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Pogo123

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personally really like Hannah character but this comic isn’t about the bucket list anymore and gets more and more generic what we see in plenty of other comics….
 
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Dr. Tom

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The current story development has nothing to do with the original idea that Mert wants to work on his bucket list. There is no more of the special relationship between Mert and Linda. And also that this relationship has developed over the years so that the two finally confess their true feelings to each other on the island.

How can you screw up a good story like that?
 
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Hildegardt

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The current story development has nothing to do with the original idea that Mert wants to work on his bucket list.
The actual items on the bucket list never got revealed. Mert probably knows exactly what the resort is all about, but he even kept the nude part a secret from Linda. He's been fucking her over from the start.
It's pretty funny how quick people are to identify with the shrivelled goblin dude, even though Linda is the obvious protagonist.
 
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DD3DD

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The actual items on the bucket list never got revealed. Mert probably knows exactly what the resort is all about, but he even kept the nude part a secret from Linda. He's been fucking her over from the start.
It's pretty funny how quick people are to identify with the shrivelled goblin dude, even though Linda is the obvious protagonist.
To be fair the majority of Mert's Pervert Bucket List probably has Linda mentioned, I know mine would be in the BL universe :sneaky:;):devilish:
 

Dr. Tom

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On the meta level of a story development, it's like this: many people's hearts warm when they see a happy couple in a comic like this who really love each other and whose carnal desires are also not neglected (okay, probably only those who are interested in a story at all).
But the author must always be aware there is a great danger that there is of course not enough variety when this couple is seen over and over again in new scenes, perhaps sometimes in different positions, but for about 8 long updates.

Why an author should doing this?

What about the other characters from this universe? We simply haven't seen any development with these characters, nor any new scenes that would add variety. And because such a story development can quickly become boring, now comes the story development with the crowbar:

Himeros simply pulls off the usual weak story twist that there is somehow a problem between the two lovebirds and they actually always wanted to try it with other people. Really?
This is such a common story in comics like this... you've seen it 1000 times. Sure, an author can do it, and will definitely find his fans, but then the story is just stuck in the usual mush of many of these comics. What a shame...
 
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