- Jan 16, 2022
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Really solid start. Really enjoyed the game.
Here are a few suggestions:
1. (COMBAT) For the combat for dominance, perhaps introducing a bit of RNG element to it can make it fun. Instead of just plain stats comparison... You can have Multiplier*RNG.
a. Multiplier is harder to train, you start with 0, for 1, you only train once; for 3, you need to train 3 times, by the time it gets to 7, it'll take a whole week, but it's worth it because there is no risk.
b. RNG is easier to train, you start with (1-10), that's a random number between 1 to 10. You train once, you get (1-13), you train again, you get (1-16), etc etc.
In conclusion, in the beginning, it is 0*(1-10), but soon, it'll be 5*(1-19) That allows freak accidents to happen, but the stronger one will probably win.
2. (ACTION CHOICES) perhaps the protagonist and the father can take the same approach. They can both work, harass, or do nice things to make someone like them. The protagonist can harass the women, again with the dominance combat mechanic, you beat a certain number, you get to uh, do what you want. You lose to that number however, you lose dominance and favours with that person. Perhaps the father character is unique because he never does nice things, but he doesn't lose dominance when he loses to the women, because he has a "Creep" or "Beserk" tag under his character description. By the same token, the father can also get a job.
3. (NTR IDEA) perhaps you can meet someone from outside the house, you do nice things for them. You bring them back to the house. If your dominance is low, maybe she will be stolen away pretty quick.
4. (Normal actions) I think it'll be implemented soon anyway, but I thought the father would move back to the master bedroom if he is dominant enough.
5. Chastity and all that shit.
Here are a few suggestions:
1. (COMBAT) For the combat for dominance, perhaps introducing a bit of RNG element to it can make it fun. Instead of just plain stats comparison... You can have Multiplier*RNG.
a. Multiplier is harder to train, you start with 0, for 1, you only train once; for 3, you need to train 3 times, by the time it gets to 7, it'll take a whole week, but it's worth it because there is no risk.
b. RNG is easier to train, you start with (1-10), that's a random number between 1 to 10. You train once, you get (1-13), you train again, you get (1-16), etc etc.
In conclusion, in the beginning, it is 0*(1-10), but soon, it'll be 5*(1-19) That allows freak accidents to happen, but the stronger one will probably win.
2. (ACTION CHOICES) perhaps the protagonist and the father can take the same approach. They can both work, harass, or do nice things to make someone like them. The protagonist can harass the women, again with the dominance combat mechanic, you beat a certain number, you get to uh, do what you want. You lose to that number however, you lose dominance and favours with that person. Perhaps the father character is unique because he never does nice things, but he doesn't lose dominance when he loses to the women, because he has a "Creep" or "Beserk" tag under his character description. By the same token, the father can also get a job.
3. (NTR IDEA) perhaps you can meet someone from outside the house, you do nice things for them. You bring them back to the house. If your dominance is low, maybe she will be stolen away pretty quick.
4. (Normal actions) I think it'll be implemented soon anyway, but I thought the father would move back to the master bedroom if he is dominant enough.
5. Chastity and all that shit.
Hello.
The samples and summary made me come. And the result is very difficult.
The worldbuilding is limited but fitting.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is interesting, as well the global situation as the protagonist's life.
The photos/videos are well chosen.
After a world change, the mc is forced to survive while protecting his loved ones from outside and inside.
I tried the 3 possibilities the game offer (staying at home to protect my family, going to work and exploring the surroundings) and father's conditions are degrading too quickly for me to prevent the worst.
The characters are fine. I was even expecting father to be more awful than this.
The events are varied and well thought, though too fast paced.
The sex scenes are well selected, though all I could see was the forced ones (yeah I focused on love instead of sex).
I read that you want to delete the computer since you find it useless but you could add porn to calm down father, add an option to buy things without leaving the house, some online work less profitable but more flexible, some surveillance camera to intervene more rapidly, some microphones to hear family's member thoughts, lock the doors... Well, those are just some ideas you can integrate if you see they can fit, with adjustments of course.
