VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Come Inside [v0.2.1] [ttll]

So the good things about the game is the rendered models look very good and some of the scenes have good ideas.
Unfortunatelly you get thrown right into it no prologue is fine but you really don't immerse with the character well in this game and also don''t care so much about the other characters or what they say i think the writing may be bad or the direction it is just not pulling my interest at all, some of the scenes get somehow randomly thrown at you it doesn't feel very connected or like a buildup that was being plaid toward to so storywise this was terrible.
Then to make it look "nicer" there is a heavy overusage of a filter and brightness it gets tired quickly and isn't easy on the eyes.
The mother even looks younger then the daughter did he even try?
Much space to grow since it is only v0.2.1 as i played it but it feels more like an experimental playground for the dev also ppl say it looks gorgeous it certainly has a distinctive artistic feel with the backgrounds often getting blurred focus on the female chracters that mostly is placed very centric low usage of shadows and strong contrasts nice efforts to put highlights on skins and mostly nice textures .
I kinda liked the bonus games and the side story there in your sketchbook but they were not that forgiving some i had to try a few times.
oh and why does mcs friend kevin look like he is 12.
Also the often messaging so the relevance of the mobile was a bit annyoing.

TLDR good models but unlikeable characters, bad story, no immersion, unbelievable setting but tries to imply realism, brightness too much, overuse of a filter

Amazing renders but that's not enough to keep me interested. The story or lack thereof isn't mindblowing or anything I haven't seen before aside from the Mom, who's as some would call a pedo/pervert. She began seducing the MC from and early age.

The sister is the typical self-centered Blonde who you can typically either have a love or corrupt/enslave route. The slave routes and other various routes will most likely lead to "sharing" aka softcore NTR or NTR disguised as "sharing' in the future. The Asian girl is the typical slut of the mill, she gives it up easy without the MC really trying. At last minigames.. mindgames are such a horrible aspect of any adult game for me. Because when I'm horny last thing I wanna do is play a game or type random letters, I almost deleted the game off that alone.

Old man balls was a "surprise' no one wanted to see but due the game not being tag properly you get old, wrinkled, hairy balls.

Amazing story that keeps the text interesting. Characters feel real enough that its not just a masturbation game. the renderings are among the best i have seen. The story is has hidden history that tell toward an interesting past that hopefully pulls you deeper into a bigger development. The choice development in conversations has appropriate consequences and rewards. All around a well made game.

A couple odd metrics - 1. I look forward to updates of this game more than any other (genuinely). 2. I still find the content hot despite the fact that the story is still building up to things (foreplay?).
More standard review content - The art is phenomenal imo, I really like the aesthetic in general. Love the models (figure proportions and textures), you can easily imagine the tactile feel of the skin based on the renders (best I can remember seeing). The story is different from the usual incest storyline, and has a "realistic" quality to it (more so than most games). I don't know how I feel about the dialogue/text... something feels slightly off, but I'm not sure what. Either way, the rest makes up for it imo.

I played through the whole game in about an hour. The renders were good looking,but they tend to come at you without rhyme or reason, you don't really get any sense of "accomplishment" or story arc.

The game has an artistic way of presenting itself, there's some unique charm because of that. You can really tell it's a quality product. But unfortunately, the developer spends more time on this "artistic" aspect than on trying to captivate your imagination with the story (which is bland and meandering).

You'll be skipping the text wholesale after the first 15 min too, because it's nonsensical: the characters in the game all share the same way of talking and thinking, namely they're all the dev. Even though he is not a bad writer, and is actually quite artistic at it, the fact that the women are all the same, nobody has any original thought. Clicking skip to get the next render till it's over.

A very empty experience that promised a lot with the visuals at first, but doesn't really deliver anything exciting or memorable.

The story is good, and the women are beautiful. I have noticed a few glitches along the way. nothing major. On some of the sketches they are written in Russian, but go back to English pretty fast. So far its an in depth story. I look forward to the next update. Keep up the good work

Edit : Originaly i gave this game 4/5 3 years ago with the recommendation to help dev of this game. Now however in 2023 i can't really recommend it. First of all i do remember character models of this game and they all look nice. Regarding the story it's quite generic and nothing special. There are some interesting mini games and one sex scene if i'm not mistaken. Note that this game is from 2017 or '18, again if i'm not mistaken and the first update this game received was in 2020. Dev of this game doesn't really care, they're lazy and milk their supporters. Don't expect anything from this game or dev, if you didn't play it you aren't missing anything and please stay out of this game, don't support the developer(s).

The story and the visuals are great, it's good to have an incest story where it's the mother corrupting the Son for once and not the other way around.

However this game is seriously let down by the mini-games. They're too fiddly and the timeframe for completion is way too short meaning you get frustrated and skip them. Which is a shame because they provide useful backstory and some of the incest.

