Ren'Py Abandoned Book of Corruption [v0.55 Public] [YLA]

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Ex78

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ah another game to add to my watch list, thank you
Don't bother it really is not worth it there are problems with the base things that should be in this type of game are not there and have not been added in even though the Dev has been told these things repeatedly like repeating scenes with characters who are at the max corruption for this version of the game
 
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ben akeba

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the update number made me think there would be hours of content and that the gameplay would be completely finished, balanced and "standardised"
the game i've played was very short, some content was trigered because ... becausse ^^... some characters are described as easy and others as tough but all have the same "resistance" to mc and "magak", there's a couple typo that are not game breacking but still mood killing, some conversation option disapear, the logic behind it is : because they disapear ^^, the game have a hiden walkthrough in the phone menu that is telling you how you'll play through future release but don't tell you if you have finished the content ><

the game in itself isn't bad even if it feel like a blunt and less polished version of a certain serie of mostly abandonned game from one dev (he start them, drop them when his skill progress and start again with a "similar" plot but better writting, renders and coding ><)

my personal view on what i think are problem in the current game are
- that the dev should take a quick look around to correct the typo before they become a real problem and too numerous for people to play through the game
- balancing the difficulty of corruption of the characters to make it follow the narative, while making sure the game does not become overly grindy and boring (i would recommend introducing alternative way of recovering mana or earning money for the grindy side, like daily passive income or regenation after acomplishing task for exemple)
- making sure all hints in the text and the menu are actualy about the current content (never was able to give those toy to the neighbour or the nun ... and i never had the possibility to speack to the witch about attracting people to the church as the mc suggested ... and did not find how to acces the content for the cops)
- the game even if pretty simple would earn some brownie point with a clear tutorial (took me some time to see there was some content with the phone, how the day was cut and what could be done and when ^^)

- the last point would be about the overly blunt (sometime incoherent and caricatural) scenario, there's some introduction, like the mother's and sister's that is re-used immediatly with the neighbours and while the "they are hot i want to fuck them even if i should not" is funny when textualy said the first time it become bad taste when used too often (it's actualy a writing rule that you can't repeat the same thing over and over in a short time) and same as the comment about typo and re-reading, some sentence in the early game seem to be missing, like if some part were erased because they did not suit the later part of the game but were not replaced by something else

while i'm going heavy on the rant, i did enjoy the game and hope to see the progress in the futur update ^^
 

near29

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May 24, 2018
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after the corruption level up scene where her son shows up, it looks like Natalie's progress resets.
 

giqui

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Book of Corruption - v0.50

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PC -> Size: 247 MB
MAC -> Size: 211 MB

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Android Version -> Size: 225 MB
Unofficial port/version

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nurbz

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Aug 2, 2018
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People often use the word "slut" wrong. A slut is a woman with a very low bar of entry for sex. There are people like me who don't think sex should be handed out like candy. Also, if this book is turning women into sluts, wouldn't that count as a form of mind control (which is then a form of rape)?
You new here?
 

erw255

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Also, I'm flattered that my one comment was enough to bring you out of three and a half years of lurking (even though I made said comment nearly a year ago).
 

Tsusaku

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After corrupting Lucy to second level, her corruption resets to level 1. (just found out Natalie corruption resets as well, after her son sees you kissing her).
And the locking out of characters after maxing them is really bad. Especially if you take the cafe. You up Melody to level 3, get an actuall vaginal penetration sex scene and then you are locked out of the cafe, which locks you out from making 800$ a pop, the most you can make in a day, because you can take it 3x in one day. Other than that if you max Sofia, you are throwed out of the game to the title screen and forced to load the game, well at least the autosafe works.
If you are not locked out from some maxed character, it would be good to know, that they are maxed, so you stop trying to use the magic pointlessly again.
Other than that, many bad translation (i don't mind that that much) and some bugs (i only encountered one with the nun, after second corruption and trying to get her aroused).
I myself like the game, i like the models and hope the outside sluttification wont take the turn as in corruption (which i like as well), with the over excesive makeup. The clothes are enough, maybe a bit of makeup, but that's enough.
Waiting for another update, maybe even join patreon.
 
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0.55




in this update

- more then 90+ render

- 5 animations

- living room 3 (3 deferent event )

- CEO now level 2

- Nora new level 4

- management meeting (0 1 2)

- new side character Ellie

- new house for the witches

- bath room event (3)

fixed

Skylar leveling up 3 event
 
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