VN Ren'Py Abandoned Chrome Lifelines-Chapter 1 [Ch 1 Part 2] [zTi Creations]

[SpyderArachnid]

Thanks for the preview, as it saved me the download time.
I was looking forward to the update, but that much stupidity just killed the whole game for me.

Sorry, zTi , that just earned you an ignore.

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Just hope that helps explain it a bit more, instead of just looking at an image and judging an entire game around it.

 

[BeingADikDik]

Just decided to give this a go, and here are some quick thoughts:

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Looking forward to following the development of this with great interest!

 

[desmosome]

Was about to give it a run, but read that this version is missing some stuff? What are the patreon only content? Actual sex scenes?

 

[jufot]

Just decided to give this a go, and here are some quick thoughts:

I was about to give a thumbs up to your comment, but then I read the last one It's been discussed here before, but the story so far has been grounded, rational and self-consistent. That sort of harem nonsense should be some sort of non-cannon bonus scene. Otherwise, it would ruin individual character development for a few seconds of porn, and this game deserves better than that.

 

[Pick_A_Name]

thx

I'm sure youve prolly xpendd lots enrgy pstg "thx"/d yrs.
Hw u ant brd x nw?

 

[Havenless_]

I have a question.

In the planned tags there is the corruption tag, and there is no romance tag. So it leads me to wonder, will the girl relationships and love interests be strictly corruption oriented?
Is there no possibility of just romance?

 

[zTi]

Apologies everyone, I wasn't the one who recently uploaded this update. I've seen everyone's feedback and it has been noted. My play testers aren't exactly the best(me being one), so the whole merging the prologue idea really flew by my head. So for now, I've posted the prologue link for anyone that's never seen it.

I'll try to have this issue fixed before I go to bed. Again sorry for the inconvenience, feedback has been very sparse on patreon and discord, so I wasn't made aware of these issues until now. Thank you to those who have decided to play it, and I see that it's brought joy to some of you, which makes me happy.

 

[Rinbael]

I really like what I've seen from this game so far I love the cyberpunk setting of this game and I think you have nailed the cyberpunk theme so far. The renders are really good and the characters all look like they fit into the setting.

The only issue I have is I'm not really a fan of unavoidable sex scenes and I'm just curious if that is going to continue through the rest of the game or not.

I really don't like Elle so will there be options to stop the relationship with her eventually? or are you stuck with her? Also if the game is going to be a harem will it be optional?

 

[TiffanyMonroe]

So is the mc black? What is this?

 

[Sean88hh]

cool

 

[zTi]

Will pregnancy be a feature?

I haven't really thought much about it yet, if you're hoping to see some preggo sex, then that probably won't be until there's either an ending or a chance encounter with someone who's carrying. We shall see~

Just decided to give this a go, and here are some quick thoughts:

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Looking forward to following the development of this with great interest!

Many thanks for the feedback, it's all being worked on atm! The fuckfest is something that would be really hard to fit into the story lol, maybe as a fantasy/vr scene? Time will tell!

Was about to give it a run, but read that this version is missing some stuff? What are the patreon only content? Actual sex scenes?

The patron version only adds the following: gallery, replay gallery, music room and side stories content.

I have a question.

In the planned tags there is the corruption tag, and there is no romance tag. So it leads me to wonder, will the girl relationships and love interests be strictly corruption oriented?
Is there no possibility of just romance?

There will be romance(totally forgot to put the tag in lol). Although some characters' perception of romance might be skewed, mileage may vary.

I really don't like Elle so will there be options to stop the relationship with her eventually? or are you stuck with her? Also if the game is going to be a harem will it be optional?

Sad to see my girl Elle not getting enough love lol.

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Harem(ending, if there is one) will be optional, yeah.

So is the mc black? What is this?

Racially/culturally ambigous is what I'm going for.

 

[Nightless]

Good Start, will see how the next update goes. But not enough for me at the moment to know if I will support it. But I love Cyberpunk and the Theme so great so far

 

[Rinbael]

Sad to see my girl Elle not getting enough love lol.
Part 2 of this chapter will have another scene(s) with her, but you can avoid it(them) depending on your choices throughout the chapter. Harem(ending, if there is one) will be optional, yeah.

I really don't like her personality it annoys me, she has a great arse though. The fact that we have already met three of her Exes already really makes me not interested in her, though since they are all women most people won't care and I assume it's mainly a way to set up possible threesomes for people that want it.

I just hope that there will be an option to break up with her since I really don't like her at all but I'm guessing we are going to be stuck with her.

 

[zTi]

I really don't like her personality it annoys me, she has a great arse though. The fact that we have already met three of her Exes already really makes me not interested in her, though since they are all women most people won't care and I assume it's mainly a way to set up possible threesomes for people that want it.

I just hope that there will be an option to break up with her since I really don't like her at all but I'm guessing we are going to be stuck with her.

I get it, I knew she wouldn't be everyone's cup of tea but it's by design. She isn't in a relationship with the mc, it's purely casual, think friends with benefits. The reason you'll see more of her is because she is your partner, not your girlfriend. Later down the line circumstances change, and as I said before your choices determine who you spend time with.

 

[jufot]

I get it, I knew she wouldn't be everyone's cup of tea but it's by design.

There are people, some on this very forum, who are deeply, deeply terrified of the idea that they might not be someone'e first sexual partner. It gives them the heebie-jeebies. I can't imagine the culture shock they'll experience when they finally decide to take to a step outside, but that's a discussion for another venue

 

[Rinbael]

I get it, I knew she wouldn't be everyone's cup of tea but it's by design. She isn't in a relationship with the mc, it's purely casual, think friends with benefits. The reason you'll see more of her is because she is your partner, not your girlfriend. Later down the line circumstances change, and as I said before your choices determine who you spend time with.

Ah cool thanks for answering I hope you didn't think I was bitching or anything I was just curious that's all.

There are people, some on this very forum, who are deeply, deeply terrified by the idea that they might not be someone'e first sexual partner. It gives them the heebie-jeebies. I can't imagine the culture shock they'll experience when they finally decide to take to a step outside, but that's a discussion for another venue

I really don't know if that was aimed at me or not. I don't know why you are making assumptions about me. I have no problem with characters having previous partners.

All I was saying was I didn't really like her personality and already meeting three of her exes doesn't help. I probably worded my post poorly but you seem to be lumping me in with a certain group of people on this forum, which I really think is uncalled for and don't appreciate.

 

[Grimm96]

This.
As someone with pale white skin and visible blue veins I can't identify with a black MC.
It's like watching generic cuckolding pornography to me.

As someone with dark skin, I find myself enjoying playing a different kind of MC that isn't acting like a GTA parody for once. (not that things like MC skin color should affect how much you can relate to a character in a porn game imo kinda says a lot about you that you felt the comment was necessary)

 

[jufot]

I probably worded my post poorly but you seem to be lumping me in with a certain group of people on this forum, which I really think is uncalled for and don't appreciate.

Apologies, I really didn't mean to call you out specifically. It was meant to be a general criticism of a certain attitude I encounter a lot on F95.

 

[Rinbael]

Apologies, I really didn't mean to call you out specifically. It was meant to be a general criticism of a certain attitude I encounter a lot on F95.

Don't worry about it. I wouldn't have said anything but I thought you were lumping me in with a certain loud group of people on this forum and it really annoyed me to be associated with them.

 

[jufot]

it really annoyed me to be associated with them

Haha, it's only natural. I'd be pissed to be associated with them myself