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I really liked the old version, this one I quit half way through. Characters are shallow and the dialogue seems unnatural a lot of the time... won't bother with this unless writing improves a lot.
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Glad you at least gave it a shot
- Jan 29, 2020
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I don't recall much of the original version, but I feel like the rework flows well. Only thing I felt was unclear was how Vanessa and the MC are connected.
Story has great potential; a few grammar issues still need some tweaking. Characters are off to a great start, and I can't wait to see where this one goes.
Story has great potential; a few grammar issues still need some tweaking. Characters are off to a great start, and I can't wait to see where this one goes.
I'm still doing my best to improve my writing, but I'm happy you feel that way and I'll do my best with your feedback <3
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I'm really enjoying it. I would like to see more police story though 
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we'll get there it's just the first chapterI'm really enjoying it. I would like to see more police story though
and I'm really enjoying the story of being a cop
does anybody else have the song from Bad Boys 2 playing in their head when they're playing the game?
I'm about to go all Will Smith up in here
and Keep My Brie’s Name Out Your Mouth
- Jan 29, 2020
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Well, at least it isn't White Chicks. Brie may end up my choice as well, gonna need more time to get to know her. Right now, it's Alice unless Vanessa comes back soon. Chasing Sunsets ruined me with the "red-headed sister" vibes.we'll get there it's just the first chapter
and I'm really enjoying the story of being a cop
does anybody else have the song from Bad Boys 2 playing in their head when they're playing the game?
I'm about to go all Will Smith up in here
and Keep My Brie’s Name Out Your Mouth
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Hello Patrons
So I'll be honest in terms of rendering there hasn't been much progress, i've been writing a bit and also planning ahead. Also been having issues IRL, but I'll figure them out. There won't be a preview this week. I'll have one later this week.
Here is the progress
-Render count 750
- Word count 12570
- Scene 7.2/10+
Hope you guys have a good week, gonna work more this week so I can get this chapter out and running on your PC's
Kind regards
-Knight
- Oct 9, 2017
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Hi good start from the rework am curious how it will go further.
I was once so free and have translated it Broken Promises [Ch.1 Rework]GERMAN
I was once so free and have translated it Broken Promises [Ch.1 Rework]GERMAN
- Oct 9, 2017
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Great , but i must thank u for the development of the game
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Yeah noted, check OP there is a version out there. Note I didn't make it download it at your own risk
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Finally got around to playing the rework. Massive improvement. Benoit has been erased from literal existence,and Grace's little wink made me lol.
Knight_BP keep up the good work. You're killing it.
Knight_BP keep up the good work. You're killing it.
Haha Thanks, Benoit is not gonna show up at all in the game. I had another vision from the start of the game with Grace and I'll actually continue and work on it. You guys should hopefully like the next chapter