. Maybe I open it up to choice, or maybe I narrow the options, but I did want players to have the option for a mixed-race Claire.
 

TerumiNin

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Only if you don't choose 'Fantastic Tits,' in which case it's a randomized small, medium or large.
Interesting. Seems to get large chested a lot more.

Also what's this option about birth control that says "It's what most girls did. Makes sense to me."?
 
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CassieBare

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Interesting. Seems to get large chested a lot more.

Also what's this option about birth control that says "It's what most girls did. Makes sense to me."?
Yeah, I've had runs where my hair is wavy a ton even though I did 'straight' for Mom...that's randomness for ya!

Thanks for pointing out the lack of clarity, it's using birth control but isn't as obvious as I thought it was.
 

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Thanks! I caught the above on my last play through and I'm building a bug-fix version to drop.

As far as skin colors, the reason it's the way it is: the skin tone of the Dad is unknown and undecided, so it could mean Claire ends up darker than her mother etc. Maybe I open it up to choice, or maybe I narrow the options, but I did want players to have the option for a mixed-race Claire.
Yeah, probaby could use the option to choose the dad's skin color to help narrow down what Claire end up as, giving player the choice whether to force a specific skin color or get a mixed race (and control the range of said mixed race to be between the parents). As it is now, I feel the unknown random variable can cause confusion and leave some people unhappy.
 

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I keep getting errors on the page that starts with " There was something about the day-to-day that kept me on edge. "

Also I think the color complexion results aren't working right.

Would also be nice if we had a better understanding of what the character choices resulted in or impacted maybe. But it looks centered around some good pregnancy content ahead, so I will be very interested and keeping close eyes on this one.
 
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