VN Ren'Py Abandoned Come Inside [v0.2.1] [ttll]

[Midnight Ghost]

Ok I give up... I can't get the extended scene with first meet with mom without kelly, I don't know what I'm missing. I did foot job with kelly, I ignored the hell out of kelly, and called the milf, changed other options multiple times and still cannot trigger it. Unless I'm getting the extended part with the memory or something. Also why is there a lactation tag? don't remember seeing any scenes with that.

Also going back I just realized this, very disheartening

 

[Cynicaladm]

technically accomplished, I like the graphic style and the renderings are of quality...
the story hints at a solid plot, but I can't seem to engage with it..either the writing style or the translation, or whatever else it is... I can't help but disliike most of the characters, MC included.. this absolute drama of broken people they are trying to sell us, contrasted with the levity of kelly who has decided to let a random one night stand fuck her entire family and friends collective... it's umbearably messy and the aforementioned drama has no truck not being defined in the first 2 chapters of the game.
I can tell it tries to be deep and well written, but it doesn't seem to succeed, at least, it doesn't do it for me.
there's just too much hinted drama for too little actual exposition and development of the plot. some ideas are rather clever, but the general plot is just a jumble. following kelly's plotline seems to be a completely separate game from the rest, and the reactions of some of the characters are contrived at best, to move the plot in a direction that doesn't feel natural.
for some reason, despite being two chapters in and some serious hanky panky, the overal feeling of gloom makes me feel like nothing relevant has actually happened.
so.. this is a mixed bag that can either turn out to be a masterpiece, but it's too early to tell.. or it's just a mess that is going to become a bigger mess.
which would be a shame because it does open the door to a lot of interesting possibilities and, as I said, graphically, it's very accomplished even though there isn't a lot of variety in terms of body shapes and so on.

 

[ttll]

I can't get the extended scene with first meet with mom without kelly

1. Delete any installed mod
2.Kelly shouldn't be home. (Don’t mute the phone after first sex scene with Kelly, choose Call Sheila at night, or go to your sister's room if you're on the Enslave route.)

why is there a lactation tag

Install additional files, and check out 4th memory in the sketchbook.

 

[Midnight Ghost]

1. Delete any installed mod
2.Kelly shouldn't be home. (Don’t mute the phone after first sex scene with Kelly, choose Call Sheila at night, or go to your sister's room if you're on the Enslave route.)

Install additional files, and check out 4th memory in the sketchbook.

Thank you!

That actually was a significant portion added to the memory, as well as more added backstory with the solo meeting, they seem important parts to include in the backstory and I'm kind of surprised they're hidden in those ways, well not the memory one so much, but the first meeting dialogue for sure.

Great job ttll! looking forward to the next chapter.

 

[xXwankerXx]

Also going back I just realized this, very disheartening

Yeah, most of Lora's fans have a problem with that ring on her finger, seems mommy dearest abandoned her son for 7years IIRC, moved on, got married, made some money/became a good trophy wife, and now comes back into his life like she did nothing wrong. Her "we'll fix it" reply is more wishful thinking than an actual possibility.

Based on what we've seen so far both in the game and the sketchbook memories, Lora went from being a super mom to becoming a super cunt/possible escort, stripper, trophy wife. None of those options would make her "redeemable" for some players, so ttll should prepare himself for some serious backlash if that was the case. I'm curious to see what really happened with her and why she didn't at least try to reach out to him all this time. There's also her psycho sister Jill who could've gotten her in trouble for money.

This game is a really promising project, but ttll should release more updates per year to attract more supporters, just one update per year and monthly payment isn't good marketing. Hopefully, we'll get an update soon and see more of this interesting story.

 

[Midnight Ghost]

Yeah, most of Lora's fans have a problem with that ring on her finger, seems mommy dearest abandoned her son for 7years IIRC, moved on, got married, made some money/became a good trophy wife, and now comes back into his life like she did nothing wrong. Her "we'll fix it" reply is more wishful thinking than an actual possibility.

Based on what we've seen so far both in the game and the sketchbook memories, Lora went from being a super mom to becoming a super cunt/possible escort, stripper, trophy wife. None of those options would make her "redeemable" for some players, so ttll should prepare himself for some serious backlash if that was the case. I'm curious to see what really happened with her and why she didn't at least try to reach out to him all this time. There's also her psycho sister Jill who could've gotten her in trouble for money.

This game is a really promising project, but ttll should release more updates per year to attract more supporters, just one update per year and monthly payment isn't good marketing. Hopefully, we'll get an update soon and see more of this interesting story.

