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I LOVED the latest chapter! (Well, most of it - will get to my one criticism in a moment.)
The strength of this game is it's authenticity. The male and female MC both feel completely real in their thoughts, dialogue and motivations.
It's one of the most believable teen/college romances I've seen in fiction - the hesitancy, cautious flirting and game playing is so true to life.
Which brings me to the end of this chapter.
The scene where Adam watches his "boss" have sex through the window while simultaneously getting a handjob from his lesbian best friend was so far fetched that it destroyed the suspension of disbelief.
I get that this is an adult game and you need regular sex scenes but it shouldn't come at the expense of the story. I feel it would have worked better as a dream or fantasy sequence.
The scene also lacked the game's usual character agency which was disappointing. There should have been options to stop watching the boss and/or rebuff Luna's sexual advances.
Oh well. I'm hoping we get a return to more realistic scenarios in the chapters to come.
The strength of this game is it's authenticity. The male and female MC both feel completely real in their thoughts, dialogue and motivations.
It's one of the most believable teen/college romances I've seen in fiction - the hesitancy, cautious flirting and game playing is so true to life.
Which brings me to the end of this chapter.
The scene where Adam watches his "boss" have sex through the window while simultaneously getting a handjob from his lesbian best friend was so far fetched that it destroyed the suspension of disbelief.
I get that this is an adult game and you need regular sex scenes but it shouldn't come at the expense of the story. I feel it would have worked better as a dream or fantasy sequence.
The scene also lacked the game's usual character agency which was disappointing. There should have been options to stop watching the boss and/or rebuff Luna's sexual advances.
Oh well. I'm hoping we get a return to more realistic scenarios in the chapters to come.
- Aug 13, 2020
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Very good College story, I'm sad for Female MC, how her douch of a bf is such a dick, but even worse the Male MC is even worse and oblivious how so many women want him and he doesn't see it, his boss' wife, his best friends gf, the female MC. I mean when a girl send me nudes i know she wants more, how can some guys not see that.
Looking forward for more updates wanna see how it all will turn out and if the Male MC finaly open his eyes and go for one of the girls who want him.
Looking forward for more updates wanna see how it all will turn out and if the Male MC finaly open his eyes and go for one of the girls who want him.
Update was pretty good, the "boss" shit doesn't really work and actually detracts from the game. Everyone knows it's their parents, err.... I mean landlord and landlady!!!
- Aug 11, 2023
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That's the first time I've seen anyone advocate for that. I thought people hated that shit.
I'm not saying I *want* a dream sequence but it would have helped maintain the realism, which is important to this particular game.
- Nov 9, 2023
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usually its the best friend i find most annoying in these types of games not the MC. and its usually the main LIs best friend i find to be too skanky and full of red flags as a gf.
It can be fun to make MC a loser, but ive a mix of pity and disinterest in the main characters. love triangles only work in stories when i can find something engaging about all characters involved. maybe one of the side story triangles will be interesting enough to continue following for. we will see
different note, the whole boss thing is freaking way too tedious to read. i understand why but it would have been easier to write em out of sexually linked scenes completely, if not the entire story. or call them boss and bosses wife instead of first boss and whatnot. thats confusing and headache inducing.
It can be fun to make MC a loser, but ive a mix of pity and disinterest in the main characters. love triangles only work in stories when i can find something engaging about all characters involved. maybe one of the side story triangles will be interesting enough to continue following for. we will see
different note, the whole boss thing is freaking way too tedious to read. i understand why but it would have been easier to write em out of sexually linked scenes completely, if not the entire story. or call them boss and bosses wife instead of first boss and whatnot. thats confusing and headache inducing.
- May 1, 2017
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Dont know if anyone has ran into this issue yet. but durning the art class scene of introducing the teacher i got 2 script error bugs that allowed me to continue but if something happned in the scene idk. just the heads up.
edit. another one in class with morgan and matt after texting on the phones betwen morgan and mc
heres the code:
also thers something wrong with ur code. as im running windows 11 not 10 and it showing up windows 10
Lord Percy .
edit. another one in class with morgan and matt after texting on the phones betwen morgan and mc
heres the code:
Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.
While running game code:
File "game/scripts/yr1ch03.rpy", line 825, in script
mth "Class begins the second I walk through the door. You two, in the middle, with your phones out! There will be no phones allowed in MY class."
