- Sep 2, 2018
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I quite enjoyed this update, in which we get the last intel we needed to go toe to toe with Baynard.
It did feel a bit shorter than the previous ones, though.
This is the moment in the story when the relationships with the main LIs can be finally formalized, just before the plot is resolved in the next few chapters.
Sadly, it seems that Sonja is not an option at the moment. I would love a path to get back with her.
My other regret is that the scene with Abby is really short and not very exciting, and doesn't showcase her gorgeous body very much. I know she's just a secondary character, but so is Abby and her scene was way better than this one.
There were also quite a few typos in the text... A bit sloppy.
It did feel a bit shorter than the previous ones, though.
This is the moment in the story when the relationships with the main LIs can be finally formalized, just before the plot is resolved in the next few chapters.
Sadly, it seems that Sonja is not an option at the moment. I would love a path to get back with her.
My other regret is that the scene with Abby is really short and not very exciting, and doesn't showcase her gorgeous body very much. I know she's just a secondary character, but so is Abby and her scene was way better than this one.
There were also quite a few typos in the text... A bit sloppy.
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