VN Ren'Py Completed Christmas Eve [v1.0.0] [Jonesy]

Vlbc · Nov 7, 2023

Everything was going well, life was good and peaceful. And then, out of the blue, the Mc has a face...
And he looks more like a brother than a father...

michi04 · Nov 11, 2023

Hello, there is also a new eve patch for the version

failstaff · Dec 6, 2023

Really fun game. I loved it.

Alanray64 · Dec 10, 2023

Just about to play this game but noticed the completed tag at the top. So guess I am asking is this one really completed or just dropped with a rushed ending?

Yngling · Dec 10, 2023

Alanray64 said:
Just about to play this game but noticed the completed tag at the top. So guess I am asking is this one really completed or just dropped with a rushed ending?

This game is the first installment in a series.

The next game is New Year's Day(e) which is presently in progress.

Alanray64 · Dec 10, 2023

Yngling said:
This game is the first installment in a series.

The next game is New Year's Day(e) which is presently in progress.

Thanks for the information. I just searched and find the next game. So time to start Christmas Eve, kinda of a good time of year to find this game.

H1M · Dec 13, 2023

amazingly naughty and hot!

Alanray64 · Dec 24, 2023

This game could do with a Gallery I reckon

Maybe some ingenious developer can whip a mod up

Shade173 · Dec 24, 2023

The game had a lot of potential but somehow getting extremely sloppy 3rds (or likely a much higher multiple) from both the other daughter and friend takes away a lot of the drive to do so. Somehow it just doesn't appeal to me to hook up with a little whore masquerading as an angel. Writers really need to learn the difference between love and lust, lust is wanting to be with someone, love is being devoted to the other person not acting like a nympho and fucking or romancing anyone else. If you want to make a lust based game, do so as they can be great but if your gonna make a game about love the love interest(s) cannot be with anyone else. At the very least you must give them the option to have completely solo routes, this also applies to the other main type of romance game, harem (which even done right is extremely questionable if it actually can be counted), everything need to be optional rather than shoved down the people's throats. You lose more readers by including unskippable fetishes (including lesbianism, WHICH ABSOLUTELY IS A FETISH, and the main LI sleeping around) than you would've by having bad graphics or, to a certain extent, a shitty story and that is an easily verifiable fact. My wording here may be harsh but I do have quite a bit of professional writing experience and both private and professional training in this area so I hope what I say here will be taken as constructive criticism to make the next story better, as it is not a bad story but could have been much better

*Jonesy* · Dec 24, 2023

Shade173 said:
The game had a lot of potential but somehow getting extremely sloppy 3rds (or likely a much higher multiple) from both the other daughter and friend takes away a lot of the drive to do so. Somehow it just doesn't appeal to me to hook up with a little whore masquerading as an angel. Writers really need to learn the difference between love and lust, lust is wanting to be with someone, love is being devoted to the other person not acting like a nympho and fucking or romancing anyone else. If you want to make a lust based game, do so as they can be great but if your gonna make a game about love the love interest(s) cannot be with anyone else. At the very least you must give them the option to have completely solo routes, this also applies to the other main type of romance game, harem (which even done right is extremely questionable if it actually can be counted), everything need to be optional rather than shoved down the people's throats. You lose more readers by including unskippable fetishes (including lesbianism, WHICH ABSOLUTELY IS A FETISH, and the main LI sleeping around) than you would've by having bad graphics or, to a certain extent, a shitty story and that is an easily verifiable fact. My wording here may be harsh but I do have quite a bit of professional writing experience and both private and professional training in this area so I hope what I say here will be taken as constructive criticism to make the next story better, as it is not a bad story but could have been much better

Thanks for not only taking the time to read/play this story but to give me this feedback. I'm always open to constructive criticism, especially from another writer. This is my first project ever for writing, coding, rendering etc., so I'm sure it's strewn with mistakes and fauxpas from end to end. I'm a little unclear about your first statement about sloppy thirds, but that may speak to poor writing and not being clear who the diffent characters are and their relationships to the MC. I encourage you to continue reading this story with the sequel, New Year's Day(e), to see if my writing has improved and/or your questions get answered. Chapter 3 of NYD should be out in the next day or so. Cheers, and happy holidays!

Quetzzz · Dec 26, 2023

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'anal sex' is missing from this list. I can provide a screenshot if needed. It happens during the last day at the cabin.

JGNeon · Dec 27, 2023

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Alternatively, https://f95zone.to/threads/161093/

girlfairdev · Jan 7, 2024

Outstanding! Finally a dev that knows how to write for this genre. Story is erotic, to the point, not dragged out over a million updates, but still has a compelling story. It is written well, follows through and finishes well. Great job. Salute to this dev. If more game dev's wrote according to this roadmap, we'd be more likely to have catalogs of completed quality games instead of thousands of "could have been's" on the ABANDONED pile. Can't wait for NY Daye!

SanasDome69 · Jan 26, 2024

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Christmas Eve [v0.4.0] Unofficial Android Port + Patch

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My Android Ports have a 2nd Persistent save location. So, even if you uninstall the game, the saves will remain Intact.

Saves location: Storage/0011/Game-name

You can also join my discord server for more and support me.

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You can also join 0011 discord server

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Uh, the link is dead. May I have an alternative link pls?

estrada777 · Jan 28, 2024

Updated Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

Version: 1.0.0

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