So for this game, guys, I must say that I think "All is in the art" and 'cause, as everybody said it, artwork is fu**ing awesome!!!...
BUT....
How will I say it kindly.... STORY (and also dialogs) really need to go back and total new start... It's not too long nor short, not hard nor easy to read and understand but... it's not really interesting and sometimes, I was asking myself when I was reading "Why I am playing these game already? - Oh Yeah, artwork is awesome!".... So my opinion is that... Artwork is really awesome but that's really all... and it's a shame 'cause there really is potential here.... I'm waiting for what's comming next with high expectations otherwise.... it will be a shame I think 'cause that's a risk to become only "fap material" (cliking just to see the renders and never read any text)...
Oh and I've nearly forgot, I've seen that you've worked for an easier mini-game but don't forget that "the dum*est person" can play to your game and there will be always people complaining about easy/hard it can be, so I suggest that you make it a little easier (it's obvious) but don't forget for a way (not cheating please... a natural way inside game) to pass it when it's impossible for some people (like 3 chances and after, a new "option" appear to "try it again" or "win automaticaly")