VN Ren'Py Broken Promises [v0.38] [Light Cavalry]

[Bendover885]

I don't recall much of the original version, but I feel like the rework flows well. Only thing I felt was unclear was how Vanessa and the MC are connected.

Story has great potential; a few grammar issues still need some tweaking. Characters are off to a great start, and I can't wait to see where this one goes.

 

[Knight_LC]

I don't recall much of the original version, but I feel like the rework flows well. Only thing I felt was unclear was how Vanessa and the MC are connected.

Story has great potential; a few grammar issues still need some tweaking. Characters are off to a great start, and I can't wait to see where this one goes.

I'm still doing my best to improve my writing, but I'm happy you feel that way and I'll do my best with your feedback <3

 

[Cooling Prob]

I'm really enjoying it. I would like to see more police story though

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

I'm really enjoying it. I would like to see more police story though

we'll get there it's just the first chapter

and I'm really enjoying the story of being a cop

does anybody else have the song from Bad Boys 2 playing in their head when they're playing the game?

I'm about to go all Will Smith up in here

and Keep My Brie’s Name Out Your Mouth

 

[Bendover885]

we'll get there it's just the first chapter

and I'm really enjoying the story of being a cop

does anybody else have the song from Bad Boys 2 playing in their head when they're playing the game?

I'm about to go all Will Smith up in here

and Keep My Brie’s Name Out Your Mouth

Well, at least it isn't White Chicks. Brie may end up my choice as well, gonna need more time to get to know her. Right now, it's Alice unless Vanessa comes back soon. Chasing Sunsets ruined me with the "red-headed sister" vibes.

 

[Moryaka26]

Can someone share Status Report?

 

[Knight_LC]

Can someone share Status Report?

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Hello Patrons

So I'll be honest in terms of rendering there hasn't been much progress, i've been writing a bit and also planning ahead. Also been having issues IRL, but I'll figure them out. There won't be a preview this week. I'll have one later this week.

Here is the progress

-Render count 750

- Word count 12570

- Scene 7.2/10+

Hope you guys have a good week, gonna work more this week so I can get this chapter out and running on your PC's

Kind regards

-Knight

 

[BigPaul]

Hi good start from the rework am curious how it will go further.
I was once so free and have translated it Broken Promises [Ch.1 Rework]GERMAN

 

[Knight_LC]

Hi good start from the rework am curious how it will go further.
I was once so free and have translated it Broken Promises [Ch.1 Rework]GERMAN

Thanks for making a german transtlation I'll add it in OP

 

[BigPaul]

Thanks for making a german transtlation I'll add it in OP

Great , but i must thank u for the development of the game

 

[Moryaka26]

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Hello Patrons

So I'll be honest in terms of rendering there hasn't been much progress, i've been writing a bit and also planning ahead. Also been having issues IRL, but I'll figure them out. There won't be a preview this week. I'll have one later this week.

Here is the progress

-Render count 750

- Word count 12570

- Scene 7.2/10+

Hope you guys have a good week, gonna work more this week so I can get this chapter out and running on your PC's

Kind regards

-Knight

Thanks bro

 

[7Miracle-]

Cheers GeekBone
MAC:
Mega
Andrioid:
Mega

Android link not working anymore

 

[Knight_LC]

Android link not working anymore

Yeah noted, check OP there is a version out there. Note I didn't make it download it at your own risk

 

[Vidal the king of Pervert]

Here

You must be registered to see the links

Hello Patrons

So I'll be honest in terms of rendering there hasn't been much progress, i've been writing a bit and also planning ahead. Also been having issues IRL, but I'll figure them out. There won't be a preview this week. I'll have one later this week.

Here is the progress

-Render count 750

- Word count 12570

- Scene 7.2/10+

Hope you guys have a good week, gonna work more this week so I can get this chapter out and running on your PC's

Kind regards

-Knight

take your time brother there is no rush

and I hope you're doing alright

 

[Leo20]

Can someone share Status Report?

 

[JoeAngel]

when this game get's completed tag hit me up i mean last time I keep it a run after L&S and now I learned so keep up the good work and Hope to see awesome story looks like it also I hope to see incest tag if there is any chance for it

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

Finally got around to playing the rework. Massive improvement. Benoit has been erased from literal existence,and Grace's little wink made me lol.

Knight_BP keep up the good work. You're killing it.

 

[Knight_LC]

Finally got around to playing the rework. Massive improvement. Benoit has been erased from literal existence,and Grace's little wink made me lol.

Knight_BP keep up the good work. You're killing it.

Haha Thanks, Benoit is not gonna show up at all in the game. I had another vision from the start of the game with Grace and I'll actually continue and work on it. You guys should hopefully like the next chapter

 

[Call of Booty]

Anytime soon we can hope for update?

 

[Knight_LC]

Anytime soon we can hope for update?

Very soon, it's in the end of coding phase atm