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Update is out for the Freshman tier!
I'm noticing the relationships can't be renamed, but I'm pretty sure we could do that before, right? Did you rewrite the story for that to be unnecessary, Dev?Public Release of Chapter 3!
I hope everyone enjoys! Remember to start a new game!
Patreon rule changes, so I took it all out and changed the story a bit around it to make it fit more. I talk about it more in some of my dev blogs and previous posts if you want more specifics.I'm noticing the relationships can't be renamed, but I'm pretty sure we could do that before, right? Did you rewrite the story for that to be unnecessary, Dev?
It's a great use of good char models.it's a waste of good char models.
Lord Percy you are a lone stallion amongst mules. I've never understood why devs interested in creating titles with NTR end up kowtowing to the "never NTR" crowd. Good on you for having the courage to stand up to them. I'm behind you all the way. Will be subscribing. Thank you for this amazing title which gives all of the characters agency. Something unique for a change.also, i edited the post and removed all mentions of the Love Route. there will be something in name only for the first few chapters, basically as a "he/she believes this is going to lead to true love" but thanks to all the grumpy people, i've decided to just say "fuck it" and go full steam NTR.
I don't think you are going to get what you want.The first two releases being as short as they were gave me the wrong impression of how this game would play and it is clear now that I was expecting something much different from what we're getting.
I thought the game would be focused on Jason stealing Morgan and all the other girls from the MC right under his nose. It seemed to me that MC's obliviousness to it all paired with the girls' corruption would be the whole plot, but I can tell now that that ain't it. Morgan barely interacted with Jason on this chapter, actually, he barely interacted with anyone. The MC (presented as a virgin loser) received a bunch of nudes, saw two girls naked, watched two couples fucking(the second one had the woman yelling out loud how she want to fuck the MC) and received a handjob(from a lesbian!). Morgan, who I was hoping would slowly get corrupted by Jason, spent the whole time with her mouth full of Matt's dick, when I thought he was just means to get her and MC involved(no one likes him, they constantly fight, the whole group would be better off if they cut ties with him). And all Jason did was give oral to his girlfriend of 4 years. This fits a lot with the usual cuckold content in porn, that while showing the woman worshipping the bull make it all about the cuck, who is supposed to be the least important part of the equation.
I'm all for focusing on Matt when it comes to corrupting Morgan, but whoever it is: they need content. If Matt is the one doing it, give him some scenes as the game advances, like Jason has a few, it's fine to go back adding and altering scenes to fix the story and adding content. Making the paths diverge would also improve the story flow greatly. Example, if Jason says Morgan has to apologize she gets angry and him his path is closed off for the moment, but Matt's path opens up, they don't break up and Matt is the one corrupting Morgan. If Jason tells her they need to break up, they do Break up and Matt goes away for now and the game focuses on Jason. If he says that Matt has to apologize then you get a path with Matt AND Jason doing their thing, pretty much what is there right now.
I hope future releases make the game more my style, but we'll see. Godspeed, Dev.
Personally, I can not have anything to do with that, or I risk being banned from Big-P. They are becoming quite intrusive and even searching creators' interactions on 3rd party sites to make sure they aren't circumventing their rules, even reading my game's code to make sure I'm not trying to get around it with a "relationship renamer". (I was even listed on a change.org petition to try to get me banned from the site, but that was able to be taken down by me and other devs.) And unfortunately I would actually like this game to help support my ability to survive in this world, so I'm not going to risk that too much. This will be the last I speak of it.Will there be a restore patch released or something cuz the boss relationship feels super janky. Even more so than the usual landlady/lord that devs are forced to do. Even the sister/best friend feels weird since there is no relationship showed between Luna and the mc. When they were siblings that would be explained since they grew up with each other and have normal sibling relationship
100% agree. I only added it in for a dash of realism. Like I've said, this story is based on real events. If enough people really dislike it I will gladly take it out.i was excited to give this a try but a couple of characters smoke cigarettes including mc. immediate delete. sorry dev but its gross af to anyone who dont smoke
Reading comments like that warm my black heart! The first time someone mentioned something about character agency, in the last chapter, I was like "Well of COURSE that's how it is." like it never crossed my mind that it could be any other way. I'll try to keep it up. Thank you for the lovely comment.Lord Percy you are a lone stallion amongst mules. I've never understood why devs interested in creating titles with NTR end up kowtowing to the "never NTR" crowd. Good on you for having the courage to stand up to them. I'm behind you all the way. Will be subscribing. Thank you for this amazing title which gives all of the characters agency. Something unique for a change.
Next chapter is going to start with the night before from Morgan's perspective. I'm really glad people picked up that hint.Morgan is such a fun chick, I am really rooting for MC to get her as a girlfriend! And I would love to see more from her perspective, for example in this update I am pretty sure she did something interesting with Jason while MC had his trip.
It's going to become a bit of a "everyone fucks everyone" but of course there's going to be some choice involved for a lot of it. The MAIN story is going to be around the Adam-Morgan-Jason dynamic, with Stephanie and Matt more as complications, and people like Luna, Jessica, Kirsten, etc just being side stories.The first two releases being as short as they were gave me the wrong impression of how this game would play and it is clear now that I was expecting something much different from what we're getting.
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