RPGM Abandoned BUREACH: Gates of Time [v1.3] [thehorses2]

[MilkyMartha]

not working for me idk

 

[Ross_69]

Looks pretty bad, but that's a low price to get a Bleach porn game Will definitly play it in the future. May have better plot than some of the latter arcs in manga, lmao.

Do you only use Super Deepthroat images, or other rule 34 images too?

 

[thehorses2]

Art and premise is promising as fuck. Been a fan of Bleach, so creating a game where you start in a place as unexplored as the Maggot's Nest is amazing. It's a shame you don't actually spend more time down there. Why not create a prison break unintentionally created by the appearance of Ikaku and Hisagi? That'd make it plausible for them to not be able to find you. As it stands, it doesn't make sense that they let you out of the cell and around other insane inmates who attack and could possibly kill you.

Biggest complaints:
The map is dreadful. I feel like this won't be an easy fix, but anyone who has played any half decent RPG is not going to forgive this. 1: Walk speed is mad high. Lower it. If you're worried about people getting bored of going from A to Z or whatever, just lower the size of the maps.
Combat is alright, aside from the portraits. The block portraits really make the game look cheap as fuck. It's actually shockingly easy to remove the background from the pictures, highschool stuff where I'm from.
I don't like the breaking of immersion that happens, for example, if you fight Hisagi and Ikaku, they have (holding back) next to their names before the first blow is even dealt. 1: Why tell us? Let us find out ourselves through the narrative or gameplay, not some damn sign. 2: Why use a picture of Ikaku all beefed up when you're fighting his "(holding back)" form?
More on the (holding back) stuff. It makes no sense. Hisagi and Ikakku holding back to the point where they let a dangerous prisoner beat them unconscious, where they could play skinny dipping with their guts for all they know. This is even worse with Hitsugaya because he lets you run around killing Shinigami left and right after you beat him.
Caps lock is something children or unhinged twitter drones use. Please don't ever do it. At least bold your text. Also, if the narrator isn't talking, but your inner zanpakuto, you need to mark his speech. I literally though the narrator was screaming at me a couple of times.
You have huge open areas with nothing to do, and maybe it's just because I chose illusion, but talking to people was a pain in the ass because they'd drag me into a long, drawn out fight because I'd already spent my mana and had no items to refill my mana. Either cut these areas or add some stuff.

The biggest by far, though, is the narrative/dialogue. They are horribly formatted and sometimes reads like MTL even though the original language is English. This seems to be a very common problem with H-games made by singular people. But it has to be dealt with. After all, porn in H games is 100% about context and agency. Otherwise we'd be fapping to pictures.

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Nobody is going to take the narrative of this game seriously while this level of quality exists in it.

Homie has a discord, so there HAS to be people out there willing to help. I love this, though. I want it to be the best it can be. Took me way back, too. Even the reference to Mayuri Kurotsuchi once being in the Maggots Nest cells had me fanboying.

I won't rate this right now, but I think this was way to rough to be officially releasing in any capacity.

The areas being empty is agreed , however a war does start in the main story so it sort of makes sense in my head , but I am planning on adding many side stories .

English is actually not my first language , I guess one can tell xD ...

Ikkaku and Hisagi deal some serious damage if you miss , if you are not Strong Guy especially , the context was they were just surprised by your power and didnt put up much of a fight refusing to use their Shikai or Bankai at all .

I see your a fan of Mayuri , consider playing a Loyalist and taking Hado training for more interractions with him .

Thank you for taking your time to review the Game .

 

[thehorses2]

Looks pretty bad, but that's a low price to get a Bleach porn game Will definitly play it in the future. May have better plot than some of the latter arcs in manga, lmao.

Do you only use Super Deepthroat images, or other rule 34 images too?

In some interactions there are non super DT images they are more rare however ...

 

[thehorses2]

not working for me idk

What seems to be the problem could you please screenshot ?

 

[Ross_69]

In some interactions there are non super DT images they are more rare however ...

A bit of a shame, since Bleach has quite enormous amount of R34 pics, but better than nothing.

 

[thehorses2]

Coolio.

So something that might need improving/adjusting upon is the game speed.
I don't know if I just pressed something I shouldn't have, but when I started playing the game, everything was moving at hyper speed constantly, making doing anything feel basically impossible.
I only played for a few minutes before I had to call it quits because I kept sprinting five spaces in an instant or selecting commands that I didn't mean to navigate to.