Oh hehe I had just edited my post to add that story stuff, so I'll add it here instead.

I agree, the mom started out super sweet/loving/caring, but as you dive deeper you start to see her breaking down, and will probably see the corruption she had to go down to survive. Love and lust can do a number on people, will it be enough to turn the MC back to her, hm maybe. He's not exactly unhappy and in a total shit state, so that could be easier now, but he also doesn't need her anymore, he hasn't for years.

The only other question is where did he get that stack of money and if she's secretly involved with that. Why is she back now? is her husband dead? It'll be interesting to read, ttll has done a great job mixing memory and story so far.

It was mentioned that chapter 3a for jan/feb, 3b for mar/apr, hopefully decent updates and we won't have to wait a year

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[xXwankerXx]

The only other question is where did he get that stack of money and if she's secretly involved with that.

He stole it from his Aunt, and now he's hiding from her, so Jill could be a mob boss or a mob boss's wife, it could explain why Lora asked her to take care of him even tho she's not on good terms with her sister and her mother. He's desperate to invest them in the neighbor's project/business proposal (can't remember that) so his Aunt can't find that amount of money on him and connect the dots.

but as you dive deeper you start to see her breaking down, and will probably see the corruption she had to go down to survive.

Well said. The explicit pics Taylor took of her hint exactly at that. IIRC the MC said she started going on business trips and dressing more "fashionable", so another hint of what those "business trips" could've been.

Personally, I hope she became some glamour/wannabe model or IG thot 'till she found herself a rich dude to support her. Still, she abandoned her kids (both MC and Sheryl are her kids) for a lame reason... can't imagine why MC's dad or grandma would let Lora take him away when they knew that she had no job and no stable financial situation. But clearing that up is ttll's job.

 

[Midnight Ghost]

He stole it from his Aunt, and now he's hiding from her, so Jill could be a mob boss or a mob boss's wife, it could explain why Lora asked her to take care of him even tho she's not on good terms with her sister and her mother. He's desperate to invest them in the neighbor's project/business proposal (can't remember that) so his Aunt can't find that amount of money on him and connect the dots.

Ah ok I must have missed it in the dialogue somewhere, reminds me I need to do the enslave route for maybe more story there, been putting it off. Didn't think she would have all the money around still, but being a mafia type family would explain it.

Well said. The explicit pics Taylor took of her hint exactly at that. IIRC the MC said she started going on business trips and dressing more "fashionable", so another hint of what those "business trips" could've been.

Personally, I hope she became some glamour/wannabe model or IG thot 'till she found herself a rich dude to support her. Still, she abandoned her kids (both MC and Sheryl are her kids) for a lame reason... can't imagine why MC's dad or grandma would let Lora take him away when they knew that she had no job and no stable financial situation. But clearing that up is ttll's job.

Yeah taking him back to the grandmothers, even that cold hearted household, probably would have been better than the aunts by the sounds of it. I'm sure there's a good reason, I'll hope it's not just simple embarrassment for failing, that's not a good reason to send him off to a worse situation, but something more creative.

The model route rather than stripper sounds plausible since she was doing modelling pics with Taylor, although it was more sleazy content, or maybe as an escort to trophy wife later with all the flying around. I'm sure there will be more memories to fill this out.

But man, she's probably one of my most favorite milfs in these games, gonna be brutal if she turns out to be a child abandoning whore that got another family lol.

 

[IamJAG]

Love this little gem of a game, some of the visuals are absolutely stunning. I mean damn, Lindsey, Taylor, Kelly.. Fuck it, I can't choose. My one slight gripe are the grammatical and spelling mishaps.. but it's not enough to drive me off a cliff.

 

[Duriel]

Yeah, most of Lora's fans have a problem with that ring on her finger, seems mommy dearest abandoned her son for 7years IIRC, moved on, got married, made some money/became a good trophy wife, and now comes back into his life like she did nothing wrong. Her "we'll fix it" reply is more wishful thinking than an actual possibility.

Based on what we've seen so far both in the game and the sketchbook memories, Lora went from being a super mom to becoming a super cunt/possible escort, stripper, trophy wife. None of those options would make her "redeemable" for some players, so ttll should prepare himself for some serious backlash if that was the case. I'm curious to see what really happened with her and why she didn't at least try to reach out to him all this time. There's also her psycho sister Jill who could've gotten her in trouble for money.

