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- Jan 12, 2021
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That is correct as far as it goes. The Luna story was downgraded to a nightmare.
My tips for the dev:
Don't go too many routes at first. When you have a certain level of experience, then you can still create side stories/sequels that play in parallel. But as I said, don't overdo it with the number of routes. There's a saying that goes: too many cooks spoil the broth.
If you want to include more subplots like the twins' subplot, then include a message when that story happens and include a few renders that link it.
Don't try to reinvent the wheel. Get technical and storytelling experience and think about what style you want and stick with it. You can't expect to jump from noir fiction to American Pie and then to Independence Day and end up with Lord of the Rings and people still willing to watch that mess.
Make a timeline with all the important events. It doesn't all have to be super detailed, something like "Week 1; Day 1: MC starts new job, End of Day 2 MC picks up niece and talks to sister about niece because XYZ". Ask yourself the question: Is what happens in time realistic? In the Mafia update, as I mentioned several times, the MC was taken out of his own plot, because bullet wounds take a long time to heal. I myself am someone who likes to make characters suffer but it must not take the characters out of the plot if they are still needed.
My tips for the dev:
Don't go too many routes at first. When you have a certain level of experience, then you can still create side stories/sequels that play in parallel. But as I said, don't overdo it with the number of routes. There's a saying that goes: too many cooks spoil the broth.
If you want to include more subplots like the twins' subplot, then include a message when that story happens and include a few renders that link it.
Don't try to reinvent the wheel. Get technical and storytelling experience and think about what style you want and stick with it. You can't expect to jump from noir fiction to American Pie and then to Independence Day and end up with Lord of the Rings and people still willing to watch that mess.
Make a timeline with all the important events. It doesn't all have to be super detailed, something like "Week 1; Day 1: MC starts new job, End of Day 2 MC picks up niece and talks to sister about niece because XYZ". Ask yourself the question: Is what happens in time realistic? In the Mafia update, as I mentioned several times, the MC was taken out of his own plot, because bullet wounds take a long time to heal. I myself am someone who likes to make characters suffer but it must not take the characters out of the plot if they are still needed.
- Mar 31, 2020
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Why is the English so much worse after the end of the 0.1 content, is the English still that bad in the newer content, if it is, the dev should focus on proper English first, a VN is a story based game, and making a story painful to read or difficult to understand is just pathetic.
If the dev doesn't want to do it, could someone here make "good English" and "remove pauses between every sentence" patches?
Until these things change, I'll have to delete the game from my PC.
If the dev doesn't want to do it, could someone here make "good English" and "remove pauses between every sentence" patches?
Until these things change, I'll have to delete the game from my PC.
well um the mc just gotten more and more horny and now he just going straight thirsty on anything , it feels like a huge disconnect from earlier versions
- Oct 6, 2022
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I love it, All these games coming back, now heres to hoping Apartment 69 also gets an update soon, I actually like that story and charcaters
- Aug 16, 2022
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That would explain it. The first 2 releases of this game were great. We had a premise, John Cena was a teacher when a student developed feelings for him and ended up offing herself. It fucked him up pretty bad to the point he left his family for a while. Game starts with a therapy session where he ponders coming back to teaching and then he gets an unusual teaching position at a private school. That was a decent starting point. And then it all went to shit.
From what I've played so far it hasn't improved. I'm planning on starting over and playing all content again but it doesn't seem likely that I'll stick with this one. All the dev had to do was stick with the school, student, staff and family at home. 2 Easy paths for every girl, a loving one and a more controlling and manipulating route. It's so simple it practically writes itself and he could have made money from it. But he veered this one into a canyon.
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Why can't I continue the game from the swing-phone scene? Is that still the current end of the game (at least since Nov. 2021)?
Updates?
Edit:
Forget it. I've read the forum.
It's being reforged. It will be bigger, better, etc. Can't wait!
In the meantime we will get side stories!
Yay! Side stories!
Awesome! Side stories...
Loosely based on the game...
So good...!
Sigh...
Just what we need!
Updates?
Edit:
Forget it. I've read the forum.
It's being reforged. It will be bigger, better, etc. Can't wait!
In the meantime we will get side stories!
Yay! Side stories!
Awesome! Side stories...
Loosely based on the game...
So good...!
Sigh...
Just what we need!
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Don't know if this was concluded earlier, but I'd certainly like some pregnancy/impregnation in this game.
- Jul 16, 2017
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I suggest changing the name to "Buried Hope" because there is no hope that you can save this game anymore ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I just wonder how you can take such a big step back, the first updates were really good, but since 2022 you are doing everything to waste such potential..
I just wonder how you can take such a big step back, the first updates were really good, but since 2022 you are doing everything to waste such potential..
- Aug 24, 2018
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I helped work on this game very early on, it was a fucking disaster from the start. He would spend days or even weeks working on a single scene, then cut it for no reason. His teacher plot wouldn't have worked anyways, the whole thing was going to be all preachy and highly politicized.
No, there is no hope for this game, this guy didnt know wtf he was doing from the start, and he wont magically figure it out so many years later. Btw hes Turkish, thats why the translation is so bad.
No, there is no hope for this game, this guy didnt know wtf he was doing from the start, and he wont magically figure it out so many years later. Btw hes Turkish, thats why the translation is so bad.
- Nov 26, 2020
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I don't understand the story, suddenly it's Christmas and the PoV change to the Daughters and then boom in the middle of nowhere he met Ruby.
Is it because i use a mod ?. Well the mod says it will show every scene.
The english is not very good and hard to follow.
Is it because i use a mod ?. Well the mod says it will show every scene.
The english is not very good and hard to follow.
- Feb 2, 2021
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Well i thaught that this game was burried after all the shitstorm that we got. There was a first version that seemed interesting then a delirium with mafia shit, so now the dev is trying to play Frankenstein and revive the game by sewing dead body parts !!
Is it worth it or just a walking dead loosing bits, ready to faceplant in some dog shit on the walkway ?
Is it worth it or just a walking dead loosing bits, ready to faceplant in some dog shit on the walkway ?
- Jan 23, 2021
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For all having problems opening it on mac try this:
/Contents/MacOS/lib/darwin-x86_64 open terminal at this location and type chmod +x BuriedDesires
than go to
/Contents/MacOS open terminal at this location and type chmod +x BuriedDesires
hope it helps
/Contents/MacOS/lib/darwin-x86_64 open terminal at this location and type chmod +x BuriedDesires
than go to
/Contents/MacOS open terminal at this location and type chmod +x BuriedDesires
hope it helps
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he is Turkish ? and now after what happened there recently he awakes ? with a half baked no even no update ?
maybe he is shaky wacky?
DEVELOPER , PEOPLE told you one and a thousand times, keep it simple do 2 plot branches first , then add more side stories or plot or more characters, thats the better way when one begins to do these VN games, BUT NOPE .
sad had , good renders , and was jail bait as so, but. thats all