- Apr 17, 2021
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Nitpicky things I didn't like about this update:
1) Jaye doesn't kiss MC (just a hug). Really? After those heroics? C'mon!
2) Rinko Tanaka returns to deliver food, then leaves. No physical contact or show of affection. No acknowledgement of her presence from any other characters. Weird.
3) Another poster mentioned it, but no interaction with Tara at the airport until the car rolls around. Weird.
4) The Lisa lewd scene after walking her home felt off ... the location, the brevity, the casual anal, etc. Also, if MC is not interested in Lisa or otherwise shortens the scene, it would have been a nice consolation to have time to return to Jaye and get a scene with her.
5) And, finally, El Jorge. Weird and unnecessary (unless it implies the company is working on a product for male enhancement that MC tests next chapter ...)
Otherwise, I continue to keep this solidly in my top 10 all-time favorites!
1) Jaye doesn't kiss MC (just a hug). Really? After those heroics? C'mon!
2) Rinko Tanaka returns to deliver food, then leaves. No physical contact or show of affection. No acknowledgement of her presence from any other characters. Weird.
3) Another poster mentioned it, but no interaction with Tara at the airport until the car rolls around. Weird.
4) The Lisa lewd scene after walking her home felt off ... the location, the brevity, the casual anal, etc. Also, if MC is not interested in Lisa or otherwise shortens the scene, it would have been a nice consolation to have time to return to Jaye and get a scene with her.
5) And, finally, El Jorge. Weird and unnecessary (unless it implies the company is working on a product for male enhancement that MC tests next chapter ...)
Otherwise, I continue to keep this solidly in my top 10 all-time favorites!