Well, actually it was pretty clear since her last appearance where this was going, what is canonically done from the Mom to Cunt perspective is pretty much done, I'd guess ttll plan would be to test if the player would find the courage to go past her mom past to try and fix their relationship (also by caring about the sketchbook) or... giving in to anger and vengeance by delving into the enslave route.

It would become really plain easy to redeem her if she didn't undergo some escort/cunt path and/or become a trophy wife previously, and I am glad he is adding some more "spice" to make the player choice somewhat more weighted and meaningful.

Also don't worry about "most" fans having a problem with ttll direction for his own story, I am sure quite a bunch of them are fine with him making the game he wants to make, I know I am .

 

[xXwankerXx]

I'd guess @ttll plan would be to test if the player would find the courage to go past her mom past to try and fix their relationship (also by caring about the sketchbook) or... giving in to anger and vengeance by delving into the enslave route.

That's one aspect of the game that I'd like to bitch about a little. I agree with your statement about Lora, buut I think it's too soon to already add the Forgive/Hate Lora, Forgive/Enslave Lindsey options, we don't have the full story here... the dev needs to come clean about Lora's past and motive to abandon her kids, and it should be a good one. A simple "sorry son, hard times require HARD, LONG and THICK "solutions". You just do what your mommy does, go get fucked motherfucker."

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Also don't worry about "most" fans having a problem with @ttll direction for his own story, I am sure quite a bunch of them are fine with him making the game he wants to make, I know I am .

That's what I strongly recommend ttll to do. Tell his story and see how ppl react to it. He can't please everybody, but at least he gains a fanbase that supports his project and trusts him as dev. Also, this is his first project, he can always improve and do better the next time.

 

[zakijnr]

any update for this?

 

[Kakato]

any update for this?

A friendly advice. Before you post the " any news/update " message on any thread, make sure to read the last 3-5 pages before. Peace.

 

[Selenaraft]

Got banned from the discord for asking asking why the developer hasnt released anything for the past 8 months. Dont support developers like this on patreon, they're just tryna make a quick buck off of idiots that forget to cancell their monthly pay

 

[kettava]

Hello guys.
By any chance someone know if it comes for MacOS anytime soon or I should just skip this great game?

Thread Updated: 2020-04-26
Release Date: 2020-04-26
Developer: ttll
Censored: No
Version: 0.2.1
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English, Russian
FanArt:
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Special to MacOS users:
If you have time, can you explain me with PM, how do you play those games on MacOS? Virtual machine or you building cheap pc with windows, just to play those?
I'm very new to all those adult novel's. But some of them like really pleasure for my eyes.
Sadly that I can't try all of those, cause of Mac.

 

[Abhai]

Hello guys.
By any chance someone know if it comes for MacOS anytime soon or I should just skip this great game?

Thread Updated: 2020-04-26
Release Date: 2020-04-26
Developer: ttll
Censored: No
Version: 0.2.1
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English, Russian
FanArt:
Genre:


Special to MacOS users:
If you have time, can you explain me with PM, how do you play those games on MacOS? Virtual machine or you building cheap pc with windows, just to play those?
I'm very new to all those adult novel's. But some of them like really pleasure for my eyes.
Sadly that I can't try all of those, cause of Mac.

A new version should be just around corner, yet as no one knows how curved/relative that corner is, Ive updated my compressed post with a mac version.
When a new version is out eventually, if there is no mac version, just use folder "game" from pc version to update your mac version (found in ..contents/resources/autorun/)
That should be an easiest way, yet you could dig a bit around here, or google it, as there are few more options to play/convert pc games to mac versions.
Hope that helps.

 

[cc31]

Hello guys.
By any chance someone know if it comes for MacOS anytime soon or I should just skip this great game?

Thread Updated: 2020-04-26
Release Date: 2020-04-26
Developer: ttll
Censored: No
Version: 0.2.1
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English, Russian
FanArt:
Genre:


Special to MacOS users:
If you have time, can you explain me with PM, how do you play those games on MacOS? Virtual machine or you building cheap pc with windows, just to play those?
I'm very new to all those adult novel's. But some of them like really pleasure for my eyes.
Sadly that I can't try all of those, cause of Mac.

bootcamp

 

[Swordsman83]

Got banned from the discord for asking asking why the developer hasnt released anything for the past 8 months. Dont support developers like this on patreon, they're just tryna make a quick buck off of idiots that forget to cancell their monthly pay

pales in comparison to the Infamous M game.

 

[Swordsman83]

any update for this?

come back to this thread in Dec 2021.

 

[Self Made]

He says he plans to release part 1 of the next update sometime this month.