Main pain points in the game.
Inability to hide text box via right click or H key.
Having the text scroll out instead of just be instant.
The MC collected items, but only items they deemed useful rather than what the player might grab. (A blood mage book is not taken but a random brick with some shards in it, or a knife are). Might just want to let the player take whatever they feel like or what they do find, instead of MC deciding it.
The writing needs some clean up.
2 points of info dump in the prologue seems a bit much. (succubus and camp)
Wish the pussy eating had some animation/sound, and the ending of the sex had a bit, since things just seem to end abruptly.
Would be nice if the UI fit more with the game.
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Also is that map from heroes of might and magic games?