Could be real good, could turn into shit too. Depends on how the story goes and such. It intrigued me enough to finish it, but also I do think some of it could have been cut down a bit. We get the world is shit, I feel long before the end of Maria's intro. lol
But it's fair either way. I will check out the next update.
Biggest complaints are things that can be easily fixed with time. There was a lot of typos, such as "lier" instead of "liar" but all was quite readable.
Also not enough of the other world story imho. But I get this was just an introduction to the main story and then into the characters.
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But it's fair either way. I will check out the next update.
Biggest complaints are things that can be easily fixed with time. There was a lot of typos, such as "lier" instead of "liar" but all was quite readable.
Also not enough of the other world story imho. But I get this was just an introduction to the main story and then into the characters.
Also
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