I must say I'm quite impressed. The girls are interesting. The MC is an weird one, but still likable. That's not easy to achieve, most fail miserable. It looks really good too, just sometimes a few little bit wonky animation (as an example: the way Lyra walked away after telling her to ask an teacher for an talk with her parents) or a bit weird camera, nothing serious. The pacing sometimes is maybe a bit strange/fast (Rikas flashing or Lyra). There are only two thing I dislike and one is Blair, but completely because my own taste. So nothing to criticize.
A bit to the gamedesign site. First thank you for making the puzzle completely optional. But that seems to make the intelligence stat completely worthless. Also I don't understand what charisma is supposed to do. Besides that you don't lose any money atm when you buy something. The other thing I don't like is the class system. If I understood correctly the decision what class we take will offer different girls. While it gives the game replay value and prevents that we are overwhelmed with the sheer amount of girls at the same time, I really don't like forced replay value.
When you call Raven and have the selection if you should get her something. There is an spelling error in the second option.
