VN Ren'Py Abandoned Buried Desires [v0.5] [Betisis]

[Mitsuna]

Some people seem to forget that there are different kinds of ntr. Among those are:
-Netori - mc steals other people's girls (so you play as degenerate shit) - degenerate version of ntr
-Netorase - mc allows for his girl to have sex with other people ("lesbian" ffm interaction is exactly this btw) - "normal" ntr
-Netorare - mc is cucked, girl don't ask him about his opinion (and he have to be aware of it) - cuck ntr

There actually more. And things that can be considered cheating is when cuck isn't aware of the fact, it doesn't count at all.

The thing I hate about ntr the most is the false advertising.

 

[Badjourasmix]

The dev already said that there won't be any NTR, let's just calm down. I've seen some people worried about sharing/swinging content. Some people consider it NTR others don't, as Mitsuna pointed out, sharing the girls is a part of NTR (netorase), but people in this forum don't use the ntr tag for that. Some clarification on that by the dev would be appreciated. Just so people can calm down a little bit.

 

[Duke Leo]

Interesting start to the game, but it needs more polish. I hate it when characters are supposed to "speak" in txt. "How R U doing?" - Please don't write like that. Good grammar is sexy!

That being said there are some nice renders and there are a lot of possibilities for this game. I'll be following along.

 

[BeenThroughHell]

You just caught my ATTENTION at these tags " INCEST AND LOLI " - awrooooooo -

 

[str8up]

PRETTY GOOD GAME I ENJOYED IT LOOKING FORWARD TO SEE WHATS NEXT

 

[fried]

Regardless of anyone's personal preferences or perceptions of definitions, there is no NTR in this game (which is netorare on this site). Oh, but look at all the off-topic discussion, nonetheless ...

It's a topic that tends to generate a stupid amount of noise, so let's try and keep the game as the focus for this thread, please.

 

[HandofVecna]

The game is pretty darn good.

 

[V&M]

Regardless of anyone's personal preferences or perceptions of definitions, there is no NTR in this game (which is netorare on this site). Oh, but look at all the off-topic discussion, nonetheless ...

It's a topic that tends to generate a stupid amount of noise, so let's try and keep the game as the focus for this thread, please.

Although I don't like you, I have to agree with that,
it’s turning into a very boring discussion and it’s polluting the page.
The developer has already stated that he will not have NTR (I am grateful for that)
But the discussion will end up going in another direction,
that of sharing.
I believe that the developer should do like others, who put the planned tags,
therefore, people decide whether to continue playing or not.
I believe that this way, I can prevent further discussions on these topics.

 

[Hellster]

Nice work so far, well done with the animation as well, and i'm not sure if the comedy was deliberate, but her "undercarriage" comment gave me a good chuckle, well done, can't wait to see where this game goes
SIDE NOTE: Please let us know once it's approved on subscribestar, as i don't generally do Patreon for incest games, they tend to get deleted on Patreon)

 

[Badjourasmix]

Although I don't like you, I have to agree with that,
it’s turning into a very boring discussion and it’s polluting the page.
The developer has already stated that he will not have NTR (I am grateful for that)
But the discussion will end up going in another direction,
that of sharing.
I believe that the developer should do like others, who put the planned tags,
therefore, people decide whether to continue playing or not.
I believe that this way, I can prevent further discussions on these topics.

Yeah having the planned fetishes is a good idea, that way people know from the beginning what they can expect and it helps avoiding pointless discussions.

 

[Natwestcup]

Promising start looking forward to the next installment

 

[callmemaximous]

Nice start. I will keep an eye on this

 

[artemis74]

A pretty decent start. Hopefully we do get loli and incest patches eventually. Will be keeping an eye on this.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I have played the prologue. I don't know if I'm going to enjoy this game or not, it all depends on how the love routes go (I don't like domination, female or male, for me the domination routes are off-screen). I need to see the next updates to know.

The scene in the kitchen isn't something I particularly like and I prefer to choose the conversation with the wife. Will all the sex scenes of the wife (and the other girls) be similar to this one?

 

[frownbird]

Usually when yet another VN shows up with the incest tag it is dragged down by tropes, horrible writing, and little to no literary structure. I consider Visual Novels to be novels first, with visuals to back them up, and some choices. The status quo seems to be make renders and then add a porn plot written by a fifteen-year-old. They often play out like captioned image stories rather than novels with visual implements.

Buried Desires stands out from those, even in the prologue, as it did not have dialogue that made me want to tear my hair out. While the text could use some proofreading, it seems to be a result of English not being the writer's first language rather than the result of amateur writing.

I try not to let hopefulness cloud my opinion, so I'm not going to drop a five-star review on a prologue; however, every red flag that I typically run across in v0.1's of visual novels are not present here, so I'll keep an eye on it. Good work Betisis I'm keen for the next update.

 

[myuhinny]

artemis74

The game is already patched so I'm not sure what you mean with the eventually part.

 

[Badjourasmix]

Moving away from the fetish discussion, this has been probably mentioned, but the dev should pay more attention to the sex scenes. The bj scene with mom there are a buch of renders where she still has her clothes on, but when you move to the animation part she is naked. It makes the scene look weird.

 

[thundersan86]

I don't mind technical mishappens. If the story is good I'm definitely going to play it. And this one shows some real potential. I'm keeping on my radar. Hopefully the updates won't take that long.

 

[haso1907]

nice

 

[Cartageno]

A very minor point, which still somewhat bugs me, is the lack of periods at the end of most (but not all) sentences. If one comes up with a period, it confuses me even more. Otherwise, typos and some wrong expressions notwithstanding, everybody can use a proofread, it definitely isn't Engrish.