Couple of things, right off the bat. The first main dude seems to be either Daniel or David, depending on if you go by the dialogue or the nametag. Also, goddammit devs, stop putting light, thin font text against light backgrounds. Are you just trying to damage our eyesight? Just give me TNR Bold font, white text on a black opaque textbox. In this case it was a thin font, yellow on pink. I fiddled around with the gui.rpy file and made it far more readable, plain white, bold font on the same pink textbox.
This is so much easier to read...