NameError: name 'mth_n' is not defined
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/scripts/yr1ch03.rpy", line 825, in script
mth "Class begins the second I walk through the door. You two, in the middle, with your phones out! There will be no phones allowed in MY class."
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 2573, in execute
Say.execute(self)
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 615, in execute
renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\exports\sayexports.py", line 132, in say
who(what, *args, **kwargs)
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\character.py", line 1438, in __call__
who = self.prefix_suffix("who", self.who_prefix, who, self.who_suffix)
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\character.py", line 1354, in prefix_suffix
return (sub(prefix) + sub(body) + sub(suffix))
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\character.py", line 1334, in sub
return renpy.substitutions.substitute(s, scope=scope, force=force, translate=translate)[0]
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 373, in substitute
s = interpolate(s, variables) # type: ignore
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 86, in interpolate
raise e
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\substitutions.py", line 78, in interpolate
value = renpy.python.py_eval(code, {}, scope)
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1209, in py_eval
return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals)
File "C:\Users\chamb\AppData\Local\Temp\Rar$EXa17252.24266.rartemp\CollegeLoveTriangles-0.3-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1202, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "<none>", line 1, in <module>
NameError: name 'mth_n' is not defined
Windows-10-10.0.26100 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.3.3.24111502
College Love Triangles 0.3
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- Sep 10, 2017
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Oh shit, I'll take a look at it and see what's going on. Thanks. I tested it twice and nothing came up on my end. I was having some similar bugs early on, but I thought I had taken care of all of them before compiling. Must not have fixed them well enough.
Not a whole lot happened in those classroom scenes so you're not missing out on much. Teacher introductions mainly. Nothing important.
I also run Windows 11 and have done all of my work on Win11. It's not a bug, it's because 11 is basically an updated 10, so programs usually just say 10 because it's easier.
- May 1, 2017
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Yeahhad a total of 5 script erros and all of them werre in the clasroom scenes
also, i edited the post and removed all mentions of the Love Route. there will be something in name only for the first few chapters, basically as a "he/she believes this is going to lead to true love" but thanks to all the grumpy people, i've decided to just say "fuck it" and go full steam NTR.
Thanks for mentioning this. Game Dropped.
Wish I read it before downloading.
Best of luck to you lot who enjoys being cucked.
- Mar 25, 2021
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I need a wedding ring right fucking now because I have an angel waiting for me.
I don't care if she has sex with a hundred dudes before she chooses me, but I need her in my life.
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- Aug 13, 2020
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Sorry budy she's mine, I saw her first and I will do all sorts kinky stuff with her, if the dev ever lets her be with MC, else I'll just use any other guy to do it.
- Aug 13, 2020
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You shouldn't always let others force ya to change things you had planned, to be honest to me it sounded at first like a Netori game where MC Adam eventualy sleeps all the girls, but playing it now, I kinda like how oblivious he is, but still would love to seen an happy end where mc steal least one of the guys gf either Morgan or the blond with glasses, while the other guys get cucked by their respective women. So a love route wouldn't have been bad, so long also other routes there with netorase and hard ntr. But you're the dev, you should decide what game you like. So far i loved the first parts.also, i edited the post and removed all mentions of the Love Route. there will be something in name only for the first few chapters, basically as a "he/she believes this is going to lead to true love" but thanks to all the grumpy people, i've decided to just say "fuck it" and go full steam NTR.
I agree the dev should add a love route (albeit a very short one). Just include a few assertive choices in the next chapter where Adam makes his intentions clear and wins over Morgan, followed by a quick epilogue explaining their college romance.
It wouldn't take much dev time and makes the NTR technically avoidable. Everybody wins lol
- Aug 13, 2020
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The way Patreon is going, in a few more years there be only wholesome love romances allowed, there alot countries where cheating, ntr, netori and netorase is also seen as offensive and even punished with jail or some even death. So i won't be surprised for a time that all fetish that not involve wholesome will be banned there.
Great story!! Similar to "Culture Shock" where the male protagonist ends up losing every girl because he's too shy and weak. Looking forward to the update to see what happens with Morgan. Would like to see her end up with Jason while Adam tries to pursue Stephanie.
- Mar 25, 2021
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Finished the update and holy shit this game was good before but it keeps getting better.
Luna & I are going to get along great.
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- Aug 13, 2020
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Congrats mate, least you can indulge in your kinks too here, and yes that scene was hot especialy on who she fantasies having sex with.