Those aren't the lyrics and that ain't cheap perfume your smellingI don't think those are the lyrics.
Those aren't the lyrics and that ain't cheap perfume your smellingI don't think those are the lyrics.
We aren't worried how long could it take to update a game about a girl special agentYep, mostly a proof-of-concept and Character Creator. Now, don't oversell it, this had sex and story to it too...gimme some credit
Hence why Blue Swallow came into existenceWe aren't worried how long could it take to update a game about a girl special agent
Ideally the next release (0.2) will be June 1. After that, I *hope* to be able to complete 0.3 on July 1, but until I finish building out the structure and begin writing, I won't know that for sure.looking forward to this one,
whats the update schedule?
It's not six pages.Might wanna look into giving more choice in the character customization. This randomization leaves a bit to be desired. Randomly ending up with features completely different from what you chose is... weird. Choosing "Wavy" hair & light skin only to end up with like 5c textured curls & hella dark skin.... bit irritating. Really like the Look of the protagonist paper doll, but would prefer to choose rather than get randomized stuff & keep repeating the intro. Also are those tags "planned" content? Cause current version is like. 6 pages of text that's basically Just a character creation page.
What did you mean by this?(which i guess could help differentiate if you had a bubble or "( )/etc" next to it to tell the outcome, for those who dont notice the changes)
Intention is for players to have the agency to deal with that risk and everything that comes with it. So there will certainly be mid-game events/dilemmas for MCs not on birth control and the successful navigation of those waters...or notvery unique design choice for html.. looks promising, hope will make it to the finish!
wish a lot of pregnancy\choices\events in mid game and not just endings will be added in the future.
good lcuk and have fun making it.
Thanks for the enthusiasm!Alrighty, did a few runs and figured I now have enough stuff to give my own thoughts on this:
Overall, it's a decent start. It's great that the character can really be made our own from even before she's born - a fun divergence from what I've seen from blank slate sorts so far. I also really like the way in which the backstory is presented - it's fun to read, and it really does feel like it's our protagonist talking. While personally I would have liked to have a bit more content, the current version had enough to get me interested in seeing more, which I believe was the point
Now, I won't go over the error messages I received, except for one in the small town origin which I think was not yet mentioned - see screenshot for what I mean. My only real criticism of the current version are the colours - both background and letter colours. They clash with each other IMHO, and especially the links become unreadable if you hover over them with the mouse - it might be a good idea to include some kind of settings option for that.
So, I'm eagerly awaiting the next release!
Since you're planning to include all of these in v0.2:It's more of implied than stated, but a couple of the combinations in the initial scene could come about through 'cheating'. Sorry if you were looking for something more explicit. That'd be in a future version, 0.3 or 0.4
Maybe you could add explicit cheating content early?0.2 will see the following development of the story:
Content
* Our protagonist fleshes out her group of friends and cohort in the school
* She puts the finishing touches on who she is and how she interrelates with others
* She gets to have a few experiences tailored to her choices so far, including Prom!
* We find out who she's been with, if anyone, and who they are
* We'll end with her decision on college, a gap year, or neither
* And a surprise...
We'll see! Haven't written the sections that would have that yet, but likely it will.Since you're planning to include all of these in v0.2:
Maybe you could add explicit cheating content early?