HTML Abandoned Candid Urban Muffs [v0.52] [Clownpron]

[xmilteach]

Thx

 

[dan9000]

man the grind is too much

 

[Davox]

As of 0.11 there are ~500 image,movies.

I don't leave official reviews for games this early in Dev. but at the moment I'd stuggle even giving this a 2 and I prefer HTML real porn games...

TLDR review - its an absolute grind fest with very little content and very little frame work. Thr english teacher mechanic is one of the worst user experiences I have ever trawled through in a porn game. For a game that emphasise writing, the writting is bad. It makes sense grammatically etc, but the story writing is terrible.

For a game that specifically mentions you need to read everything using a bold font isn't great UI. I'll admit I skim read everything and that font choice makes it really hard.

Personally I detest HTML games with over zealous time/energy restrictions. The time management in this is way over the top, if you are going to force me to wash etc each day (boring) then let me have more time each day to do the fun stuff. The time restrictions are harsh already so why limit the amount of times you can do some things in day, its seems pointless. Pretty sure in the real world people can learn multiple time a day and only being able to physical train every 3 days seems void of common sense.

One thing I think HTML devs get wrong in the early phases of their projects is being overzealous with the grind when there isn't much content. Surly in the early days you want to give potential partreons the best view of your game possible and that isn't grinding away at stat building to find what ever content there is or isn't. Introduce grind slowly as the game evolves.

The whole university piece is an absolute chore and I was cheating the time sh!t out of it.

Console Commands / Cheats

Don't ask me how to apply these, if you don't know just search for it. Its dead simple and has been explained here in multiple threads.

Cheating may break your game or mean you miss content.

HTML changes to remove grind. Open .html in text editor

replace
trained3Day = 3
with
trained3Day = 0

find and delete (replace with nothing)
<<set $studiedPsychToday = 1>>
<<set $time += 2>>\

Find this
<<set $studiedEngToday = 1>>\
<<set $hasBook = 0>>\
<<set $readBook = 0>>\
<<set $time += 2>>

and replace with
<<set $studiedEngToday = 0>>\
<<set $hasBook = 0>>\
<<set $readBook = 0>>\

Find
$time += 2, $studiedMathToday = 1
replace with
$studiedMathToday = 0


Console Commands

SugarCube.State.variables.cash
SugarCube.State.variables.cleanliness (the default max is 200 so just set it higher than this and your daily clean level won't decrease below 200 so it won't impact the game , taking a shower resets to this and sometimes it resets over night). Think this is removed from the game now

SugarCube.State.variables.fame=100
SugarCube.State.variables.fitness=100
SugarCube.State.variables.intellect=100
SugarCube.State.variables.trained3Day =0 (lets you train fitness as often as you want, anouther bit of bullsh!t)

SugarCube.State.variables.psychLvl
SugarCube.State.variables.psychScore
SugarCube.State.variables.studiedPsychToday = 0 (to study more than once)
SugarCube.State.variables.studiedEngToday = 0 (to study more than once)

SugarCube.State.variables.hackingSkill = 24 (max hacking skill is 25, set it to 24 and then hack once)
SugarCube.State.variables.gameProgress=11 (game finishes at 12, set to 11 and then work on it once more)

SugarCube.State.variables.hasDynasleep3000= 1
SugarCube.State.variables.hasSmartGlasses= 1
SugarCube.State.variables.hasAlarm: 1
SugarCube.State.variables.hasBook: 1
SugarCube.State.variables.hasCar: 1
SugarCube.State.variables.hasDrone: 1

SugarCube.State.variables.time = 1 (the time move forwards numerically, 1 is the first slot of the day, 9 is the last)

To pass maths test
SugarCube.State.variables.testScore =8

Location unlocks

SugarCube.State.variables.foundMountains =1
SugarCube.State.variables.foundOldHouse =1
SugarCube.State.variables.foundPool =1
SugarCube.State.variables.foundSMRoom =1
SugarCube.State.variables.foundSecretBedroom =1
SugarCube.State.variables.parentsHouseUnlocked =1

Cheats

SugarCube.State.variables.notesUnlocked = 1


GirlStats
SugarCube.State.variables.relLeah =
change Leah with girl name of choice from below

1. relAlexis: 0
2. relAngel: 0
3. relCalibri: 0
4. relElla: 0
5. relElsa: 0
6. relGina: 0
7. relKarlee: 0
8. relKeisha: 0
9. relLeah: 0
10. relLisa: 0
11. relMia: 0
12. relMom: 0
13. relNia: 0
14. relTeanna: 0
15. relVeronica: 0

scene unlocks
SugarCube.State.variables.xxxx =1

replace xxxx with any of the below i.e. SugarCube.State.variables.seenAlexisHouseScene1 = 1

seenAlexisHouseScene1: 0
seenAlexisHouseScene2: 0
seenAlexisHouseScene3: 0
seenAlexisHouseScene4: 0
seenAlexisHouseScene5: 0
seenAlexisHouseScene6: 0
seenCalibriScene: 0
seenCaseyBarScene: 0
seenCaseyHouseScene1: 0
seenCaseyHouseScene2: 0
seenCaseyHouseScene3: 0
seenCaseyHouseScene4: 0
seenEllaDate: 0
seenEllaHomeScene1: 0
seenEllaHomeScene2: 0
seenLeahAndLana: 0
seenLeahApt1: 0
seenLeahGangbang: 0
seenLeahYogaFuck: 0
seenMiaStevenHouse: 0
seenToriSamuelMacScene: 0

 

[phenixxx]

You incarnate a black guy, it's all aboute interracial this game. Not for me.

