- Apr 21, 2024
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City Devil has a lot of potential in terms of story and character development.
So far the developer has already nailed the sex scenes, so as long as the quality is maintained things should be good on this end. The key thing now is to tighten the dialogue and add more life to the characters.
MC needs to be more consistent in character (developer has feedbacked that this will be improved next version which is good) and the dialogue needs to be much more fluid and conversational. Some of the interaction to date is socially awkward TBH.
Lillian's personality is coming across nicely, May and Minami are too bland and need some work. Asami's introduction lacks the punch and tension, hope to see her having a more distinct and mysterious character in future versions.
So far the developer has already nailed the sex scenes, so as long as the quality is maintained things should be good on this end. The key thing now is to tighten the dialogue and add more life to the characters.
MC needs to be more consistent in character (developer has feedbacked that this will be improved next version which is good) and the dialogue needs to be much more fluid and conversational. Some of the interaction to date is socially awkward TBH.
Lillian's personality is coming across nicely, May and Minami are too bland and need some work. Asami's introduction lacks the punch and tension, hope to see her having a more distinct and mysterious character in future versions.