Ren'Py Abandoned Celest Twilight [v0.6.0.B1] [Elrath Creations]

[Fazed]

You might not have noticed but we're on a forum, you know - where people discuss and share their opinions. Yea, sounds crazy, doesn't it?
1. "Let the dev(...)" - its not like Im gonna stop him... He can do whatever the fuck he wants, Im just saying its a bad idea which it is, especially for an inexperienced solo dev.
2. Gameplay is often detrimental in porn games and mindless clicking is usually found in various sandboxes, management games etc. VN with decent story/characters/dialogue and some interesting sex scenarios is superior medium for porn imo.
And no, pornhub is not an alternative.

Yes exactly. You are free to voice your opinion, and I am free to disagree or agree with your opinion and also say as such. Works both ways.

Yes, I agree it is the superior format. It is a video game so it is reasonable to at least expect more than a slideshow with text on it. However, I have played the bad ones and they suck, for all the reasons you said.

Yes, the first game was too much for an inexperienced dev, I agree. But while many devs try and fail, you can't make something good if you never attempt it. So I disagree with discouraging devs from even trying if they want to.

"It's not like I'm gonna stop him" - Not physically, but you practically said as much.

Ambition can mean failure before success, but not trying means you never accomplish anything.

- ok that got a bit philosophical It's a porn game. If you like it great. If not, give your feedback but you don't have to be sarcastic and discouraging about it. I'd rather have devs try and do something new than all make the same game with slightly different flavours. That's why a lot of us came to this format in the first place. All I am saying.

 

[wiseold6996]

Future tags seem interesting. It is hard to find a corruption game without sharing

 

[Elrath Creations]

Yes exactly. You are free to voice your opinion, and I am free to disagree or agree with your opinion and also say as such. Works both ways.

Yes, I agree it is the superior format. It is a video game so it is reasonable to at least expect more than a slideshow with text on it. However, I have played the bad ones and they suck, for all the reasons you said.

Yes, the first game was too much for an inexperienced dev, I agree. But while many devs try and fail, you can't make something good if you never attempt it. So I disagree with discouraging devs from even trying if they want to.

"It's not like I'm gonna stop him" - Not physically, but you practically said as much.

Ambition can mean failure before success, but not trying means you never accomplish anything.

- ok that got a bit philosophical It's a porn game. If you like it great. If not, give your feedback but you don't have to be sarcastic and discouraging about it. I'd rather have devs try and do something new than all make the same game with slightly different flavours. That's why a lot of us came to this format in the first place. All I am saying.

yea, I prefer to create a game that has some gameplay to offer as compared to the usual games here (at least 1.5 years ago).
I may not have much experience, but God & Void showed me my current limitations and when to spot overambition.

To those that showed support and constructive (non hate) feedback: a big thank you! I wrote a FAQ that you can find here:

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[Lightheart13]

yea, I prefer to create a game that has some gameplay to offer as compared to the usual games here (at least 1.5 years ago).
I may not have much experience, but God & Void showed me my current limitations and when to spot overambition.

To those that showed support and constructive (non hate) feedback: a big thank you! I wrote a FAQ that you can find here:

You must be registered to see the links

the That FAQ you talk about a base building Mechanic and while i always like those, May i ask what the current purpose with it is? Like would be to goal as you see it for this mechanic? Housing to the girls? or something more towards how one intearcts with the girls, thinking kinda like having cells/Dungeon in the base might not give the same feeling for the inhabitants as a gameing/Rec. room where you could spend "time" with the girls. or am i missing something obviuos?
I mean i generally like a base building mechanich, because it adds a customizeble element to a game so i would be interresting to see.

 

[darlic]

A couple of suggestions:

- Change the dialogues font (or make it changeable)
- Make it possible to navigate only using the mouse. The navigation via the keyboard is uncomfortable and also pretty bugged
- Some clickable locations are hard to see because they blend with the background, so make them pop out more, maybe you can achieve this by adding a solid background behind those
- The camera left/right pan movement can be a little bit confusing, I'd tone it down

 

[Anthaeus]

Nice to see something a bit different, many VN's are just variations on a theme that's been seen a lot before.

I agree it's an ambitious project and the first attempt was too much work for a solo dev, but I find it refreshing that we have a downscaled restart instead of the project being abandoned entirely or dragged out for months or even years.

It is impossible to please everyone with a project, as we all have a different subset of the vast range of fetishes and tastes that exist, but this looks interesting to me so I'll keep an eye on it and see how things develop.

Good luck with the project Elrath Creations.

 

[akiostein]

looks like remilia scarlet from touhou

 

[Deleted member 3835560]

So by "No Sexual Content", you mean no sexual content YET.

 

[The Pie Rat]

The "No Sexual Content" is a tag that's usually applied to a game that WILL NOT have any, not a game that doesn't currently.

That tag is why I decided to skip this lol.

 

[ThtsMyScrtCapImAlwysHorny]

The "No Sexual Content" is a tag that's usually applied to a game that WILL NOT have any, not a game that doesn't currently.

That tag is why I decided to skip this lol.

It only looks that way because the tag goes away once it's no longer accurate, or because the uploader neglects to apply it in the first place. By the forum rules it's supposed to be there if it's accurate, until it isn't. Furthermore, if the plan isn't for the NSC tag to remain accurate, the OP will usually say so in either the "genre" or "developer notes" spoiler block (as it does in this case), so putting games on ignore on the basis of the NSC tag alone is pretty dumb.

 

[MisterNephilim]

Where the hell is Sahaquiel ?

 

[morphiospain]

wow the art work is amazing

good luck on the project!!!

 

[Egris]

I hope this goes well , good luck dev

 

[Fallen Branch]

I wish we will see Nightmare or a variant in this... reset? of the story.

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[MisterNephilim]

I think I'm going to go insane, I still can't find Sahaquiel during "Midday"

 

[ssj782]

"No sexual content"
But... But... The models look so sweet and innocent that I NEED to corrupt them into cumsluts!

 

[Fallen Branch]

I think I'm going to go insane, I still can't find Sahaquiel during "Midday"

I think it's a bug for save from v1. I think we miss the trigger that make her spawn. Perso, I just started a new save.

 

[MisterNephilim]

I think it's a bug for save from v1. I think we miss the trigger that make her spawn. Perso, I just started a new save.

Good call, will do that. Thanks.

 

[Elrath Creations]

"No sexual content"
But... But... The models look so sweet and innocent that I NEED to corrupt them into cumsluts!

The game does contain sexual content since this public release. There was an oopsie in the tags (not the spoiler ones).

 

[A Common Crab]

The password is 2951 guys!