 

[Lynx2k19]

What's Stephen's e-mail address?

 

[Lyka]

Html for an easier start:

You must be registered to see the links

 

[OnTopOfMyAnger]

Found a bug: "Go to Alexis' House" leads to a black screen.

 

[cantwakeup111]

brb throwing a tantrum over the software version format

 

[PirateLoko]

The game has improved, but the character remains with few actions.

This keeps the game boring and time slow, so the character needs to have more daily goals, maybe the character needs to discover new locations and suffer transformation for sissy, shemale and woman.

The character impregnating girls and becoming pregnant after the transformation would make the game more interesting and good.

 

[proton]

What's Stephen's e-mail address?

StevenWithTheBigOne@blackmail.com

 

[Hornyowl]

So how does one improve relations with Leah? It seems she is only in the Psychology class at present and i cannot progress further. Is she elsewhere and I have not triggered the meeting yet? Edit: She's in the gym
Also there is a game breaking bug when Casey comes to your house with TED. if you let them in and proceed, after you kick Ted out it goes right back to the start of the encounter where you can let them in or decline. Thus the infinite loop where you have no choice but to decline if you want to continue.

Leah's the girl in the gym. You need to progress by using psych knowledge on her a few times. Bit after that there are only two more psych classes before it ends. This thing needs content badly.

 

[Clownpron]

As of 0.11 there are ~500 image,movies.

I don't leave official reviews for games this early in Dev. but at the moment I'd stuggle even giving this a 2 and I prefer HTML real porn games...

TLDR review - its an absolute grind fest with very little content and very little frame work. Thr english teacher mechanic is one of the worst user experiences I have ever trawled through in a porn game. For a game that emphasise writing, the writting is bad. It makes sense grammatically etc, but the story writing is terrible.

For a game that specifically mentions you need to read everything using a bold font isn't great UI. I'll admit I skim read everything and that font choice makes it really hard.

Personally I detest HTML games with over zealous time/energy restrictions. The time management in this is way over the top, if you are going to force me to wash etc each day (boring) then let me have more time each day to do the fun stuff. The time restrictions are harsh already so why limit the amount of times you can do some things in day, its seems pointless. Pretty sure in the real world people can learn multiple time a day and only being able to physical train every 3 days seems void of common sense.

One thing I think HTML devs get wrong in the early phases of their projects is being overzealous with the grind when there isn't much content. Surly in the early days you want to give potential partreons the best view of your game possible and that isn't grinding away at stat building to find what ever content there is or isn't. Introduce grind slowly as the game evolves.

The whole university piece is an absolute chore and I was cheating the time sh!t out of it.

Couple of Bugs:
Hacking Mias massage cam just brought up a blank computer screen. I had to back out of it
Late in the game I got a message that someone was knocking on my door, clicking on it brought a black screen. I had to back out of it.

Thank you for your honesty.

I'm working on it right now. Next patch, everything will be quite less grindy, and I will try to put more content from the beginning of the game and on. To be honest, writing is not my strongest point, this being the first thing I really write from scratch. If anyone has advice on story-telling/writing in general, it would be much appreciated!

I want to thank everyone else for the feedback aswell.

Kind regards,

Clownpron

Edit: Also, I've decided that the 'white path' will be scrapped because the game will get way too big in file size if I add the 'white path' to this game.
My next game will be of the 'white path' but it will be quite a different story than this one.

 

[JayX]

how much is the grind in this? that tips makes it look appalling

 

[Clownpron]

how much is the grind in this? that tips makes it look appalling

It is quite grindy. I suggest you wait for V0.12 when it's released so it'll be balanced more.

In the meantime you could try the game with 'SugarCube Hacking'.

Kind regards,

Clownpron

 

[Mac2Night]

In Chrome You don't need any extensions
Press F12 and go into console then type in SugarCube.State.variables or SugarCube.state.active.variables depending on SugarCube version one of those lines will work
Then you need to find a stat that you want to change and after you change it you need to press a hyperlink in game to "go forward"(change rooms,buy something ,Anything but pressing Back because it will reset the cheat instead of setting it)
You need to do this from the start if you "went forward' because the console doesn't update

 

[Meenapatush]

Is the MC going to go down on one knee at any point in this game?

 

[Bars_III]

sooo~... who remember "Bechdel Test" gag from Rick And Morty?... why all female dialog in this game sound like continuation of this sketch?

 

[Mac2Night]

Both sister have only 2 scenes each , once it's over it's over(expect for the gallery)

It's usally good practice to check the Image folder of a game to see if you run out of content so you don't grind for nothing
Some games are also really bloated with 4mb png files when you can easly fit 10 times more content into a 4-6mb Webm
(extra detail is that 6mb is 4Chan's file size limit so there is probably a bunch of people already used to covenrting their files that way yet it still seems rare in games around here)

 

[Clownpron]

Does anyone know why Nia no longer comes home?

There isn't alot of content for the sisters yet, but if you haven't done anything with Nia then there must've been a wrong decision somewhere.

 

[ParadigmShift]

Clownpron There's a bug in the check for Tori House 2 scene. It's checking $money >= 800 and not $cash, making it impossible to get the scene through normal means.