SuicideByTaco

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Game looks great so far, only found just one error which was reported earlier. I do have some concerns about the creator getting overwhelmed by the amount of writing they will have to do for all paths....
 
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I keep getting errors on the page that starts with " There was something about the day-to-day that kept me on edge. "

Also I think the color complexion results aren't working right.

Would also be nice if we had a better understanding of what the character choices resulted in or impacted maybe. But it looks centered around some good pregnancy content ahead, so I will be very interested and keeping close eyes on this one.
What kind of errors? Screenshot? I'd love to know what you're encountering.
 

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Game looks great so far, only found just one error which was reported earlier. I do have some concerns about the creator getting overwhelmed by the amount of writing they will have to do for all paths....
Thanks! We shall see.

The way I have it planned out now, it follows typical CYOA format:

Multiple branches that return to 'railroad' sections that branch again. There are certainly opportunities to tailor all paths based on stats, etc, but I'll keep that to a manageable minimum.
 

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Thanks! We shall see.

The way I have it planned out now, it follows typical CYOA format:

Multiple branches that return to 'railroad' sections that branch again. There are certainly opportunities to tailor all paths based on stats, etc, but I'll keep that to a manageable minimum.
Btw, I've played the game because I'm curious about the cheating tag, yet I haven't found a single content about it.

Does this version actually have a cheating content?
 

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I am definitely going to keep an eye on this one. Female PoV HTML games seem to have the kind of content I enjoy, and this preview definitely gets my attention.
Special props to having custom graphical assets, and not dumping 3 gigabytes of real porn into 5 minutes of content!

All the bugs and problems I found have been explained by others, so I'll just say that the writing here is definitely on the higher end, quality wise. Best of luck going forward!

Does this version actually have a cheating content?
I think the only bit is where you can have a rotating selection of "dads", meaning mom sleeps around. Much like other tags, it's likely a planned feature for future content.
 

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Btw, I've played the game because I'm curious about the cheating tag, yet I haven't found a single content about it.

Does this version actually have a cheating content?
It's more of implied than stated, but a couple of the combinations in the initial scene could come about through 'cheating'. Sorry if you were looking for something more explicit. That'd be in a future version, 0.3 or 0.4
 
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Amahl Farouk

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For the choices just use buttons my friend, that clicking on the text thing is unnecessary and a bit confusing, better to see all the options and then choose

Writing is good, this is a promising start
 
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For the choices just use buttons my friend, that clicking on the text thing is unnecessary and a bit confusing, better to see all the options and then choose

Writing is good, this is a promising start
Appreciate the comment, but one tool is not for every job. Selection of multiple things? Sure. Selection of a simple trait? Listbox. But when it's flavor text to enhance reading? Cycle.
 
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Appreciate the comment, but one tool is not for every job. Selection of multiple things? Sure. Selection of a simple trait? Listbox. But when it's flavor text to enhance reading? Cycle.
one button to rule them all and in the darkness choose them
 

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No, but it certainly clarifies what is meant by taking the midnight train going anywhere.
Yeah I sure it does, but I'd be even greater if she were with Just a city boy, born and raised in South Detroit.
 

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It's more of implied than stated, but a couple of the combinations in the initial scene could come about through 'cheating'. Sorry if you were looking for something more explicit. That'd be in a future version, 0.3 or 0.4
If you don't mind telling me, what are the combos exactly?
 

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These colour choices sure are creative, and don't wanna make me gouge my eyes out in the slightest.
 
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