I also noticed quite a few typos and grammatical errors as well as word text wrapping issues, but I figure that can be fixed fairly easily with spell check and a word wrap program.

As for the gameplay itself, I personally would recommend getting rid of the energy requirement to fight unarmed and would bump up the damage unarmed attacks do since open handed combat happens quite a lot in Bleach and is just as, if not more dangerous as someone wielding a sword (Yoruichi, Yamamoto, and Chad being prime examples from the show).

I have to have MP for Hakuda... Because those who specialise in Hakuda Training (Traitor Storyline only , by beating Ikkaku and Hisagi in Maggots Nest) are REALLY OP at least in terms of attack . Try it yourself tell me what you think. Like their Hakuda hurts approx 2x times normall Hakuda per hit .

About the Game Speed I think you have Dash turned on , please go Options in Game (Escape key ) and select Always Dash Off . You can dash manually by holding Shift and arrows or double left clicking on a tile via mouse at least thats how it is for me .

I need help with grammar English isnt my first language :,) . I will probably get a friend to do it .

 

[thehorses2]

A bit of a shame, since Bleach has quite enormous amount of R34 pics, but better than nothing.

Nothing is out of the option in the future . DM me your favorites I may take them

 

[thehorses2]

I feel I must clarify , the Shinigami dont give 2 sheets what goes on inside Maggots Nest , they let prisoners walk about freely unless they are considered to be extremelly dangerous like Mayuri or in our case the Player character (these prisoners are held in Cells instead) .

 

[thehorses2]

First...What new anime? What new manga? Do you mean this one-shot that takes place in London? Bleach is getting new season? Is there a release date? Or is it just another one of those rumor that never becomes true?

And with that out of the way...

Good job! The number of sweet waifus available in Bleach is ridiculous. And in so many flavours too.
You can go Unohara for femdom, Rangiku for slutty, Orihime for airhead, Yoruchi for...not femdom but close?
Nemu and Soifon fills the petite roles quite well. I really like them, could have something to do with their skimpy(comparatively) attire.

I really hope the Hollows are included. Fuck I hope there is pro-hollow content, I like them far more than I liked most of these black clad fuckers. Or maybe it's the side effect of reading The Vasto of White.

The Quincies can go fuck themselves though.

They say that the final Bleach Manga Season The Blood War Shinigami vs Quincy is being animTed and will be done by summer 2022 , but at this point any time in 2022 is fine by me .

Bleach is also going to get a new Manga Arc in Hell . Animated by Kubo-dono himself.

The entirety of Chapter 2 will mostly focus on Hollows , and Hollowfication the PC himself can becomes a Hollow or Visored .

 

[thehorses2]

First...What new anime? What new manga? Do you mean this one-shot that takes place in London? Bleach is getting new season? Is there a release date? Or is it just another one of those rumor that never becomes true?

And with that out of the way...

Good job! The number of sweet waifus available in Bleach is ridiculous. And in so many flavours too.
You can go Unohara for femdom, Rangiku for slutty, Orihime for airhead, Yoruchi for...not femdom but close?
Nemu and Soifon fills the petite roles quite well. I really like them, could have something to do with their skimpy(comparatively) attire.

I really hope the Hollows are included. Fuck I hope there is pro-hollow content, I like them far more than I liked most of these black clad fuckers. Or maybe it's the side effect of reading The Vasto of White.

The Quincies can go fuck themselves though.

Currently there are 2 Hollow lovers in the Game they are both seacret try to find them.

 

[thehorses2]

thehorses2 Quick note that you can fix right away: do NOT space before punctuation.

Got it :,) English is not my first language , and thats how we write .

 

[thehorses2]

Nice ! I used to watch bleach years ago, an rpg game is very nice, hyped to see rukia content

Romancing Rukia is hard but not impossible pro tip be a Bakudo specialists before entering Hueco Mundo .

 

[Lurker_555111]

Got it :,) English is not my first language , and thats how we write .

French is it?

 

[thehorses2]

French is it?

Well um Europe... No personall info :,) .
My heart belongs to Japan though .

 

[lagaard]

Want to preface this with not trying to be mean or rude or anything like that.

