Ren'Py Abandoned Blurred Lines [v0.3f] [Studio009]

[bamachine]

Like the art, like the characters, for the most part, so far. Needs some proofreading, mostly spelling errors and I don't want to be ex-Seal, CIA dude Nate, I want to be ex-Seal, CIA dude bamachine(or rather my real first name), helps with immersion.

 

[Vertius]

What kind of ntr is this? Netorare, Netorase or Netori?

Thanks for anyone that can help.

 

[godlydong]

Android version?

 

[Sukebe_S]

Cool concept, unique art, great start! Keep it up.

 

[kekasaurus]

Oh, this game isn't about the song then?

 

[str8up]

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[zedascove]

The art on this one and the overall plot structure is really good, has a lot of potential.

However, the writing needs some work. I'm assuming the developer is not a native english speaker, so a translator or someone to atleast correct grammar mistakes would be enough. Otherwise this is gonna be a huge wasted potential, sadly.

 

[Deleted member 8553]

really nice art

 

[Mulanpolp]

Game has potential, art is very nice, will be watching out for this game

 

[Oshitari Azumi]

Yep. About the same as I remember from the first demo. The only standout issue for me personally, excluding things like grammar since that can be cleaned up later, is the indication for how much cash you have with it kinda being tucked away in the corner. Maybe that's just a me thing but I would personally like it if it was at least a bolder font. Other than that, nice to see this get an update.

 

[godoff95]

Make it a Mafioso, wtf

 

[DarknessDai]

exactly you'll only get NTRed if you're an ass if you're nice to your wife and daughter they will not be disloyal to you and you can proceed on the share path, but as for the other characters that's not the case they can be NTRed depending on the progression of the story

i think best routes for the wife to be Love route / Sharing route / NTR route , and yes its good to have ntr behind Treating the wife good or no but better way is to add another way to put NTR for the wife where if you let stuff happend ntr will happened like if u leave your wife alone with Mike or don't go with her stuff will happen even if u are good husband

 

[mommysboiii]

i think best routes for the wife to be Love route / Sharing route / NTR route , and yes its good to have ntr behind Treating the wife good or no but better way is to add another way to put NTR for the wife where if you let stuff happend ntr will happened like if u leave your wife alone with Mike or don't go with her stuff will happen even if u are good husband

exactly it dosent feel great if you ignore your wife and always cheat for players that enjoy ntr because ntr always is about a deep emotional connection and betrayal if you dosent care for your wife in the first place you cant really get ntred

would be better if thomas or how the boss is called if you play often carefree(dont let him get her drunk,or flirt and so on...) that he will try hit on her and in the long run is sucessfull if you dont keep an eye on this snake because he was inviting you and her on his birthday prob with intentions this guy is an asshole

 

[DarknessDai]

exactly it dosent feel great if you ignore your wife and always cheat for players that enjoy ntr because ntr always is about a deep emotional connection and betrayal if you dosent care for your wife in the first place you cant really get ntred

would be better if thomas or how the boss is called if you play often carefree(dont let him get her drunk,or flirt and so on...) that he will try hit on her and in the long run is sucessfull if you dont keep an eye on this snake because he was inviting you and her on his birthday prob with intentions this guy is an asshole

same i think this NTR with the wife works better

 

[Beast Master69]

I hope there will be swinging in this game since there's a sharing path.

 

[sguru]

Looking forward to play this.

 

[SASHAKAMEN]

any maledom?

 

[Beast Master69]

any maledom?

So far no

 

[desmosome]

exactly it dosent feel great if you ignore your wife and always cheat for players that enjoy ntr because ntr always is about a deep emotional connection and betrayal if you dosent care for your wife in the first place you cant really get ntred

would be better if thomas or how the boss is called if you play often carefree(dont let him get her drunk,or flirt and so on...) that he will try hit on her and in the long run is sucessfull if you dont keep an eye on this snake because he was inviting you and her on his birthday prob with intentions this guy is an asshole

I agree, but let the man do what he wants lol. Devs have their own ideas for the routes and adding more variatons is expanding the scope of the project.

 

[incest lover m/s]

there will be no incest tag in the future?