RPGM Completed Confession Game [v1.0.1] [Hall of Corruption]

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sirviper235 said:
Alright been working on the tranlsation with a freind. should be ready soon to be shared. Had some bugs.
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Good luck with that, hopefully you'll be able to transfer the translation to the final game.

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But mild feedback if you can offer any of this to the developer at all or simply reshare it to a japanesne fan locaiton so the devcould maybe see it.
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The developer is a pretty chill guy and he always respond to the feedback from his fans so I'm sure he'll consider any note that you gave him, so about the feedback:
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the Blue chapter/part 2 in the forest is like 10 times better than the red/school one. Beaucse there is actual temptation going on there. In the first one the red oni is just a monster hunting/chasing you. There's no real temptation or moments of seduction like in the second of which there are plenty back to back making it much more interesting and fun and playing to the devs strengths.

The first chapter/red one needs some more work/stuff added in my opinon. Just playing it i already had a few ideas/moments i expected but didn't happen.

I can post here if simply interested or if you haveany means to send feedback or the like.

But just giving an update.
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I'm totally on you with the a lot of things about the red oni chapter, she's just a mindless monster who only see the protagonist as a bag of chips that's she'll casually toss away after it's empty, while I think at the blue oni has the same impression of the protagonist she has some personality to her so I guess that counts, also from the gameplay perspective, chapter 2 completely demolish the first one with gameplay elements including the boss fight, but I'd also love to give chapter 1 a credit for what it is, and it's a pretty good introduction for the game, the atmosphere is pretty good and the horror elements was done perfectly and the red oni was a perfect fit for it, I mean... what's better to feed your horror elements than gaint red monster who's chasing you throughout the school in the middle of night after she just killed you classmate? The developer made a poll for the horror elements asking if it was right amount and the majority said it was the right amount while the second place wanted more horror elements and the minority said they wanted less horror, so i think most people are happy with his decision here. About the boss fight sure the it wasn't as good as the second one but it was still pretty good for a first boss you don't need to throw a lot in the first round while the player still learning about the gameplay.
And we're still got 3 oni girls left if I'm not mistaken: the yellow one, the black one and the purple one so there's still a lot to look forward to.

Speaking of the yellow oni...
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Maybe I'm over thinking but...

Oh and this is the black oni:
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By far the best oni design out of all.
 
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Neo-V said:
Good luck with that, hopefully you'll be able to transfer the translation to the final game.


The developer is a pretty chill guy and he always respond to the feedback from his fans so I'm sure he'll consider any note that you gave him, so about the feedback:

I'm totally on you with the a lot of things about the red oni chapter, she's just a mindless monster who only see the protagonist as a bag of chips that's she'll casually toss away after it's empty, while I think at the blue oni has the same impression of the protagonist she has some personality to her so I guess that counts, also from the gameplay perspective, chapter 2 completely demolish the first one with gameplay elements including the boss fight, but I'd also love to give chapter 1 a credit for what it is, and it's a pretty good introduction for the game, the atmosphere is pretty good and the horror elements was done perfectly and the red oni was a perfect fit for it, I mean... what's better to feed your horror elements than gaint red monster who's chasing you throughout the school in the middle of night after she just killed you classmate? The developer made a poll for the horror elements asking if it was right amount and the majority said it was the right amount while the second place wanted more horror elements and the minority said they wanted less horror, so i think most people are happy with his decision here. About the boss fight sure the it wasn't as good as the second one but it was still pretty good for a first boss you don't need to throw a lot in the first round while the player still learning about the gameplay.
And we're still got 3 oni girls left if I'm not mistaken: the yellow one, the black one and the purple one so there's still a lot to look forward to.

Speaking of the yellow oni...
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Maybe I'm over thinking but...

Oh and this is the black oni:
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By far the best oni design out of all.
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If all goes well hopefully yes. It will be translated over.

To the second Huh good to know about the developer.