The graphic part of the game is excellent, congratulations! I also liked the story.

I also liked the part of the memory fragments in relation to having the notebook, but I hated having to keep connecting dots, the contact area to activate the dots is very small and the time counts very fast, the developer should have chosen a different way unlocking the galleries!

Great renders, music plays nicely in the background, plenty of hot scenes and some promising story branching. The mini-games are ok. Only thing that annoyed me was too long spam left-click to fill the meter up.

The best thing about it though is the setup with the mother. The way their relationship in the past is built up will allow the game to jump into things in the present day quickly and hopefully feel more realistic. Makes it stand out compared to other games.

I hope their are more updates because this game has great potential. I'm a lurker and this game made me bother to write this review so I can't really say anything more positive than that.

This has huge potential. Really good renders and story, especially the sketchbook memories. One of the hottest, if not the hottest mom-son incest game out there. Wish there were more shota games like this

This is a great game. Story is kind of blury with flashbacks and events we don't know yet about protagonists. Social media chat is a fun element to the story. Render is top class especially zoomed camera angles looks realy beautiful. Lewd scene animations are not smoot but they are ok. Girls are hot and theres something fresh about writing style and girls attitude.

"There is no one who loves pain itself, who seeks after it and wants to have it, simply because it is pain..."

I really enjoyed the overarching plot and twists in this game, as it encompasses all the classic elements of a good story. Although the standalone routes weren’t by any means remarkable, they were great at building suspense and a sense of urgency to figure out the pieces of the puzzle in order to solve the mystery. The universe of this games grows increasingly more complex and interesting the further you delve into the storyline. This demonstrates solid world-building and good storyline pacing by the writers.

Version: 0.2

The game looks great up until now!
Not that much content but the story started nicely.
Also the renders are stunning and making the characters come to life and pleasing to looking at.

Looking forward for more content.

First time reviewing a game, but even with the little content out there on an unofficial android port, this game has all the makings of an uber tier masterpiece
The renders and visual style are Beautiful
The writing is well thought, never tripping over its own imposed limits, and choices actually matter.

Honestly I'm not a fan of the way the story is delivered. It's like Westerworld in the sense that a sense of mystery is being fabricated through a fragmented delivery of the story.

HOWEVER! I think the art is fucking beautiful and I think the characters have potential. We've introduced several characters and what I presume are potential love interests, and the choices you make clearly impact the way the story unfolds (big, big fan player choice actually mattering)!

I think the story, when it's finally told, is going to be very good. I just wish it was delivered a little more directly. Occasionally I felt like I was making choices based on information the character knows but that I as a player don't. Still, I have enough faith that this game is going places that I'm giving it five stars!

Lots of potential and I will definitely continue to follow this one as it develops.

As you may have noticed, this game looks very, very impressive. And I'm not even a fan this games with 3d-renders at all. Unfortunately, at that game's pros pretty much ends up. The writing is just bland and not quite engaging. It's not bad but simply not good enough to be that driving grapping force coupled with the looks.

Besides, so far there's next to no "action" and too few locations. It's understandable that's due to difficult production process but since I cannot give rates for potential value, I will probably just revisit my review much later to check the progress.

The writing and worldbuilding is a mess. The dialogue is stilted and fails to capture any personality of the characters so far. Characters are introduced one after another without any chance to get a sense of who they are. The MC is supposed to be an up and coming fine artist who bought a house with recent sales of his paintings. The developer obviously did zero research into the fine art business or art theory for that matter. The house that the MC bought for himself is too sterile, too white, and looks like a location for a porn shoot. I have several friends who are working artists, and their places look nothing like the MC's house. The MC is not believable as a professional fine artist. He's a fucking dude bro. Dude bros do not become hot shit fine artists at 21-ish. The MC is also boring and unlikeable. He talks about money out loud in front of everyone like a dickweed and never thinks before acting. I like the idea of playing an MC that is a fine artist, but this ain't it.

This game falls into a lot of games I've encountered recently, and that is developers who don't take the proper time to research the themes, ideas, and subjects of the world they're trying portray.

Love the side characters on this one!

The environments look nice (if a little massive and spacious at times) and the renders look great (except for some noise on shadows and darker areas).

I like mostly everything, except for the main character, and his buddy lmao. Some of the things they say feel kinda forced and out of nowhere. Main is also maybe too much of a broski dudeman to be in this kind of buisiness, but what do I know.

a new but very promising game
the models are awesome and choices with the possibility to really affect the incoming history is a good plus.
it's a bit bat but i want to know a bit more about MC past
for now it is not known much of what the ex really did to our protagonist, to the point that it affected him so much, they give you clues but nothing too concrete