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Good questionwhy this semi-incest when apparently the developer doesn't even use patreon?
I thought I was looking at a rough draft of that game when I saw these screen shots.The VN isn't bad, there were a few typos and punctuation issues (which I've fixed), but the story itself isn't bad. Shame that it's similar to APAT in just about every aspect, albeit sped-up.
Yeah, there's just way too many similarities to convince me this is an "original" idea. We're just looking at Lockheart's cutting room floor. It's not a bad attempt, I'll give you that... It's just too blatantly obvious.I thought I was looking at a rough draft of that game when I saw these screen shots.
I'll still give it a try.
If the game is being placed on a site that frowns on incest, people usually use the "step" part as a loophole to upload their games. Usually, there's a patch to put the actual incest back in the game. Not sure if there's going to be one of those for this game.if the girl is just mc's stepdaughter where is the incest in that?
they should change the incest tag for the ntr tag kkk it would be fairerYour wife getting knocked up by another guy and you raising that child doesn't make you a father, it makes you something else.
As a connoisseur let me just put on my grammar nazi hat and say there's no E when you pluralize Loli, they aren't potatoes.bimbo lolies are an abomination
Don't forget to ticket the staff and get your developer role on the site.Hey Everyone,
I figured I should pop in and say hey.
First of all, thanks to BaasB for posting this game here. I really do appreciate it and I really appreciate all of you who have taken the time to play it and leave feedback, good and bad. It helps me to figure out what I'm doing right and what I need to work on.
For what it's worth, I get the whole eye thing. I thought they were a little big at first, but the more I looked at them, the more I liked them, so I just went with it.
I am also very aware of the similarities between this story and Lockheart's "A Petal Among Thorns". Check out my devlog from 11/22/22 over on itch.io where I go into it a little more.
Other than that, I'm having a great time writing this story and I hope for all its flaws and triumphs, that you all enjoy playing/reading it.
Chapter 4 will be out soon. Hopefully around 2/14/23.
I hope to hear from you then.
Thanks!
-Jonesy
I'm happy that you acknowledge Lockhearts VN and pay tribute to it. Note in one of his remarks Lockheart mentions that the reason for the big eyes in his story was a issue with the software used to create the images, he has since corrected the problem. However, like you, I kind of like the looks of the girls faces.Hey Everyone,
I figured I should pop in and say hey.
First of all, thanks to BaasB for posting this game here. I really do appreciate it and I really appreciate all of you who have taken the time to play it and leave feedback, good and bad. It helps me to figure out what I'm doing right and what I need to work on.
For what it's worth, I get the whole eye thing. I thought they were a little big at first, but the more I looked at them, the more I liked them, so I just went with it.
I am also very aware of the similarities between this story and Lockheart's "A Petal Among Thorns". Check out my devlog from 11/22/22 over on itch.io where I go into it a little more.
Other than that, I'm having a great time writing this story and I hope for all its flaws and triumphs, that you all enjoy playing/reading it.
Chapter 4 will be out soon. Hopefully around 2/14/23.
I hope to hear from you then.
Thanks!
-Jonesy