This game needs a better balance (4 days to lose everything is too short). Otherwise, it seems it could become nice.
Good continuation.
The samples and summary made me come. And the result is very difficult.
The worldbuilding is limited but fitting.
The characters are few and different.
The plot is interesting, as well the global situation as the protagonist's life.
The photos/videos are well chosen.
After a world change, the mc is forced to survive while protecting his loved ones from outside and inside.
I tried the 3 possibilities the game offer (staying at home to protect my family, going to work and exploring the surroundings) and father's conditions are degrading too quickly for me to prevent the worst.
The characters are fine. I was even expecting father to be more awful than this.
The events are varied and well thought, though too fast paced.
The sex scenes are well selected, though all I could see was the forced ones (yeah I focused on love instead of sex).
I read that you want to delete the computer since you find it useless but you could add porn to calm down father, add an option to buy things without leaving the house, some online work less profitable but more flexible, some surveillance camera to intervene more rapidly, some microphones to hear family's member thoughts, lock the doors... Well, those are just some ideas you can integrate if you see they can fit, with adjustments of course.
This game needs a better balance (4 days to lose everything is too short). Otherwise, it seems it could become nice.
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Good continuation.
- Apr 8, 2021
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- Jul 26, 2019
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Hi,
My general ideas to improve your game:
You know I would liked if there other places to visit, after you found wasteland exit: like lake, forest, city, junkyard, farmland, or valley
Lake: fish, new people, materials,
Forest: herbs, hunted food, gathered food, encounter wild animals
city: scavengers, food, medicine, supplies, power tools,
junkyard: skeleton cars, tires, engines, wheelbarrows, trucks, batteries,
farmland: crop seeds, crops unpicked, livestock roaming around,
valley: ???
One thing I noticed should fixed: if you have get to sex option any of characters hit relation tab no actions you did with them has been "ever" recorded.
Stepsister demeanor never changes?
Is there way to drop dad character off to wasteland and leave him if he becomes a problem?
To me he wants to rape people and becoming issue. I had no desire to anything but energy usage is issue.
Dad seems to have bigger problem like purpose.
Maybe sending him out do thing, like errands? Might help.
Your step sister and step mother do nothing seems kind of weird?
They only make one meal a day is kind of stupid. Breakfast, and you ration for next meal.
Gear should come into mind what is MC using outside when he goes explore world?
I thought of this lot why can't Player and sister work together explore?
Upgrading base camp should be thing = I see potential for basement be spot for something greater they could even upgrade and add fortifications in backyard.
But seems there is little thought. Like upgrade bathroom into communal shower?
Other is probably make bigger use for basement beside exercise room and water collection probably expand on it.
there no cream-pies? or internal cum-shots what is going on with that. I would liked step sister and step mom pregnant already.
I think for PC, if player crafting menu: food, herbal, items and structure it be well diverse.
Crafting a bag, and making use of new means carry water with him and collecting plant life and growing in garden would be crucial to survive end of world scenarios.
Transportation means what is player using travel besides walking.(tires a person out)
Will in some event be able to do impregnate will he be do to new women?
Love ratio seems odd? Why not just call it Trust. Love should lowered just smidge to 35, Trust is different tomato, Trust makes sense for Prude behavior.
Horny women trust vanishes and all require is cum lust rising its not what people think but truth. Lot women who get horny think about Penis image handjob stick in their mind.
My general ideas to improve your game:
You know I would liked if there other places to visit, after you found wasteland exit: like lake, forest, city, junkyard, farmland, or valley
Lake: fish, new people, materials,
Forest: herbs, hunted food, gathered food, encounter wild animals
city: scavengers, food, medicine, supplies, power tools,
junkyard: skeleton cars, tires, engines, wheelbarrows, trucks, batteries,
farmland: crop seeds, crops unpicked, livestock roaming around,
valley: ???
One thing I noticed should fixed: if you have get to sex option any of characters hit relation tab no actions you did with them has been "ever" recorded.
Stepsister demeanor never changes?
Is there way to drop dad character off to wasteland and leave him if he becomes a problem?
