VN Ren'Py Broken Promises [v0.34] [Light Cavalry]

[Krampus00]

Yeah I think Grace's entire story would need changed at this point for me to enjoy the game. "Toning it down" isn't enough but that's just me. I'm afriad the damage may have already been done. Even outside of the detailed nature of it. Her story is still an illogical mess.

There is so much focus on Grace alone, but it's the writing style that causes the problems, adding every character's inner thoughts and making every one of them erotic is the problem, first, you don't get any serious talk, then the game spoils itself, and finally, it's just so used to write that for every situation that you get this kind of problem like Grace and more situations in the future.
You don't need that at all, or at least not that much, like once now and then is okay, but the entire game is based on perverted inner thoughts

By the way, what's the point of the comments and review system if everything one writes gets deleted?

 

[Monetauro]

People will never be satisfied

It is an unbailable crime for a woman to enjoy sex and have an affair with a married man. The same does not apply if it was the MC who passed the stick in every married woman in the world.
"Because I don't want to have a relationship with someone like that." For most, it could be said "then break off relations with yourself"
Not liking to read about it is another story. At least this point is without hypocrisy. But then again, it's not the end of the world. And I'll bet that after this avalanche, those who fear it will happen again can probably rest easy.

 

[SirAlexander111]

People will never be satisfied

It is an unbailable crime for a woman to enjoy sex and have an affair with a married man. The same does not apply if it was the MC who passed the stick in every married woman in the world.
"Because I don't want to have a relationship with someone like that." For most, it could be said "then break off relations with yourself"
Not liking to read about it is another story. At least this point is without hypocrisy. But then again, it's not the end of the world. And I'll bet that after this avalanche, those who fear it will happen again can probably rest easy.

She could have been worst possible hooker or prostitute and i don't give a damn about it and I'd gladly pursue her but i don't want to visualize anything related about it. She had past, everybody has but somethings are off-limits.
Which group do i qualify? hypocrite?

Damn you spacebar.

 

[Monetauro]

She could have been worst possible hooker or prostitute and i don't gave damn about it and I'd gladly pursue her but i don't want to visualize anything related about it. She had past, everybody has but somethings are off-limits.
Which group do i qualify? hypocritical?

You marked my answer but didn't read it? Read it again.

I think is what most people complained about, I did too, I'm not a fan of being forced to read such things in a romance game...it doesn't make sense either to force that information on the player even less her thoughts about how she liked it...

Then... It has been said that this will be lessened. Let's see if everyone is happy in the next update.

 

[Cotytto]

You can't unruin a character without a massive concerted effort. I don't think that is within the toolset of the devs of this game judging from what little I remember from my first playthrough. You might as well go for the en tee arr audience cause frankly from what I've read you can't pull off anything else at this point.

Good luck with the game cause if it is already stumbling this early on, oh boy ya'll going to be in for a ride.

 

[pixado7875]

How tf did this get 10+ reviews so quickly, all in the same day??
This thread was made 6 months ago and didn't get a single one till now

 

[Krampus00]

How tf did this get 10+ reviews so quickly, all in the same day??
This thread was made 6 months ago and didn't get a single one till now

The demo was release 6 months ago, the first version of the game today.

 

[Bacara]

I have no issues with the words or Benoits actions, that happens a lot in real life and toming it down won't change a thing. Just make her refuse the blackmail and make the pig be arrested for hate porn. Again, toning it down won't change a thing.
For me, as I stated before, there's just too much drama and I didn't need that scene to add salt to injury.

ALSO, tell your writer that his father is a "Beta bitch" when you talk to him.

Add the F Blackmail tag, you wasted hours of my life.

The blackmail shouldn't be a problem as such, because it's present in a lot of good AVN's. This was just poorly done in my opinion and I'm not sure that Grace can be redeemed after this.

 

[Cotytto]

How tf did this get 10+ reviews so quickly, all in the same day??
This thread was made 6 months ago and didn't get a single one till now

Updates that piss people off tend to get two reviews. People that hate it and want others to know what they hated to save them the download, and people that love it and will give glowing reviews.

 

[kartolas]

The blackmail shouldn't be a problem as such, because it's present in a lot of good AVN's. This was just poorly done in my opinion and I'm not sure that Grace can be redeemed after this.

Sure mate, It's a matter of taste. I play these to unwind so I favor story above all and I simply avoid blackmail, humiliation among others. My point was that the tag wasn't present and it should be. If it was, I wouldn't even be here.

 

[Bacara]

Sure mate, It's a matter of taste. I play these to unwind so I favor story above all and I simply avoid blackmail, humiliation among others. My point was that the tag wasn't present and it should be. If it was, I wouldn't even be here.

I'll be amazed if this game avoids NTR, it's walking on that tightrope now and this is only the first release.

 

[Hercule_Poirot]

Jeez...the amount of drama in this 0.1 puts soap operas to shame, every character has their own sob story and personal hell. I concur with what has been previously said, by the time you reach the blackmail part I was so put off by the idea of finishing the update that I guess I'll just abandon this and look for a less overly dramatic visual novel.

 

[Call of Booty]

Hello everyone!
Since Grace after work scene and her last scene is very criticizedheavily and not liked my writer will look into toning down the detailed nature of the words since its too much for some.

Kind regards
-Knight

Just make her go away(she is already gone for most of us),like escaping from all that trauma. We got enough drama already with all other characters.

 

[Canto Forte]

MC is bored .. which springs all the babes onto him to offer their company.
MC is a protect and serve beef cake bonified hero in blue - theya re melting for him to save them,
deep, throbingly hard and relentlessly pumping his love juices all the way into their most sacred of pelasure inducing cores.

Bang oN!

 

[AngelsAfterDark]

Walkthrough? For what? There is 2 choices in the entire game so far. lol....The VN is extremely wordy was almost zero choices. Not my cup of tea..

I too don't like VNs with little choices but this is 0.1 so it's not really problematic yet.. There's no need for a 0.1 release to have much choices.

 

[mentore]

I like very much this game and its storyline.... Also it has wonderful renders!

 

[Lerd0]

...it was meh.....
..thread was better....

 

[Mirewen]

Well, it's my first try and with what I've encountered so far ...
Graphics are solid and top of the line.
Story is explained well however connections seem covered in fog at the moment. I also foresee player has to make some difficult choices to make in the story ahead.. whom to save and who's a lost cause.
All in all this game could easily become one of the best out here.
Although dev has a team to help and correct I've encountered a few misstakes. In the garage (kylie is already gone) a few times. And when Kylie and her dad are talking in the bar there should be "mean" between doesn't and your.
see att.

 

[Vlad Cepesh]

This game has so much promise, but has many writing problems. It has to many inner thoughts that drag story to much, but have no real purpose overall. Also to much plot points, interconnections between characters, to many revelations. Some of these stuff could have been saved for later realeses. All that stuff about Grace and blackmail storyline can be ok, but we need to se how is handled. For now it has no visible purpose and it has been handled bad. Maybe writter can do better.

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

All I know is most of these LI's have more baggage than an airport terminal. Half tempted to name my MC Captain Save-a-hoe