Havenless_
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I understand what you are saying. I thought so too. I see it as follows:I finished the rework and I'll say it changed nothing? It was just a cast swap during the sex. Victoria scene was hot as hell by the way. Maybe it's a recency bias thing because i just finished but her scene was better than the Audrey one somehow. She's still manipulative as hell but she's definitely hot.
Also it seems like my concern was a bit too unwarranted since it ended basically the same. With this ending, i don't have any concerns about the story changing much, if at all. Only difference is that instead of Audrey being coerced into fucking her brother, unknowingly, she's going to be guilty of masturbating to her brother, who she thought was a stranger. Literally the only difference was no penetration for Audrey and the reverse for Victoria.
Also with this change, this also brought an interesting discussion. If we're really going with the notion from earlier that Audrey was "secretly" in love with the MC the entire time, isn't this the worse outcome? Not only did Victoria take the MC's virginity(?) but she made Audrey watch her the whole time while it happened, knowing full well that she loved her brother so much, supposedly. Isn't that like even more terrible? Especially for those who hate Victoria for the whole manipulation thing. Lesser of 2 evils?
This above isn't aimed at the dev or anyone in general. Just thoughts i had left over from what people were saying earlier before i played. I still feel the exact same as i did at the end of the first one. I still can't wait for the outcome of this part. The only difference is that instead of fucking her brother herself she watched her "friend" fuck her brother she apparently loves in front of her. How the hell is Victoria going to survive this one? Also won't Audrey be 100 times more conflicted about the whole thing now since her friend and brother hooked up? There's no way she going to be fine with hooking up with him that soon after this.
This is going to be on my mind for a while. Thinking about all the possibilities and that's not even factoring in the Mom and Eldest Sister stuff too.
1.- In the first scenario, Victoria blackmailing Audrey to fuck a stranger (who is actually the MC, her brother), the clear victims are Audrey and the MC. Audrey realizes, Victoria would feel no remorse in doing so. She would be happy or even give a damn. Meanwhile, the relationship between Audrey and the MC would be on the rocks thanks to this while Victoria could try to let them know that it's not so bad and Victoria, thanks to her being a blackmailer and a shitty friend, would be left as the "heroine" of the story since thanks to her, Audrey and the MC accepted her feelings. And this would be Victoria's bullshit pretext for the MC and Audrey to forgive her. "Sorry for blackmailing your sister into fucking you. I feel terrible, but it served to make you guys realize you're in love." Victoria might look like a victim, but she would be an irredeemable victim for what she did.
2.- In the second scenario, Victoria fucking the MC making Audrey look at them, seems to me a more redeemable scenario for everyone. The MC would still be a victim, Audrey too but to a lesser extent and Victoria would come off as a shitty friend, but not a blackmailer. Also, Audrey would keep her virginity as she wants it for a special person on a special occasion. (Also his brother. But this time being aware of it and genuinely wanting to do it) This would be a sincere pretext for Victoria to truly redeem herself. "I fucked your brother to give you sex lessons. I screwed up and I am genuinely sorry. But hey, at least I didn't blackmail you into losing your virginity to a supposed stranger."
I think both scenarios are strong enough to create the necessary drama. Both have their pros and cons. But, as I said, I personally think the second scenario is more redeemable for everyone.
If we look at it negatively, it's basically "I blackmail you into secretly fucking your brother because I want to help you but I'm a blackmailer and a shitty friend" or "I fuck your brother without you knowing while forcing you to watch so you learn because I want to help you but I'm a shitty friend."
Anyway, that's my way of looking at it. I find more pros to the second scenario than to the first.