sigvar

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yeah incest is half assed, mc will call mom by name "karen" rather then title. also mc is not a brother/son
Yeah, this will require a patch just to clean up the names and references. Even if she was a legitimate step-mom, he would call her mom if he grew up with her. Probably not if she married his dad after MC moved out, but that isn't the case here.

The MC does refer to her as Mom sometimes, but not always. It is inconsistent. Also there are times when the word their is used instead of her or him. This is usually the case with sloppy Spanish type language to English.
 
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PyoT

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Not awful, but there's a notable chunkiness to the narration (and some kinda weird jumps) - as others have said, this surely is originally written in Spanish. Could be okay with some polish but how often does that actually happen? Not very frequently, by my observations.

So atm nothing that stands out too much in either direction. Needs an update or two to see if it'll develop into something.

ps: shame btw this just takes place in "Generic US" as far as I can tell; if you are Spanish (or from a Speaking-speaking country) why not mix things up a bit?
 

Black_Cat902

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Hmm your mothers name should be capitalized by default, and would be nice for either a language selection or the menus to be in English. Other than those nitpicks seems good will see what the updates bring.
Our dev had a problem with the script. It's a shame that it was uploaded like that, but we'll fix it for the next version.

As for the MC's relationship with Karen, we had to do it that way so that Patreon wouldn't delete our account, but we'll try to make a patch and fix it.
 
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Woodstock_1983

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The Dev needs to find a different color for the words for the players that likes to play without the textbox. You can hardly read the words. Screenshot 2026-01-14 060731.png
 

Woodstock_1983

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OK, I just started to play the game and must say, I wish other games that had slaves and other genre would follow this game. Instead of forcing people to do things, work on controlling their minds and getting them do consent to to things we want.
 

JoeTheMC84

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is it black on white or Black and white? I'm confused. View attachment 5625760
Most people say it, "In black and white," it is the far more common way of saying it, especially now-a-day where less people read news papers and hard book but use screens where you can set it in dark mode and have white text on a black background. But "black on white," is also technically correct, which everyone knows is the best kind of correct, :LOL: because originally it comes from black ink on a white page. So on or and both work.
 
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