I won't say much on the artwork side of things, since I always think that's probably the easiest thing to work on, and placeholder artwork is probably better then nothing at all for this kind of thing.

But first, and I'd say personally foremost, the writing really needs a proofreader. It's fine if English is not a strong suit or anything, but of the parts that make a game, I think writing can really carry a lot of weight. And as it currently stands, the writing is extremely rough. Having someone to go over the script and rework it to make everything read more 'naturally', will certainly give the game a lot more appeal, I'd think.

And the next part I'd comment on, is the gameplay. Which right now, isn't anything too special or amazing, but certainly can use some work. I've only used Kurona thus far, but the current loop of combat isn't bad inherently, but the fact it seems once your MP runs out, you're basically completely defenseless/useless, and there's no way to actually get your MP back in a fight is pretty rough and punishing.

It might be accurate to Bleach in some way, I'm not sure (I admit, I've only had a passing interest, and only really know the early stuff. I do like the characters though).

The, for the lack of a better term, "battlefuck" combat seems really weird as well. It either seems to be an attempt to have interactive sex scenes in RPGMaker, or some kind of 'combat' that doesn't seem to work right? There's also a billion options, which makes me think the intent might be to go for interactive sex scenes of sort. I'd say commit to one or the other, and I'd personally lean to the "battlefuck" angle, but that's just a big personal bias.

The last thing I want to bring up as a complaint is bugginess. As it stands, I don't even know how you save. Again, only played as Kurona, but she seems to completely lack a save option at all.

All this aside though, I do wish you the best with this project though. I don't have any inherent issues with the concept, it's just really going to need some polish to shine. As long as you've got the passion and drive, I'm sure you can work on this and turn it into something memorable.

EDIT:
I also forgot one thing! The folder of guides and stuff, is actually a pretty nice touch.

 

[Lurker_555111]

Well um Europe... No personall info :,) .
My heart belongs to Japan though .

Definitely french .

 

[RossoX]

Ehh it's worth a watch at least to see where it goes.

 

[thehorses2]

Want to preface this with not trying to be mean or rude or anything like that.

I won't say much on the artwork side of things, since I always think that's probably the easiest thing to work on, and placeholder artwork is probably better then nothing at all for this kind of thing.

But first, and I'd say personally foremost, the writing really needs a proofreader. It's fine if English is not a strong suit or anything, but of the parts that make a game, I think writing can really carry a lot of weight. And as it currently stands, the writing is extremely rough. Having someone to go over the script and rework it to make everything read more 'naturally', will certainly give the game a lot more appeal, I'd think.

And the next part I'd comment on, is the gameplay. Which right now, isn't anything too special or amazing, but certainly can use some work. I've only used Kurona thus far, but the current loop of combat isn't bad inherently, but the fact it seems once your MP runs out, you're basically completely defenseless/useless, and there's no way to actually get your MP back in a fight is pretty rough and punishing.

It might be accurate to Bleach in some way, I'm not sure (I admit, I've only had a passing interest, and only really know the early stuff. I do like the characters though).

The, for the lack of a better term, "battlefuck" combat seems really weird as well. It either seems to be an attempt to have interactive sex scenes in RPGMaker, or some kind of 'combat' that doesn't seem to work right? There's also a billion options, which makes me think the intent might be to go for interactive sex scenes of sort. I'd say commit to one or the other, and I'd personally lean to the "battlefuck" angle, but that's just a big personal bias.

The last thing I want to bring up as a complaint is bugginess. As it stands, I don't even know how you save. Again, only played as Kurona, but she seems to completely lack a save option at all.

All this aside though, I do wish you the best with this project though. I don't have any inherent issues with the concept, it's just really going to need some polish to shine. As long as you've got the passion and drive, I'm sure you can work on this and turn it into something memorable.

You save in places where you heal Squad 4 Barracks , Squad 13 Barracks Ukitake Hot Springs , Urahara Shop , Ichigos House , Uryus Clinic .

The ,,battlefuck,, is more of a way for you as the Player to enjoy yourself in your sickest fantasies while looking at your favorite Bleach character xD... A bit of imagination goes a long way. This game isnt really about battlefucking its just a minigame .

 

[thehorses2]

Definitely french .

Can you find my restaurant in Game :,) Human world near Unagiyas Shop