EDIT: Played 1.5. There were quite some small problems here & there, but should be fine with polishing/correction.
I'll just focus on 4 points, 3 feedback & 1 request. In order of importance:
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4. Finally a request - could we disable the images beside the dialogue? If not all characters, atleast the MC? I find it distracting & annoying to constantly see a miniature potrait beside the dialogue.
Extra: 5. Narrative: You meet Saya in the bar, yet the final scene the MC doesn't recognise her. Similarly Silver magician is still described as mysterious in the dialogue with Kiri, even though we got a different story from visiting the bar previously.
Oh, and some of the dialogue titles are messed up, like it says character A is speaking when it's actually character B
. Common errors in these games tbh. I'll try to log the exact lines next version if I get time. I think I saw the errors in the starting scene (MC, Morgana & the 2 girls) & maybe a title was missing in the last scene in the room with all the people. Not sure tho.
Anyway, hope it helps. See you next version
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Meanwhile, women only ovulate for a short time per month. So most of the time, it's fucking irrelevant. No ovulation, no fucking pregnancy. Did all of you sleep through basic biology cause you wouldn't need it in real life?
Really??
Must've been in the the same week they covered Chimeras. Had no idea they could be this powerful & defy basic physics either.
For sometime I was worried I had slept through basic physics, thank
godthe holy Chimera, it was just biology
I guess I use the word definitely a bit too definitely. By cheating, I mean Netori (before someone freaks out, it means the MC stealing the SO), I'm just avoiding using the word in case someone might not know the difference. Potentially, there might be options if the MC promises to be exclusive with someone and then cheats, but this might be a bit too difficult to integrate with the whole harem thing.
It's something I need to play around with after the Sandbox part is done. I never enjoyed NTR much, but Netori isn't shabby
Netori is like the abandoned step-child of the ntr family who can only hang out with the rival harem family
Netori is directly opposite to netorare/netorase, hence it's not often found in ntr games, but meshes well with harem usually.
Tbh it's pretty underrepresented & I'd be glad to see another game having netori content. Once the new tags come in, hopefully more people will be aware of this Dominant ntr variant.
Gotta wonder how far you wanna push the cuck content alongside it though. Is the male partner mentioned? Is he informed? Watching? Crying in the corner? Participating (in a totally sub cuck capacity ofc)?
Ovu... what? Suspension of disbelief xD
But you do make a good point... I need to give it some thought. It's a little difficult because I want the pregnancy thing to be another Hematarch questline, so in my mind I'm hoping the players would go for it.
You are the god (dev) here, you decide when the women are ovulating - that is whenever you decide to put any pregnancy flags.
Only stupid people will think they know anything about Chimera biology, given how they can shoot fire, reside in spirit form(is spirit even covered by biology??), etc.
Chimeras having high virility sperm able to hunker down & survive up to a month in utero is a legitimate possibility.
The perks of creating a fantasy world: you create the laws of science here. So if someone talks about basic biology, you can say you wrote the book on Chimera world biology - the women don't ovulate (release ovum) once a month here, instead the uterus always has an ovum. Most of the month the chemical composition of the uterus is not conductive to the survival of sperm, except for a small window similar to the ovulation period of our world's females. However, more resilient Chimera sperm can still survive & inseminate the ovum during this 'safe' period, hence Chimera sex is much more risky.
Normal birth control doesn't work for Chimeras - male sperm going through the condom & the female body being unaffected by the chemical/hormones in contraception pills, making the pull out method the best option for following the 1st law.
I could keep talking about how this leads to chastity device programs by the Hematarchs, how it was controversial, how female Chimera are less likely to be impregnated by a non-Chimera male(non-Chimera sperm cannot survive the uterus of Chimeras 90% of the time due to more potent chemicals/hormones or whatever), while male Chimera are often highly virile & can often impregnate women(chimera & human alike) on birth control, allowing them to push through legislation to have the lower status Chimera males be locked in perpetual chastity cages, another inhumane violation of Chimera rights... (I can keep going
)
In short, you are the
god who created this world, including the biology & physics books. Science doesn't limit you, you limit science
Best example would be Guren Lagan: Spiral energy is the answer to every question
Ah, that's what you meant - I'm not sure yet. The issues are the following: time & alienation
Time - it takes time to make a scene that a lot of players might skip, though, sharing & netori I don't find that bad
Alieanation - many players can immediately go ballistic, as you might well know.
Netori I've seen incorporated into harem with no problems, but most ppl put sharing & ntr in the same word (ntr/sharing) so I'd be more careful there. Netorase(sharing) is basically consensual netorare so people tend to avoid both equally, while netori is pretty much the
opposite of netorare & harem players should feel no threat if it's properly written.
Anyway, I see the new version, gonna try it now & see if I have any feedback feedback added at the top of the post.
