- Dec 23, 2019
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I started this from day one again and haven't gotten too far, seeing a few continuity errors and dialog discrepancies.
They just drove for hours to reach a property they own (In the middle of nowhere?), where even the reception is nonexistent, yet Emily gets ready to go clubbing and returns hammered no less.
Emily wakes up the MC, and talks to him for a while, mentioning she is going to University and that the MC needs to go and see their parental figure.
We talk to said parental figure, to the point where the Parental figure asks the MC to wake up Chloe...the same Chloe who asked where her heels were with the name tag of Emily (The render is Chloe, the name tag associated is Emily)?
I recall many more upcoming gems that I get to look forward to, as I am sure are still in this.
One confusing thing is they will talk about the COMPANY...that makes BUSINESS.
Nothing specific, like maybe textile production, or insurance broker, a law firm, maybe an electronics manufacturer??
Further down the line, we get someone to GIVE us their company... which also makes business because this also makes sense.
Someone builds a company from the ground up, devotes their life to making it succeed, then just, oh sure no problem here are the keys, do you want fries with that?
I figured the Dev had an editor go through this by now, to catch the inconsistencies in the scenes, and delivery of the lines, since the dialog used to be abysmal, now it flows like English should, but maybe it was just a brief one-and-done sort of deal for just the dialog translation alone.
They just drove for hours to reach a property they own (In the middle of nowhere?), where even the reception is nonexistent, yet Emily gets ready to go clubbing and returns hammered no less.
Emily wakes up the MC, and talks to him for a while, mentioning she is going to University and that the MC needs to go and see their parental figure.
We talk to said parental figure, to the point where the Parental figure asks the MC to wake up Chloe...the same Chloe who asked where her heels were with the name tag of Emily (The render is Chloe, the name tag associated is Emily)?
I recall many more upcoming gems that I get to look forward to, as I am sure are still in this.
One confusing thing is they will talk about the COMPANY...that makes BUSINESS.
Nothing specific, like maybe textile production, or insurance broker, a law firm, maybe an electronics manufacturer??
Further down the line, we get someone to GIVE us their company... which also makes business because this also makes sense.
Someone builds a company from the ground up, devotes their life to making it succeed, then just, oh sure no problem here are the keys, do you want fries with that?
I figured the Dev had an editor go through this by now, to catch the inconsistencies in the scenes, and delivery of the lines, since the dialog used to be abysmal, now it flows like English should, but maybe it was just a brief one-and-done sort of deal for just the dialog translation alone.
