Ren'Py Abandoned Coming Back Home [v1.1.2] [Hidden Life Studios]

[Larry2000]

Hidden Life Studios Suggestion: Add a dev notes section, where you clarify future tags, and whether or not certain polarising niche tags will be in it or not NTR, Sharing/Swinging, MMMMF etc.. (tags commonly hated by the majority of incest lovers).

Which will achieve 2 things: 1. people will know what kind of game this is. 2. You won't have people asking in the thread.....
Okay if you say you won't have x genre, people who like it will still probably ask... because people like to be annoying like that.

Edit: clarifying future tags can create anticipation for what is to come.

Everyone knows it's the dreaded MMMMF tag everyone hates. But I'm sure most are alright with the lighter MMMF tag, or the baby-rated MMF tag.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

I don't want to be a pain in the ass, but in English, we say "back home", not "back to home"...

I know. Sadly there is already a game called "Back Home" and I couldn't think a better title.
Anyway, is correct saying "I am going back to home". A bit archaic, but correct.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

Needs a little bit of help when it comes to the English, grammar is the biggest painpoint. That said I'll keep an eye on this one, definitely has potential judging by the render quality.

The render quality is the last thing I am happy with, after the grammar.
I am still a newbie with Daz, so, while I learn how to use it, the render quality will improve.
The English is another knife in my heart, I know. English is not my native language and, despite I will improve, I am already thinking to assume someone dedicated to fix the errors.
Anyway, if you want to report some errors, you can do it in the discord.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

you may want to move to subscribestar from patreon

May I'll think about it. Why?

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

Both afaik are grammatically correct. Although "Back to my home." would work better, with "Back home" probably being best, but I believe there is already a game with a never very similar to that. If not exactly that.

Yes. Sadly, there is already a game with exactly that name.
Eventually I'll change the title if I come with a better solution.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

Interesting premise. There's a lot of grammatical errors in the dialogue. All that it would need is a pass through something like grammarly to be good.

Sorry for the errors. I am not a native english speaker. If you want to report the errors, you can do it in the discord.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

"Do you want to skip the intro?"
"Sure"
"And that's it for the demo!"
You motherfu-

Also I don't even know why you're trying to use Patreon, they're going to nuke your page the moment they notice, and you aren't being even remotely subtle.

Ahahha, sorry.
I am already working on the first chapter.

I am using patreon only beacuse I am familiar with it. Eventually I'll move to something else.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

I guess the previews are from the intro, and it's a flashback? The MC will be 18, so who are the ones that warrant the loli tag? Is the father active on the (I guess) sisters? In the banner the sisters are not lolis

Yes. In this relase there is only the intro. In the future I will swap the previews with some better content from the other chapters.

The MC is 21, in theory. The father no one knows where he is. The sisters are with a young body, like young teens.
I wouldn't mind to add some lolier content to the game, but I don't want to be banned from F95zone like at the first relase, so, for now I am testing the ground.
Anyway, if you try to put an age under 18 to the sisters, in the character custiomization, you can automatically get the age their body suggests they are, in my opinion, obv.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

"Back to home" is most definitely grammatically incorrect in my books. It would need a possessive preceding "home" to be allowed. ie: "back to my home", as you suggested.

I know. I will change the title when I come with a better solution.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

Could be interesting, if it is longer. But this is too short to judge about it.

This is only the demo. The first chapter is arleady under developing.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

So the 21 renders are the preview pictures ?

Yep, are only the intro.
If you think about it, 21 renders for a VN-like game are very, very few.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

Honestly, it's too short to judge this game. In my opinion, it would be better to create the first update (chapter 1 or something) and then release the game.

The intro itself, which takes only 1/2 minutes... (and you can skip it) and that's it?

But I am waiting for future updates. I like games where MC comes back home after some time.

I know is short. Anyway, I am already on the first chapter that will be much longer.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

What intrigued me was the lolis sad to admit but yes I'm a loli person but I keep it online hentai game or just plain loli porn games honest ik what happens when our ppl are discovered in the real world and it ain't pretty

I know. Me too. Sadly, but logically, loli content is stigmatized even when the lolis are digital and far from the reality.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

No offense, but who in their right mind reviewed when you barely got pictures with some word, at least wait for the proper first release.

The proper first relase is already on its way.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

Character designs look good but you should do something about the noise in the images. Assuming that you are using a Nvidia GPU, I'd suggest using the denoiser in the render settings pane. I use a 1080ti and I have no issues whatsoever with that. The denoiser doesn't really add to render times much at all either. Nice work aside from that though.

I own an RTX 2060. I noticed too the noise and I am already working on it.
I used DAZ only for a little more than a month for now, so, is normal that I can improve in what I am doing.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

that is not v0.1

What do you mean?

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

Android port please?

I will think about it.

 

[Hidden Life Studios]

Hidden Life Studios Suggestion: Add a dev notes section, where you clarify future tags, and whether or not certain polarising niche tags will be in it or not NTR, Sharing/Swinging, MMMMF etc.. (tags commonly hated by the majority of incest lovers).

Which will achieve 2 things: 1. people will know what kind of game this is. 2. You won't have people asking in the thread.....
Okay if you say you won't have x genre, people who like it will still probably ask... because people like to be annoying like that.

Edit: clarifying future tags can create anticipation for what is to come.

Thank you for you idea, I will do this rn.

 

[Tarakis]

I can hear it now, "Bombs Away!!" being said by Patreon. LOL!!

CHEERS (c)

 

[Larry2000]

I know. Sadly there is already a game called "Back Home" and I couldn't think a better title.
Anyway, is correct saying "I am going back to home". A bit archaic, but correct.

Hmm... Let me see what I can think of off the top of my head
Back to the Start
Where you Belong
Coming Back Home
The March Home
A Fresh Start
Weenie Hut Home
Back to Bang My Sisters, Mom and Find out the Mystery of my Absent Father

Feel free to use any of the above Titles