VN Ren'Py College Kings [Act 2 v5.2.6] [Undergrad Steve]

[Deleted member 15555]

But just the possibility of another penis in her vagina is enough for you to swear off her.

for me romance has to come off as platonic mostly, having a girl betray the mc by cheating on him is not only another penis in her vagina and as for the other one, she has too many in her vagina already, and having to witness that doesn't help her either for me to get any kind of romantic feeling towards her.

The story has just started. We only have MC's words for the fact that his ex cheated. There is no evidence of the fact that he witnessed it.

it doesn't matter if he witnesses it or not, that won't change my opinion of a cheater.

Two men fighting for the affections of a woman is much more likely source of conflict than all college going girls not having engaged in sex or never cheated.

that's cheap conflict to me, there is always other and better option than label characters like that just for drama, but you do yours.
And is unlikely the mc is wrong going by the strong "fuck off" when we reply to her.
If the mc did not witness she cheated or was in doubt he won't tell her off that strongly.

 

[Idontknowme]

for me romance has to come off as platonic mostly

See you acknowledged a personal preference. NPCs can have those too. Let's agree to disagree on this.

 

[Deleted member 15555]

See you acknowledged a personal preference. NPCs can have those too. Let's agree to disagree on this.

doesn't change the fact of what I said is true and I may not be the only one to think like that.
But yeah I agree to disagree with what you said.

 

[Idontknowme]

doesn't change the fact of what I said is true and I may not be the only one to think like that.
But yeah I agree to disagree with what you said.

As evidenced by the fact that you responded to someone who said something similar to me you should be aware that I am not alone either.

 

[UndergradSteve]

Don't get me wrong. I do like the game so far. It is clear that you've put a lot of thought and effort into it.

I just dislike games where MC is cheated on or has to share his love interests as the main theme.
As long as that is nonexistent or at the very least optional, I'm cool. I'm just lamenting the fact that 2 of the three girls from the title are A.) the cheating ex, (Emily) and B.) a girl you watch get fucked by other dudes, Aubrey. Yeah, I know its optional but now that I've seen the scene its turned me off Aubrey. Also, her character seems kinda shallow anyways so... yeah, not waifu material.

Thank you for the feedback and it's totally fair that you have things you like and dislike.

I LOVED the character breakdown, it's amazing to read your thoughts on each character! So big thanks for that.

 

[The ArcKnight]

Thank you for the feedback and it's totally fair that you have things you like and dislike.

I LOVED the character breakdown, it's amazing to read your thoughts on each character! So big thanks for that.

No problem about the character break down, I know as a creative when you are making a character and dialog, you think: "This is the feeling I'm trying to convey to the reader" and what you actually convey is not always what you meant to. So its good to get an outside perspective of you're work so you can make sure what you're trying to convey is actually making it through. So figured I'd just give my impressions of the girls, because if you're female characters don't work in a porn game... well, you have problems. lol

As for likes and dislikes, I'm only one voice among many. As long as you dont throw NTR into the game, I'll still play.
Hell, I already have found girls I like, (Lauren, Autumn, Riley,) they just might not be you're "Main girls" (Emily, Aubrey, Chloe). The only thing I worry about is your plan to introduce more girls, variety is only as good as your ability to manage them all in the narriative. For example, if the main girls end up being Em, Aub, and Chlo, and we go 2 updates just following them, you might lose me. lol

But yeah, story is interesting so far, I look forward to seeing what develops and you expanding the cast and giving the current cast more screen time to develop them, maybe turning some hearts around, I mean, fuck, if it turns out Emily cheated with a girl, and had a good reason for it (was drunk or something) I'd completely turn my opinion of her around!
Is that sexist? Probably, but when it comes to someone's emotions/feelings about sex/relationships, they are rarely rational.

 

[Prokopije]

You said is okey for a romance vn game to have such girls, well let me tell you is not ,
Romance games are more vanilla and it should stay that way, I doubt anyone that likes non ntr will like to romance girls like that in the game.
And no, "realistic" doesn't mean that the girls have to be fucking everyone or that they have to be cheating bitches either.

Vanilla romance is the most boring and predictable stuff in this "industry". It's like movie you know what will happen and you glance more to ceiling corners to see what ur buddy spiders are doing than you actually watch a movie.
But, what would be masterpiece, is for developers to manage to make players to romance MC with girls they might not like in the beggining. Grow story and expand, create something which will make players to think and rethink. Something brave and different which will make them to eventualy go across their "red lines".
And for "realistic", I don't know in which world you're living, but in one I live, girls and boys fuck each others in spades. With a lot of different partners (Often even at the same time). They try, they change, sometimes they cheat. It's all happening. But for "army" of 5-6-7 college age virgins who're waiting to be deflorated by il grande MC - never heard of. They cherished virginity for 20+ years and than came HE and took it from them week or so after they met. Please, be serious...

