In elizabeth's path, the options "[[“I feel like I’m married to the most amazing woman in the world"]]" doesn't link to the next bit, so I'm currently stuck there.
Okay, so I downloaded this and started playing yesterday. Checked out every possible route with every choice (not many) until the Prom choice, at which point I decided to take a break for now.
One problem which I feel that there is, (no fault of the creator, and not only game having it) is the limited save functions.
I'm organized in some way, so I specifically made 20 save to disk saves then created a new document and wrote a 1-20 listing of 'memorable' notions of those saves, a few were choices with one leading to dead end, some were 'first time with XX' some were 'interesting times' etc.
That being said, i'm somewhat hopeful , but understanding that it might not happen, that a harem ending of sorts would be available, either through the player character being the one guy they know they can always rely on and they'll be okay with that, or a VN type of harem ending which opens up after every other path has been played previously, which I frankly have no idea how they would create in that program, but would still be appreciated by me and most likely others as well.
Because frankly, none of them is perfect, but I would like to have all of them regardless and just picking one would disappoint the others and picking several would alienate the rest, so picking them all would in the end maintain their friendship and make all of us happy. As for their interactions during college... might be a bit difficult on a regular basis, but that would make the times possible even greater. And as for their interactions when starting their working career... it's possible that all of us could live together and work in the same area / city, and the player character being the... linchpin holding the group together so to say, everyone comes to him for support, and everyone has fun with him (excluding Simon in that way, they can be bros, but not much more).
Rachel (or whatever name chosen for the lesbian) would be welcome as well, provided that her acceptance of the situation with the PCxTaliaXRachel scene would be increased and repeated.
Simon (or whatever name chosen) might not necessarily be allowed to live in the same place, but if the relations stay strong and neither of them want to break up and he definately keeps his hands off the rest, he can be accepted as well.
Of course, this is just a situation that would have to adapt within a few years, especially considering if some of them want marriages or children, but there's always solutions for that, if they're willing enough.
One problem which I feel that there is, (no fault of the creator, and not only game having it) is the limited save functions.
I'm organized in some way, so I specifically made 20 save to disk saves then created a new document and wrote a 1-20 listing of 'memorable' notions of those saves, a few were choices with one leading to dead end, some were 'first time with XX' some were 'interesting times' etc.
That being said, i'm somewhat hopeful , but understanding that it might not happen, that a harem ending of sorts would be available, either through the player character being the one guy they know they can always rely on and they'll be okay with that, or a VN type of harem ending which opens up after every other path has been played previously, which I frankly have no idea how they would create in that program, but would still be appreciated by me and most likely others as well.
Because frankly, none of them is perfect, but I would like to have all of them regardless and just picking one would disappoint the others and picking several would alienate the rest, so picking them all would in the end maintain their friendship and make all of us happy. As for their interactions during college... might be a bit difficult on a regular basis, but that would make the times possible even greater. And as for their interactions when starting their working career... it's possible that all of us could live together and work in the same area / city, and the player character being the... linchpin holding the group together so to say, everyone comes to him for support, and everyone has fun with him (excluding Simon in that way, they can be bros, but not much more).
Rachel (or whatever name chosen for the lesbian) would be welcome as well, provided that her acceptance of the situation with the PCxTaliaXRachel scene would be increased and repeated.
Simon (or whatever name chosen) might not necessarily be allowed to live in the same place, but if the relations stay strong and neither of them want to break up and he definately keeps his hands off the rest, he can be accepted as well.
Of course, this is just a situation that would have to adapt within a few years, especially considering if some of them want marriages or children, but there's always solutions for that, if they're willing enough.
It wasn't the best written story for sure, but slightly above average in terms of other porn stories and perfectly adequate for its purpose. I have critiques but that's mostly because I'm a bit of a snob. What I can appreciate is the amount of work that was clearly put into it, and the subsequent work that went into porting it. I think it's been neat to see the quick response to bug fixes, even if it's meant rapidly re-downloading the same game.
I'm very hopeful that the other paths are included in the port as they get added, but I recognize how much trouble that could be and I'm satisfied with its current state. I'm kind of curious about the reason for the unusual number of named contributors, but oh well. All in all, good job to all involved, and thanks for the port.
I'm very hopeful that the other paths are included in the port as they get added, but I recognize how much trouble that could be and I'm satisfied with its current state. I'm kind of curious about the reason for the unusual number of named contributors, but oh well. All in all, good job to all involved, and thanks for the port.
Everything that currently exists in chyoa.com is in the Twine, but do to chyoa nature, anyone at any time can add new content at any point in the game to make their own path. Depending on the rules established by the creator, they might even be able to go into weird paths with aliens or whatever if there's no curation for it (it depends on creators, some are heavily curated).
Chyoa is a site that allows users to create an interactive story and if open, any user from chyoa can contribute with new paths. That's the reason for so many writers.
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So far this is by far the most ridiculous game story I have ever played.
There better be a harem ending.
Edit: Further in, this is very ntr-like
There better be a harem ending.
Edit: Further in, this is very ntr-like
- Aug 22, 2016
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It doesn't necessarily need to have NSFW images, although it would be a nice touch if it had the picture of the female characters next to its dialogue, however, that might be a little time consuming.:FeelsBadMan:
Man I read the description and I was like, cool really original-sounding story! Then I scroll down... AAANNNNDDD it's a text game 
... Let me know if there are any hardcore images please and thanks =P.
... Let me know if there are any hardcore images please and thanks =P.Look at the tags, there's none. It's a text-based game without the 3DCG, 2DCG, Real Porn tags which means its text-based only.Man I read the description and I was like, cool really original-sounding story! Then I scroll down... AAANNNNDDD it's a text game
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Great Storyline with much "Steaminess", but more like a linear erotica than a CYOA- since every part that could branch off just leads to a dead end. Also here's something I thought ye should correct in your story- ye talked about cell phones not being available to the public in the 80's, yet they were. I took this from searching google-
"Motorola was the first company to produce a handheld mobile phone. On April 3, 1973, Martin Cooper, a Motorola researcher and executive, made the first mobile telephone call from handheld subscriber equipment, placing a call to Dr. Joel S. Engel of Bell Labs, his rival." (i searched with- when were cell phones first released to the public)
If ye are going to write in present time, then ye should make it as factual as possible so that it is believable.
"Motorola was the first company to produce a handheld mobile phone. On April 3, 1973, Martin Cooper, a Motorola researcher and executive, made the first mobile telephone call from handheld subscriber equipment, placing a call to Dr. Joel S. Engel of Bell Labs, his rival." (i searched with- when were cell phones first released to the public)
If ye are going to write in present time, then ye should make it as factual as possible so that it is believable.
I'm not the writer and none of them are here you can leave that comment on chyoa.com, 80s cellphones were large bricks, unpractical to carry and i wasn't until the 90s that it became a normal thing to carry. I had one. PS: I don't think anyone said this was a CYOA don't confuse the name of the site (CHYOA) with the genre.
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I had one of those "brick phones" also.. weighed a ton and was huge, the battery was three-quarters of the weight. But to me CYOA and CHYOA are just about the same with the only difference being CHYOA is more for adults.