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JDKacperek

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Just checked and I have "ignore" option which let's me progress with the story starting with "previously on campus bonds" text. Am I missing much by choosing this option or not?
 

Avatarbr1

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Cleo and Francesca will need to have 2 saves here in the future, I see...

And that last `monologue` gave me creeps, because the last time I saw something like this in an AVN, shit hit the fan really hard (LoF).
 
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TonyMurray

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Don’t worry, I like the feedback.
I finished the second episode earlier and have made a post in my "favourites" thread (see link in my signature). Some specifics in terms of feedback though, as opposed to review, are here:
  • The story feels a bit basic so far. There are hints that something coming up may change that, but so far it doesn't feel like there's an actual story, it's more just a case of following MC around and meeting people (and doing other stuff with them perhaps). That's fine for a bit, but won't carry a game for long.
  • The sex scenes are mostly good, IMO. I like that there's a good variety of poses, but I found it a bit of a pain to go through them once in "story mode", and then have to go through them all again via choices before the "cum" option opens up and allows you to continue.
  • I didn't get the fight minigame at all. I mean, I understood how to play it, but I didn't see why it was there. It didn't seem to fit at all and there didn't seem to be any outcome from it, either good or bad (I know you touched on this bit in response to the query on the android port, though).
  • I didn't mind the free roams at all, I think they work well during "mingling" at parties, although I note that the very first one, exploring Jon's flat, felt weak.
  • I really like the girls, in terms of looks, variety, and character, I think it's a job well done there.
  • TIL that "Candance" is an actual name, as a variation of Candace. I wasn't sure if it was a typo or a pun, but on doing a quick check, apparently it's an actual name!
Overall, I like this game so far. Hopefully that will continue!
 

MCVisualNovels

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I finished the second episode earlier and have made a post in my "favourites" thread (see link in my signature). Some specifics in terms of feedback though, as opposed to review, are here:
  • The story feels a bit basic so far. There are hints that something coming up may change that, but so far it doesn't feel like there's an actual story, it's more just a case of following MC around and meeting people (and doing other stuff with them perhaps). That's fine for a bit, but won't carry a game for long.
  • The sex scenes are mostly good, IMO. I like that there's a good variety of poses, but I found it a bit of a pain to go through them once in "story mode", and then have to go through them all again via choices before the "cum" option opens up and allows you to continue.
  • I didn't get the fight minigame at all. I mean, I understood how to play it, but I didn't see why it was there. It didn't seem to fit at all and there didn't seem to be any outcome from it, either good or bad (I know you touched on this bit in response to the query on the android port, though).
  • I didn't mind the free roams at all, I think they work well during "mingling" at parties, although I note that the very first one, exploring Jon's flat, felt weak.
  • I really like the girls, in terms of looks, variety, and character, I think it's a job well done there.
  • TIL that "Candance" is an actual name, as a variation of Candace. I wasn't sure if it was a typo or a pun, but on doing a quick check, apparently it's an actual name!
Overall, I like this game so far. Hopefully that will continue!
Hey! Thank you for you review. I do have to agree with you on the story bit, I've focused a lot of my attention in setting major future events and I didn't have a lot to do with this one as it was too soon for things to unfold. I know I could have done a better job either way but I will improve it in the next episodes.

The fighting minigame will have its purpose, I didn't want the MC to just fight aimlessly without the player being involved, it removed a bit of the immersiveness. Also, my plans for that minigame don't involve just fighting, keep that in mind.

As for the free-roams, I will try to improve those as well. I'm going to try and place them whenever necessary to avoid wasting time on certain bits that would rather take a moment to complete.
 
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Hey! Thank you for you review. I do have to agree with you on the story bit, I've focused a lot of my attention in setting major future events and I didn't have a lot to do with this one as it was too soon for things to unfold. I know I could have done a better job either way but I will improve it in the next episodes.

The fighting minigame will have its purpose, I didn't want the MC to just fight aimlessly without the player being involved, it removed a bit of the immersiveness. Also, my plans for that minigame don't involve just fighting, keep that in mind.

As for the free-roams, I will try to improve those as well. I'm going to try and place them whenever necessary to avoid wasting time on certain bits that would rather take a moment to complete.
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jadepaladin

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I didn't think Sadie trying to boot you to the couch was out of character at all. There's trauma and it's not like MC has a magic cock that will fix that in one session, it'll probably take two. Having sex with the girl who literally told you she needed space hours ago is a win within itself.

I do think the free roams could use something. Maybe some kind of objective list so we aren't wandering aimlessly. The workout in the bedroom during the first free roam was a good example. I wouldn't have found it if I wasn't being overly meticulous looking for things to click on and I'm probably in the minority of people that enjoy that stuff.
 
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I didn't think Sadie trying to boot you to the couch was out of character at all. There's trauma and it's not like MC has a magic cock that will fix that in one session, it'll probably take two. Having sex with the girl who literally told you she needed space hours ago is a win within itself.

I do think the free roams could use something. Maybe some kind of objective list so we aren't wandering aimlessly. The workout in the bedroom during the first free roam was a good example. I wouldn't have found it if I wasn't being overly meticulous looking for things to click on and I'm probably in the minority of people that enjoy that stuff.
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jadepaladin

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I hate saying this because it's not 100% accurate but Sadie just seems like an unintentional parallel of Sage from BaDIK so far. Spencer even runs around in a letter jacket just like Chad but I blame that one on a lack of Daz assets. The Sadie/MC scene in her apartment reminded me of Sage kicking the MC out of her bed after sex. It's got similar energy with an MC looking for more and the girl being hesitant.
 
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