This for sure. The message that I want to deliver to game devs, erotic writers, etc everywhere is that when you show up with misspelled words, weird or bad grammar, vague dialog that's hard to attribute to a specific character, and so on, you're making the reader work harder to follow your story. Worse, you're making the reader think about your grammar and what's wrong with it, instead of making them want to rub one out.
That Casting Director gets this right is one the many reasons the game is good.