To the third with the red oni. Oh yeah fully agreed on the atosphere being good and acutally leaning well into the horror. I think it IS well balanced. It's just the lewd side of things is much better balanced in the forest. PLus the gameplay/boss fight is indeed MUCH more interesting and fun to play around with. Plus the Blue ones persoanlity does add to it quite a bit.I suppuse im in the minority then, but i think the blue ones section proves how much potential even the red ones has.

Honeslty i wouldn't be surprised if she IS an Oni. You can tell how evil/bad a giirl is meant to be in thedevelopers stories just based on her body. The bigger the breasts and more sexually appealing she looks, the more evil/vile she is. If she's flalt and cute looking she's a love interest.

ALso ima just drop my own little theory from the translation.

See image.

The protongists mom was/is an Oni herself. Hence where his strength/ability to fight them comes from. I mean just look at her. Her eyes are a dead giveaway. And his mom is probibly that groteusqe looking one that chases us at the start. We know she died but really she probibly got kidnapped or ressurected back in some way that made her messed up. Everyting kinda fits with that.

Would you like to hear/read my ideas to spice up chapter 1? It's mainly 2 scene ideas i think would fit within it without losing or messing with the tone of it.
 
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Neo-V said:
Good luck with that, hopefully you'll be able to transfer the translation to the final game.


The developer is a pretty chill guy and he always respond to the feedback from his fans so I'm sure he'll consider any note that you gave him, so about the feedback:

I'm totally on you with the a lot of things about the red oni chapter, she's just a mindless monster who only see the protagonist as a bag of chips that's she'll casually toss away after it's empty, while I think at the blue oni has the same impression of the protagonist she has some personality to her so I guess that counts, also from the gameplay perspective, chapter 2 completely demolish the first one with gameplay elements including the boss fight, but I'd also love to give chapter 1 a credit for what it is, and it's a pretty good introduction for the game, the atmosphere is pretty good and the horror elements was done perfectly and the red oni was a perfect fit for it, I mean... what's better to feed your horror elements than gaint red monster who's chasing you throughout the school in the middle of night after she just killed you classmate? The developer made a poll for the horror elements asking if it was right amount and the majority said it was the right amount while the second place wanted more horror elements and the minority said they wanted less horror, so i think most people are happy with his decision here. About the boss fight sure the it wasn't as good as the second one but it was still pretty good for a first boss you don't need to throw a lot in the first round while the player still learning about the gameplay.
And we're still got 3 oni girls left if I'm not mistaken: the yellow one, the black one and the purple one so there's still a lot to look forward to.

Speaking of the yellow oni...
View attachment 3959672
Maybe I'm over thinking but...

Oh and this is the black oni:
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By far the best oni design out of all.
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The first chapter lacks the "temptation" angle that makes the Forest Chapter enjoyable, so here are a few ideas:

1. Since the demon is a beast above all else, we should emphasize that more. There could be moments where she tries to lure the protagonist. So, why not have her lean forward into a doggly style position or pose, clearly presenting herself to the protagonist? Obviously, this would be a trap of pleasure that leads to game over, stemming from self-destructive desire. This could happen between Phase 1 or 2 of the boss fight after the rooftop. Playing possum, after all, is a tactic common to some predators. Maybe it's even in regoncition of his strength a bit.

And 2. I don't see any reason why there couldn't be scenes with her in the bathrooms or classrooms during the first hiding spot, the stone mini-game, or the sequence where you're hiding in the nurse's office. We could have the choice to either watch, pull back with willpower, or avert our eyes. If you choose to watch, as in the Blue Chapter, there could be a second choice to either go to her and enter her willingly or get grabbed and pulled in when trying to escape. A second self-destructive option.

I think either of these ideas could work well in this chapter and add good spice or temptation. I understand this chapter is a horror piece, and I get that, but a significant appeal of this game and the creator is the temptation.

Let me know what you think.
 
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Noctis_ said:
Hope it's not a bother to ask, but how soon until you think the translation is ready for release? This game seems pretty nice and I'd love to understand what the characters are actually saying. Thanks for the hard work!
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here you go. patched up and translated version of the game to play with and enjoy.
 