To me he wants to rape people and becoming issue. I had no desire to anything but energy usage is issue.
Dad seems to have bigger problem like purpose.
Maybe sending him out do thing, like errands? Might help.
Your step sister and step mother do nothing seems kind of weird?
They only make one meal a day is kind of stupid. Breakfast, and you ration for next meal.
Gear should come into mind what is MC using outside when he goes explore world?
I thought of this lot why can't Player and sister work together explore?
Upgrading base camp should be thing = I see potential for basement be spot for something greater they could even upgrade and add fortifications in backyard.
But seems there is little thought. Like upgrade bathroom into communal shower?
Other is probably make bigger use for basement beside exercise room and water collection probably expand on it.
there no cream-pies? or internal cum-shots what is going on with that. I would liked step sister and step mom pregnant already.
I think for PC, if player crafting menu: food, herbal, items and structure it be well diverse.
Crafting a bag, and making use of new means carry water with him and collecting plant life and growing in garden would be crucial to survive end of world scenarios.
Transportation means what is player using travel besides walking.(tires a person out)
Will in some event be able to do impregnate will he be do to new women?
Love ratio seems odd? Why not just call it Trust. Love should lowered just smidge to 35, Trust is different tomato, Trust makes sense for Prude behavior.
Horny women trust vanishes and all require is cum lust rising its not what people think but truth. Lot women who get horny think about Penis image handjob stick in their mind.
- Jul 6, 2021
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The father is nothing but a nuisance in an otherwise perfectly fine game. The last thing I want to think about when trying to fuck my mom and sister is having some fat, sweaty, hairy, greasy dad bod trying to step in the way and cuck me from that. It's not even good ntr, how could you really call it that when it's all family. I just wish there was an option to get rid of the dad forever.
- Feb 13, 2022
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And why did the author mention the event with the fall of the meteorite and zombies? Are there going to be science fiction elements going forward, like using meteorite effects on characters?
- Mar 27, 2018
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No, that would be too much already. I don't have the necessary knowledge, and besides, I don't think the game needs that in the first place. My dream's limit is to create a simple turn-based RPG battle system with zombies and resource gathering (even then, I'm not sure anymore if this game engine will allow me to do it the way I'm thinking). And thanks for the positive feedback
And to avoid writing a separate post, I also want to say thanks to everyone who leaves comments with suggestions about what they'd like to see in this game or what should be improved. Unfortunately, I don't have a lot of time to reply to each message, but I read absolutely all comments, and if I like an idea, I jot it down. And you've already thrown out a lot of great ideas.
- Feb 19, 2020
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Hi. I am very impressed with your game and especially with its concept.
And I agree 100% with your point about NTR, that it is good when it can be avoided. It is the feeling of combat that is particularly good in NTR.
And given the cons, I would have liked a bit more content. Not just in terms of variety of events (though that too). Specifically in terms of the number of pictures per event. As an example, I'll give sex with my sister at night. Just one picture, and given that this event doesn't carry a numerical change, it's already boring the third time through.
Ideally use something like (this is for sugar)
[img[String.format('img/raznoe/JPG (' + random(1, 5) + ').jpg')]]]
That is, it will randomly use 1 of 5 images with the same name ( JPG (1).jpg, JPG (2).jpg, JPG (3).jpg, JPG (4).jpg, JPG (5). ).jpg )
This would bring more variety to a single event.
I would also add +1 to the force for this job. This would at least allow the strength to stay at the same level. It would also sound more logical.
Other than that, everything else is interesting. I played all night last night.
And I agree 100% with your point about NTR, that it is good when it can be avoided. It is the feeling of combat that is particularly good in NTR.
And given the cons, I would have liked a bit more content. Not just in terms of variety of events (though that too). Specifically in terms of the number of pictures per event. As an example, I'll give sex with my sister at night. Just one picture, and given that this event doesn't carry a numerical change, it's already boring the third time through.
