VN Ren'Py Caerlin: Rising [Ch-5] [Crowne]

[Ass Fan]

Haha really happy to hear that! That's the goal I have when I write, to make people feel and think.
Yeah, I used some of that fraternity vibe in Caerlin, but twisted it toward power and politics.
You'll see what happens with Beta!

Yeah, I'm liking this, keep it up!
Dude, that turned out great, you used the power really well.
Now I'm anxious, I really want to see it.

 

[Jungles70]

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[kcs93]

I never comment but i just wanted to say the thoughtfulness of the dialogue and relationship dynamics is phenomenal! I sat there and asked myself, "Is this how girls feel when they read smut?"
Please keep it up!

 

[CrowneDev]

I never comment but i just wanted to say the thoughtfulness of the dialogue and relationship dynamics is phenomenal! I sat there and asked myself, "Is this how girls feel when they read smut?"
Please keep it up!

Haha thank you so much! I'm really glad it hooked you!

I always try to make the dialogue feel real and engaging, and the relationships too. And to try to convey or teach something through my stories.

Thanks for commenting and for your review, it's really appreciated, especially since you don't usually do that!