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sirviper235 said:
The first chapter lacks the "temptation" angle that makes the Forest Chapter enjoyable, so here are a few ideas:

1. Since the demon is a beast above all else, we should emphasize that more. There could be moments where she tries to lure the protagonist. So, why not have her lean forward into a doggly style position or pose, clearly presenting herself to the protagonist? Obviously, this would be a trap of pleasure that leads to game over, stemming from self-destructive desire. This could happen between Phase 1 or 2 of the boss fight after the rooftop. Playing possum, after all, is a tactic common to some predators. Maybe it's even in regoncition of his strength a bit.

And 2. I don't see any reason why there couldn't be scenes with her in the bathrooms or classrooms during the first hiding spot, the stone mini-game, or the sequence where you're hiding in the nurse's office. We could have the choice to either watch, pull back with willpower, or avert our eyes. If you choose to watch, as in the Blue Chapter, there could be a second choice to either go to her and enter her willingly or get grabbed and pulled in when trying to escape. A second self-destructive option.

I think either of these ideas could work well in this chapter and add good spice or temptation. I understand this chapter is a horror piece, and I get that, but a significant appeal of this game and the creator is the temptation.

Let me know what you think.
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Sorry for the delay, I was kinda busy yesterday so I didn't respond, that and I also kinda lazed out :p
So anyway I'm gonna address your 2 points:
1- this one I completely disagree with, the red oni is the embodiment of "no brain, just brawn" she might have the libido for the sex and all but the question is: why would she need to lure the protagonist when she can simply overpower him with her massive strength? In the first place she can't even see him when he blends in the red objects, so technically it's completely useless to use the temptation as a weapon because she simply has no use for it, The blue oni uses this tactics because she could see protagonist when he tried to hide from her in the blue flowers and it plays as good scare factor knowing that she can see you when you thought oni cannot see you when you blend in the objects that matches their color.
2- this one I agree with you especially the nurse's office scene I almost have a stroke when I get out of the hiding and she appeared in front of me that scene was done pretty well but honestly after this happened the only thing she does is simply takes one of my life points and that's it it would be perfect if there was a special scene when she caught you hiding under the bed, then again I feel like the developer didn't want to give the red oni too many scenes because in all due honesty she's not a perfect h Material.
above all of things I'm quite disappointed in the oni so far for only having a "dying sex" scenes it would be far better if some oni girls decided not to kill the protagonist but rather take him as pet/servant or even as a husband :p thankfully the developer has confirmed that not all the oni girls will kill the protagonist (not confirmed what are they going to do with him though, but it's probably one of the theings I mentioned)
 
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Noctis_ said:
Any more news about the oni game?
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not a lot happened since the last update just some CGs and nothing more, at least there are no problems facing the developer and he's just working at his own pace since he uploaded about the progress yesterday and that's a relief.
anyway, here's a new reverse NTR game for anyone interested where 2 chocolate milk gyaru seduce the protagonist, the game does not end even if you succumb to the temptation, it will simply give you some sort of crest to serve as a reminder for your betrayal to your childhood sweetheart. I haven't finish the game yet but it's pretty good so far, the bad news is that it's an AI if that's a deal breaker for you, then I'm sorry.

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Neo-V said:
not a lot happened since the last update just some CGs and nothing more, at least there are no problems facing the developer and he's just working at his own pace since he uploaded about the progress yesterday and that's a relief.
anyway, here's a new reverse NTR game for anyone interested where 2 chocolate milk gyaru seduce the protagonist, the game does not end even if you succumb to the temptation, it will simply give you some sort of crest to serve as a reminder for your betrayal to your childhood sweetheart. I haven't finish the game yet but it's pretty good so far, the bad news is that it's an AI if that's a deal breaker for you, then I'm sorry.

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Having now played it and seen the whole story, as much as i love the tomboy Aoi, the way it ended for her made me sad.
She's written in a way to be a B to the MC, a tsundere for sure, but still a B. So from the start she was destroying any change she had with the protagonist and making mc run away from her. In the game it's hot, but it makes me put Shiori at number 1.
 
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do I still need to apply the epilogue fix and the translated image pack? or is it not necessary with the last version available here?
 
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