Ideally use something like (this is for sugar)
[img[String.format('img/raznoe/JPG (' + random(1, 5) + ').jpg')]]]
That is, it will randomly use 1 of 5 images with the same name ( JPG (1).jpg, JPG (2).jpg, JPG (3).jpg, JPG (4).jpg, JPG (5). ).jpg )
This would bring more variety to a single event.
I would also add +1 to the force for this job. This would at least allow the strength to stay at the same level. It would also sound more logical.
Other than that, everything else is interesting. I played all night last night.
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The game has good ideas but balance is fucked up. Father keep going stronger while my strenght decrese by 2 or 3 every night ... After a few days it's MANDATORY to exercise and so you don't have enough time to work or interact with girls ...
- Apr 24, 2021
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Hey dudes this is my 1st/2nd html game, do you guys know any more with similar themes? ntr/blackmail/coercion maybe landlords/teachers/ugly bastards as bonus?
how do you get that first sister scene? those 2 first pics are probably the only scenes i haven't seen
For turn based RPG and resource management, take a peek at how Battle Quest did it for one example.No, that would be too much already. I don't have the necessary knowledge, and besides, I don't think the game needs that in the first place. My dream's limit is to create a simple turn-based RPG battle system with zombies and resource gathering (even then, I'm not sure anymore if this game engine will allow me to do it the way I'm thinking). And thanks for the positive feedback
And to avoid writing a separate post, I also want to say thanks to everyone who leaves comments with suggestions about what they'd like to see in this game or what should be improved. Unfortunately, I don't have a lot of time to reply to each message, but I read absolutely all comments, and if I like an idea, I jot it down. And you've already thrown out a lot of great ideas.
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images/locations/Corridor.jpg, image in folder is images/locations/corridor.jpg.Is this game a slow road to an unavoidable defeat? Every night I lose 2 or 3 strength and I need to exercise to fight with the father but...if I exercise he molests the girls anyway so I lose. When I exercise the text tells I've gained 4 strength for example, but my Strength stat on the left side it adds only 2...is this normal?
good start.. a few things i have noticed that need sorting
1. your sister can be having sex...alot and her virginity doesnt seem to be broken unless with father outside event thing happens...
2. the count of how many tiimes in the relations tab doesnt seem to work
3. i have come across 1 error so far in the kitchen after the loss of virginity event
Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: sister_virgin is not defined
you get that then an eat breakfast thing underneath.
3b. lol found 1 more bug when you ask your sister about yourself you get
Error: child tag <<else>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>
twice between the last piece of text.
4. you need to slow down the progression.. i mean more groping event then a slow progression to the main event.. this is an important one because we need to feel like we have a chance of fixing a problem (if we wish to...lol) before you go from rubbing the sisters butt to her getting pounded at the breakfast table...lol
5. also the $ before the mother and sister love labels needs removing..
6. Later maybe think about adding some others people.
other than these its a good start to a game.. I will say one last thing keep you eye on the size of the game.. these types can easily gain like 1gb+ per update, if thats the case maybe look at compression or seeing if all animations are necessary for the vision you are trying to portray..
1. your sister can be having sex...alot and her virginity doesnt seem to be broken unless with father outside event thing happens...
2. the count of how many tiimes in the relations tab doesnt seem to work
3. i have come across 1 error so far in the kitchen after the loss of virginity event
Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: sister_virgin is not defined
you get that then an eat breakfast thing underneath.
3b. lol found 1 more bug when you ask your sister about yourself you get
Error: child tag <<else>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>
twice between the last piece of text.
4. you need to slow down the progression.. i mean more groping event then a slow progression to the main event.. this is an important one because we need to feel like we have a chance of fixing a problem (if we wish to...lol) before you go from rubbing the sisters butt to her getting pounded at the breakfast table...lol
5. also the $ before the mother and sister love labels needs removing..
6. Later maybe think about adding some others people.
other than these its a good start to a game.. I will say one last thing keep you eye on the size of the game.. these types can easily gain like 1gb+ per update, if thats the case maybe look at compression or seeing if all animations are necessary for the vision you are trying to portray..
Does the Mc not get to harass or sexually assault people in the game? If so the dad seems like a much more fun character to play.