VN Ren'Py Caerlin: Rising [Ch-5] [Crowne]

[Ass Fan]

Haha really happy to hear that! That's the goal I have when I write, to make people feel and think.
Yeah, I used some of that fraternity vibe in Caerlin, but twisted it toward power and politics.
You'll see what happens with Beta!

Yeah, I'm liking this, keep it up!
Dude, that turned out great, you used the power really well.
Now I'm anxious, I really want to see it.

 

[Jungles70]

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[kcs93]

I never comment but i just wanted to say the thoughtfulness of the dialogue and relationship dynamics is phenomenal! I sat there and asked myself, "Is this how girls feel when they read smut?"
Please keep it up!

 

[CrowneDev]

I never comment but i just wanted to say the thoughtfulness of the dialogue and relationship dynamics is phenomenal! I sat there and asked myself, "Is this how girls feel when they read smut?"
Please keep it up!

Haha thank you so much! I'm really glad it hooked you!

I always try to make the dialogue feel real and engaging, and the relationships too. And to try to convey or teach something through my stories.

Thanks for commenting and for your review, it's really appreciated, especially since you don't usually do that!

 

[Mellbear]

I love your analysis, really good!

Thanks for taking the time. I really love these kinds of comments!

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- Haha yeah, people often tell me with my stories that I make the MC’s dialogue a bit repetitive. It’s usually part of my style, though I do try to refine it!
- The choices do have some weight, but for the most part many of them are flavor-only. There won’t be multiple routes, just small variations.

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Thanks for commenting! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

I finally realized the other day looking back what your game is based on I saw an anime a long ass time ago that is extremely similar just without sexual scenes. Love election and chocolate is what this game currently reminds me of. And a tad of classroom of the elite I suppose.

 

[CrowneDev]

I finally realized the other day looking back what your game is based on I saw an anime a long ass time ago that is extremely similar just without sexual scenes. Love election and chocolate is what this game currently reminds me of. And a tad of classroom of the elite I suppose.

I think I tried that VN a long time ago actually!

And yeah, I've watched Cote, so I can totally see those vibes haha

I'm really drawn to hierarchy-driven stories, I wanted Caerlin to do its own thing with character psychology and relationships.

Glad you are enjoying it!