 

[Prokopije]

if it turns out Emily cheated with a girl,

Please no. That's the worst cliche when it comes to that topic.
It reminds me on a men who grabbed his parachute, climbed to a cliff and than gave up. Jump, man, jump.

 

[UndergradSteve]

btw changing the topic , I hope any mini-games (like fights and other things) are optional, not all of us are fans of minigames.

Hey,

In the next update (Coming Tomorrow, Friday 16/10) the fighting mechanics will be introduced. Even though I like to think that it plays a lot more like a fighting game and less like a minigame, you can simulate all fights to watch the animations without having to play them.

- Undergrad Steve

 

[Ragnar]

Hey,

In the next update (Coming Tomorrow, Friday 16/10) the fighting mechanics will be introduced. Even though I like to think that it plays a lot more like a fighting game and less like a minigame, you can simulate all fights to watch the animations without having to play them.

- Undergrad Steve

Fighting animations? Animations take time rendering I prefer animations with girls if any

 

[The ArcKnight]

Fighting animations? Animations take time rendering I prefer animations with girls if any

100% Agreed! Maybe there will be a girl fight? xD

 

[The ArcKnight]

Please no. That's the worst cliche when it comes to that topic.
It reminds me on a men who grabbed his parachute, climbed to a cliff and than gave up. Jump, man, jump.

I disagree, It's not a cliche, cheating is cheating whether it was with a girl or a guy. Both are equally bad, right? Now it would be cliche if the girl she cheated with invited you into bed with them but clearly that's not what happened here. MC was hurt and this wasn't a sexy fun time "Cheating", it was something that ruined a relationship.

Now I'll admit, some audience members (me included) would be more willing to forgive cheating with a girl then with a guy. Why would you cheer on the option that would piss EVERYONE off instead of pissing only some people off?

For me, i'm trying to find a reason to want to like Emily because her character model is so gorgeous. I still think cheating is wrong no matter what but I'd be more willing to forgive cheating with a girl then cheating with a guy.

 

[Prokopije]

Why would you cheer on the option that would piss EVERYONE off instead of pissing only some people off?

For me, i'm trying to find a reason to want to like Emily because her character model is so gorgeous. I still think cheating is wrong no matter what but I'd be more willing to forgive cheating with a girl then cheating with a guy.

It will not piss off everyone. There are lot of people who likes cheating girls, from one or another reason it would make her more wanted in their eyes. they would be not pissed, but happy cause of that outcome.
I agree on part that some/majority of folks don't look it same if it's with male or female, and they cheating with female considering as "not so big deal". That's why I wrotte about parachute. When dev is preparing to do "something scary" (more or less beloved GF cheats with another dude, will you find strenght to forgive her, etc, bla bla?), and than in last minute "pussies out" and go for "light variant", aka let's not jump, it's enough I came so far (cheating with female), cause it is more "acceptable" by wide crowds. We saw that in games, so it can be considered as cliche, to some extent. If it's not going to be big part of the story, than it might be allowed for players to chose with whom it happened, via those text mesages, with creating few different lines of text and one variable. It would make more people happy.
As for me, I agree it's wrong ( in most cases, I would add) but in further theory, I'm oposite of you. Would rather somehow forgive cheating with male, due to my repulsion towards bi girls (in terms of romantic/sexual interest only, of course). "You entered those watters? We're done. Bye." If it was male, there would be some chance for her to explain herself and maybe, big maybe, earn forgiveness, depends on circumstances. And I'm probably not alone there, as well.
But anyway, bottom line, whichever outcome dev chooses, not all people be pissed off. Or happy.
We'll see where this goes...

 

[Ragnar]

I understand that each girl has her own life without the MC but if she starts a relationship with him and cheats that would be the end of the relationship for me.

 

[Deleted member 15555]

I understand that each girl has her own life without the MC but if she starts a relationship with him and cheats that would be the end of the relationship for me.

you say that after our debate¿?
the ex gf cheated on the mc ( maybe the dev changes that, who knows but I think the mc was very clear when he rejected her)

 

[Ragnar]

you say that after our debate¿?
the ex gf cheated on the mc ( maybe the dev changes that, who knows but I think the mc was very clear when he rejected her)

I rejected her on the phone, still we don't know what happened between them. The MC said she cheated but we have to see what really happened. Now if she cheated or any of the new girls cheats on the MC she can go and suck a cactus.
Anyway, I'm fine with it if the dev wants to introduce an option to forgive a cheater, that happens in real life all the time, I will pick other option but is fine to have different options to pick from.

 

[Prokopije]

I think she cheated indeed. So far, MC didn't seemed to me like some labile overreacting lunatic who would go haywire and send her to hell without solid proof evidences. It wouldn't fit character if it turns out to be false flag. But hell, could be wrong.

 

[hrhr]

Usually I'm not into 3D but these models look great. Gameplay time is about how much until now?

 

[SAMASH112]

It looks like good game and fun. It kinda reminds me of another game that I love so much...

 

[Ennoch]

Just one question: Is the blondie a LI?