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oook....
suspicious quiet threat for nearly 1 year old game
i get it now - the preview pics are bait lol
oook....
suspicious quiet threat for nearly 1 year old game
Sry,no heels,no commentsoook....
i get it now - the preview pics are bait lol
Not yet, you should @ scrappyAre there any gelery unlocker or walkthogh ??
cool but in scenes?I am a heel fanatic View attachment 2499164
Hey, degenerates have ugly needs.not here too ....
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im with the people asking about the tags would like to know what fetishes will be in the game and if they will be avoidableIt would be interesting to know if the game is going to be harem and if it's going to have NTR and/or sharing. Until I know this I think I'm going to pass.
After suffering vicious comments, I welcome your kind advice, frankly, I am developing ep2, I have paid someone to help me translate, but unfortunately her translation is still not ideal, but I have no way ah, I have to work during the day, at night to take care of my daughter, the rest of the time will be used to create the game, from beginning to end only I am a person in the development, during the period did not get any useful help, not even sponsors, I just rely on a passion to persevereRight... So I don't want to be mean, or too harsh on my criticism here.
And I beg you, please don't take anything below as "dead-set serious".
Think of it as "satire" trying to "make a point"..
I fail to grasp what is going in this VN most the time.
There is a character, that you can put a name on. This character is "returning" to college/university?
And that's where everything collapse on itself.
I've pretty much spent more time trying to "write" the story in my head as I see each picture roll up on the screen,
than actually reading.
I'm no native English spoken person either, so I can't be all to serious and vehement on my criticism here.
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If the dev sees this.. Try to write the VN and it's dialogues in your own native language. Then try translating it afterwards.
It actually helps when seeing a properly formulated sentence in front of you, and then translate it afterwards!
And try not to use google translate!
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Often, people even volunteer around here, if a VN has enough of a following.
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Try not to use too much "slang" either.
As so far, as far as I've seen, most of the time they are not used as their correct meaning in this VN.
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But on a serious note, like mentioned, if you're not a native speaker, it helps to write stuff in your own language first.
Then translate afterwards. That goes for any language.
And don't get me wrong here. Not saying everything is donkey doo-doo here.
But it really could use work on the language used.
Aside from the language. Some "animations", could do with a touch up...
"Slideshows" are fine for the most part. Not everything have to be "60 frames per second".
With lower frame rates, "less, and slower camera movement" will make things look smoother.
It also makes less work for the person posing the set. And save a lot of time!
So if wanna take anything out of this, "Less is often more".
Else, renders are fine for the most part.
And sincerely, good luck on your VN!
I give you a tipanyone pass exams?
I didn't think my advice was too "kind" though, but I did indeed say not to think of it as mean, rater satire(humor).After suffering vicious comments, I welcome your kind advice, frankly, I am developing ep2, I have paid someone to help me translate, but unfortunately her translation is still not ideal, but I have no way ah, I have to work during the day, at night to take care of my daughter, the rest of the time will be used to create the game, from beginning to end only I am a person in the development, during the period did not get any useful help, not even sponsors, I just rely on a passion to persevere